AAJ KAL KAHAN HOTE HO

by ARK333 on June 14, 2013, 04:21:51 PM
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Ab kis zulf-e-paresha'n k
Be daam aseer ho
Ab kis k gham mein shareek ho
Ab kis gali mein
Khirkeon se girti muzhamil roshni ko
Seene se lagaye phirte ho
Ab kis ki goud mein sar rakh kar
Haqiqato'n se moh chupate ho
Ab kin palkon ki chaao'n tumhe
Gardish-e-dora'n bachaye howe hai
Ab kis k makhmali hathon pe sitaare ginte ho
Ab kis badan ki akaas bail
Tjhe nagan ki tarha dasti hai
Meri jan
Tum apni khud azeyati mein magan ho
Magar meri tasalli k lea
Mujhe ye likh bhejo
Aaj kal tum kahan hote ho..?
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Bhupinder Kaur
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2013, 04:24:02 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2013, 04:25:27 PM »
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wah bahut umda aur pyara likha hai janaab, pehli baar padh raha hun aapko, umeed karta hun aage aapki kalam se aur bhi umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheNge... Likhte rahiye, shaad-o-aabaad rahiye...
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2013, 04:42:32 PM »
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i think  yeh aapki nazm nahi hy balk mere khyal men yeh nazm wassi shah ki hy ,..basically yeh ghazal hy
Hijar Mein Khoob Rulate Ho Kahan Hote Ho?

Laut Kr Kyun Nahi Aate ho Kahan Hote Ho?

MuJh Se Bichhre Ho To Mehbob_e_Nazar Ho Kis K?

Aaj Kal Kis Ko Manate Ho Kahan Hote Ho?

Shab Ki Tanhai Mein Aksar Ye Khayal Aata Ha,

Apnay Dukh Kis Ko Sunate Ho Kahan Hote Ho?

Tanha Raton Mein Tumhen Kese Bhula Saktay Hen,

Aag si Dil Mein Lagatey Ho Kahan Hote Ho?
 
Shehr K Log B Aksar Ye Sawal Kartay Hen,

Ab Boht Kam Nazar Aatey Ho Kahan Hote ‘H’o..!!
 
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2013, 05:34:22 PM »
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