Aaj Tez Barsaat Mein Phir Teri Yaad Aayi hai.....

by khwaish on March 23, 2008, 06:17:35 PM
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«Reply #45 on: April 29, 2008, 08:26:07 PM »
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Khwaish ji... app kahe aor hum na likhe...
bas ajkal study aor job per kaam jayada hone ki wajah se kuch khas likh nahi pa rahi hu..
ek koshish ki hai... shayad apko pasand ayye:

Judai ke naam per na jaane kaya kaya yaad ayya
barsati barsaat main, apni ankhio ka barsana yaad ayya
loot kar dil-o-chain le gaya, jo na lout kar anne wala
uska her ek ek sitam, na jaane kaise kaise yaad ayya

dil ke ander dehakati agg ko na bujha paai koi bhi barsaat
her barsaat ki boond ne, ek ek zakham ko phir se sulgaya
Judai ke naam per na jaane kaya kaya yaad ayya
barsati barsaat main, apni ankhio ka barsana yaad ayya....
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«Reply #46 on: April 30, 2008, 11:18:48 AM »
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Nice One Again Syed Ji,.
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Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
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«Reply #47 on: April 30, 2008, 11:22:21 AM »
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Barsaat Ke Aaalam Me Unki Yaad Bahoot Aaati Hai,.
Dahdakan Dheemi Ho Jaati Hai, Rooh Bada Tardpaati hai,.

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«Reply #48 on: April 30, 2008, 12:42:53 PM »
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shukari alil bro and good one!!
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«Reply #49 on: April 30, 2008, 05:41:57 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 29, 2008, 08:26:07 PM
Khwaish ji... app kahe aor hum na likhe...
bas ajkal study aor job per kaam jayada hone ki wajah se kuch khas likh nahi pa rahi hu..
ek koshish ki hai... shayad apko pasand ayye:

Judai ke naam per na jaane kaya kaya yaad ayya
barsati barsaat main, apni ankhio ka barsana yaad ayya
loot kar dil-o-chain le gaya, jo na lout kar anne wala
uska her ek ek sitam, na jaane kaise kaise yaad ayya

dil ke ander dehakati agg ko na bujha paai koi bhi barsaat
her barsaat ki boond ne, ek ek zakham ko phir se sulgaya
Judai ke naam per na jaane kaya kaya yaad ayya
barsati barsaat main, apni ankhio ka barsana yaad ayya....

bahut bahut shukriya pooja,aapne hamari baat rakhi..
aur sach mein bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Applause :clap:as usual!!!! Clapping Smiley


Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 30, 2008, 11:22:21 AM
Barsaat Ke Aaalam Me Unki Yaad Bahoot Aaati Hai,.
Dahdakan Dheemi Ho Jaati Hai, Rooh Bada Tardpaati hai,.

_________________________________-jaanasheen-
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nice lines azeem bro...
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«Reply #50 on: April 30, 2008, 05:49:39 PM »
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jaane yeh aajkal kya baat ho rahi hai!!
Lab hai khamosh par dil se baat ho rahi hai...

Suraj nikla hai apni roshni failaye hue har mod par
par jaane kyon yahan zor se barsaat ho rahi hai....

Jab bhi kuch kehna chaahta hoon to zubaan chup si ho jaati hai
kuch ajeeb si kashmakash se bhari Mulaakat ho rahi hai....

Jaane yeh Mohabbat ka khel kis tarah ka hai??
Jahan milni thi seh waha Maat ho rahi hai....

Judai ka gham sehna bahut mushkil ho gaya hai "KHWASH"
din dhal gaya hai, ab phir raat ho rahi hai....

Dil ki Zameen par ab koi Tapan to hogi,
Varna kyon Aansuo ki barsaat ho rahi hai.....
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«Reply #51 on: April 30, 2008, 05:56:24 PM »
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wow!! Too Good Khwaish ji!! jalad he kuch likhne ki koshish hogi
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«Reply #52 on: April 30, 2008, 09:41:30 PM »
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Kai baar apki poem ko parda hai.. kuch shuru kiya aor phir delete... shayad yah apko pasand ayye

Dil se dil ke baatein, aah bhari yah chandini ratein
Ahsaas hai uska kahin ander, aor yah tanhai ki sougatein

