Aaj Tez Barsaat Mein Phir Teri Yaad Aayi hai.....

by khwaish on March 23, 2008, 06:17:35 PM
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«Reply #60 on: June 07, 2008, 08:41:27 AM »
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Yun to tujh men bhi khaas theen, -
Baaten kai bhoole nahin hum ab bhi, -

Neend men khwaab ban kar sataati hain, -
Beete dinon ki haseen yaaden ab abhi. -


(Syed Naami)

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Wah, buhat umda kaha Sanya jee aapne...
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«Reply #61 on: June 07, 2008, 11:01:38 AM »
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bohot khoob syednami ji

yaaden unn raaton ki jo madhosh hua karti thi.n
jab dil ko pighla deti thi aapki har baat
aaj phir aayi hai chhidakne ko namak
yeh barsaat ki raat..lekar aapki yaad..


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«Reply #62 on: June 08, 2008, 06:22:17 PM »
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Sanya Saahiba aapne khoob kaha...

Woh vadiyon men haryali ke geet gana, -
Jheel ke kinare bethh kar teri tasveer banana, -
Barish pade to khidkyon se bundon ko churana, -
Thandi raaton men sardi se thhathhar jana, -
Yaad hai sab mujhe aur tum bhi naa bhulaana. -


(Syed Naami)
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #63 on: June 08, 2008, 06:33:53 PM »
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Bahoot accha likha he aapne sanya ji aur syednaami ji.
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«Reply #64 on: June 08, 2008, 06:38:35 PM »
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Prateek Mitr,,,

Aap ki haosla afzai ka mamnoon hun...
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«Reply #65 on: June 13, 2008, 08:28:37 PM »
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Khwaish ji apki yah kavita pard kar jo sabse pahla reaction hus wo yah hai  DOH

Just enjoy this time and write more  tongue3

A wonderful creation, good job  Clapping Smiley

Full of love  NaNaNa and pain 
agar yeh deewanapan hai...
to deewanapan hi sahi!!!
par "khwaish" ek pal bhi bin unke jee pata nahi.... Crying

shukriya mohatarma poojaji..aap bhi kuch aage likhte to maza aata..waiting for your post.. hello
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«Reply #66 on: June 13, 2008, 08:31:09 PM »
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bohot khoob khwaish..


kya jaane tujhmein ae sanam
kya hai woh aisi baat
ki kambakht sone bhi nahi deti
ye barsaat aur yeh raat..


bahut khoob sanya.. Applause
aur shukriya aapke hausle-afsaai ka..
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«Reply #67 on: June 13, 2008, 08:32:56 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai naami saab aapne..bahut ache. Applause
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«Reply #68 on: June 14, 2008, 08:18:48 PM »
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bahoot khoob khwaish...syednaami..... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #69 on: June 14, 2008, 09:17:18 PM »
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Shukriya Akela saahib... waise naam se bualyen to achha lage ga aapko...
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«Reply #70 on: June 15, 2008, 05:09:30 AM »
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log kehte hai ki ab
"khwaish ko kuch bolna aata nahi!!!
kuch bhi pucho isse,
woh jawaab mein kuch keh paata nahi.. tongue3

Ab main nadaan, Duniya ko kya samjhau??
ke ishq mein insaan ko kuch bhaata nahi,

jahan nazar utha kar dekoon
har jagah, har ghadi, har pehar sirf woh hi woh nazar aate hai,
"khwaish" ko ab aur kuch to nazar aata nahi....

agar yeh deewanapan hai...
to deewanapan hi sahi!!!
par "khwaish" ek pal bhi bin unke jee pata nahi....

wah re mohabbat!! ajeeb si kashmakash mein hai yeh zindagi apni,
uski yaadon ke bina ek pal bhi main guzaar pata nahi....

sochta hoon,kaash judai ke yeh pal guzar jaaye ek hi pal mein,
par yeh waqt hai ki apne hisaab se daud paata nahi...

har ek khwaab mein, humsaath -saath hote hai,
par jab neend khulti hai,wahi purani zindagi,
haqeeqat mein,  main tujhse kyon mil paata nahi???

waaaah bahut accha likha hai aapne khwaish jee
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«Reply #71 on: June 17, 2008, 06:30:52 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya sonia aur akela saab..
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«Reply #72 on: June 17, 2008, 08:11:55 PM »
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Hamen Manzoor-e-nazar na kya hota, -
Qahar muhabbat ka na dhaya hota, -
Josh ki Tez barsaaton ke paani men, -
Kaash tum ne mera dil bahaya na hota. -


(Syed Naami)
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«Reply #73 on: June 17, 2008, 08:12:44 PM »
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Nice one Sami ji!!!
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«Reply #74 on: July 03, 2008, 07:04:57 PM »
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nice one naami saab Applause
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