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AAJ PAAS HAMAREY FIR WOHI TANHAYI HAI SAATH HAMAREY NA KOI PARCHAYI HAI DOOB RAHEY HAI HUM FIR UNHI ANDHERO MEH YEH RAAT KAISEY BHESS BADAL KEY AAYI HAI
DOOR REHKAR BHI WOH WAFA NIBHATEY HAI SAPNOH MEH WOH DODEY CHALEY AATEY HAI KHABAR NA AAJ UNSEY KOI AAYI HAI AAJ PAAS HAMAREY FIR WOHI TANHAYI HAI SAATH HAMAREY NA KOI PARCHAYI HAI
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2009, 06:53:10 PM » |
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Bohot khoob Jasbir Ji....kai din baad aap ko dekha yahan....yunhi likhte rahiyega...
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2009, 06:59:40 PM » |
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Bohot khoob Jasbir Ji....kai din baad aap ko dekha yahan....yunhi likhte rahiyega...
THANKS CELMIRA
AAJ BHI HUM YAHA SEY DOOR HI REHTEY DOST KEY SAATH MAJBOOR HI REHTEY BECHAIN JINDAGI MAJBOOR HO AAYI HAI AAJ PAAS HAMAREY FIR WOHI TANHAYI HAI SAATH HAMAREY NA KOI PARCHAYI HAI
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2009, 07:03:59 PM » |
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Bahut Khoob Jasbir Paaji.. tussi kitte tur gayi si paaji??
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2009, 07:06:30 PM » |
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Nice one again Jasbir Ji
Parchaayion ne kab saath nibhaya hai Andheron main khud ko tanha paya hai Badi lambi hai majbooriyon ki daastaan Jab dil ki duniya ho jaati hai veeraan
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2009, 07:15:10 PM » |
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Nice one again Jasbir Ji
Parchaayion ne kab saath nibhaya hai Andheron main khud ko tanha paya hai Badi lambi hai majbooriyon ki daastaan Jab dil ki duniya ho jaati hai veeraan
THANKS CELMIRA
APNA BANAKAR HAMEY GUMHRAAH KAR JATEY HAI BEECH SAMANDAR VIRAAN MEH CHODD AATEY HAI KU UNSEY PYAR KI HUMNEY HI KASAM KHAYI HAI AAJ PAAS HAMAREY FIR WOHI TANHAYI HAI SAATH HAMAREY NA KOI PARCHAYI HAI
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2009, 07:17:03 PM » |
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Bahut Khoob Jasbir Paaji.. tussi kitte tur gayi si paaji?? THANKS KHWAISH JI KOH LANEY GAYE THEY WADA KIA THA, NIBHANEY GAYE THEY AAJ WOH LOAT KAR JARUR AAYENGEY WADA WOH APNA JARUR NIBHAYENGEY JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2009, 07:21:13 PM » |
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Good one Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 31, 2009, 07:27:46 PM » |
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Good one Jasbir Ji
tHANKS RAJESH JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #9 on: January 31, 2009, 07:32:06 PM » |
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Akele rahoge to milengi tanhai Roshni mein saath degi parchai Diya jalakar door karo andhera Raat ke baad ayega phir sabera
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«Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 07:35:04 PM » |
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Akele rahoge to milengi tanhai Roshni mein saath degi parchai Diya jalakar door karo andhera Raat ke baad ayega phir sabera
WAH ISI AAS MEH HUM DIN GUJAAR RAHEY HAI ROSHNI KOH PANEY MEH RAAT KAAT RAHEY HAI INTEZAAR MEH BHI PARCHAYI NAZAR AAYI HAI AAJ PAAS HAMAREY FIR WOHI PARCHAYI HAI JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #11 on: January 31, 2009, 07:52:07 PM » |
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Thanx Jasbir Ji
Din ayega aur aa ke chala jayega Dil jala lo raat mein roshni mil jayegi Intezaar ke baad khusi ka lamha ayega Phir teri ye tanhai nahi rah jayegi
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«Reply #12 on: February 01, 2009, 06:52:09 AM » |
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bahaut khoob likha hai apne Jasbir jee,Celmira jee,Rajesh jee...bahaut hi khoob..
din ka intezar karne ke bajae raat main khushi dhundlo, uska intezar karne ke bajae koi sacha dildar dhundlo, shayad usse ehsaas nahin hai tere ghum ka mere dost, usse ehsaas dilane ke liye koi acha tarikha hi dhundlo...
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