Bheerd bhara rasta bhi lage ab to mujhko sooona soona
Be-parwaah Ankhon se, waqat - be-waqat ansoo ki barsatein

Kabhi lub muskuraye aor phir cheekh kahin rah gai ander
Jab bhi yaad aaii, wo Teri-Meri, chup chup ke Mulakaatein

Juda raahein hui, juda bahein hue, juda hum ho gaye
Juda phir bhi na ho saki, wo Teri khatti-mithi baatein

Kalam ajj bhi tadap kar likhati he rahti hai, teri judai ka gum
Koi kavita, koi bhi shabd,  Pooja ko nahi hai, phir bhi sehla paatein!!!
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«Reply #53 on: May 01, 2008, 04:21:03 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2008, 05:56:24 PM
wow!! Too Good Khwaish ji!! jalad he kuch likhne ki koshish hogi

Bahut Bahut Shukriya pooja...
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«Reply #54 on: May 01, 2008, 04:23:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2008, 09:41:30 PM
Kai baar apki poem ko parda hai.. kuch shuru kiya aor phir delete... shayad yah apko pasand ayye

Dil se dil ke baatein, aah bhari yah chandini ratein
Ahsaas hai uska kahin ander, aor yah tanhai ki sougatein

Bheerd bhara rasta bhi lage ab to mujhko sooona soona
Be-parwaah Ankhon se, waqat - be-waqat ansoo ki barsatein

Kabhi lub muskuraye aor phir cheekh kahin rah gai ander
Jab bhi yaad aaii, wo Teri-Meri, chup chup ke Mulakaatein

Juda raahein hui, juda bahein hue, juda hum ho gaye
Juda phir bhi na ho saki, wo Teri khatti-mithi baatein

Kalam ajj bhi tadap kar likhati he rahti hai, teri judai ka gum
Koi kavita, koi bhi shabd,  Pooja ko nahi hai, phir bhi sehla paatein!!!


bahut bahut khoob..har ek line aapne bahut khoobsurti se likha hai..bahut ache.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #55 on: May 02, 2008, 05:38:20 PM »
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shukaria khwaish ji!!!
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«Reply #56 on: June 06, 2008, 11:33:10 AM »
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log kehte hai ki ab
"khwaish ko kuch bolna aata nahi!!!
kuch bhi pucho isse,
woh jawaab mein kuch keh paata nahi.. tongue3

Ab main nadaan, Duniya ko kya samjhau??
ke ishq mein insaan ko kuch bhaata nahi,

jahan nazar utha kar dekoon
har jagah, har ghadi, har pehar sirf woh hi woh nazar aate hai,
"khwaish" ko ab aur kuch to nazar aata nahi....

agar yeh deewanapan hai...
to deewanapan hi sahi!!!
par "khwaish" ek pal bhi bin unke jee pata nahi....

wah re mohabbat!! ajeeb si kashmakash mein hai yeh zindagi apni,
uski yaadon ke bina ek pal bhi main guzaar pata nahi....

sochta hoon,kaash judai ke yeh pal guzar jaaye ek hi pal mein,
par yeh waqt hai ki apne hisaab se daud paata nahi...

har ek khwaab mein, humsaath -saath hote hai,
par jab neend khulti hai,wahi purani zindagi,
haqeeqat mein,  main tujhse kyon mil paata nahi???
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«Reply #57 on: June 06, 2008, 02:33:17 PM »
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Khwaish ji apki yah kavita pard kar jo sabse pahla reaction hus wo yah hai  DOH

Just enjoy this time and write more  tongue3

A wonderful creation, good job  Clapping Smiley

Full of love  NaNaNa and pain 
agar yeh deewanapan hai...
to deewanapan hi sahi!!!
par "khwaish" ek pal bhi bin unke jee pata nahi.... Crying
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«Reply #58 on: June 06, 2008, 06:13:18 PM »
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SAb doston kamaal ki paishkash di hai, Kuchh ashaar to hairat angez hain buhat hi dil ko chhu lene waale...
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«Reply #59 on: June 06, 2008, 06:32:21 PM »
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bohot khoob khwaish..


kya jaane tujhmein ae sanam
kya hai woh aisi baat
ki kambakht sone bhi nahi deti
ye barsaat aur yeh raat..
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