<>*Aaja na ab to mere dilbar jaani*<>

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<>*Aaja na ab to mere dilbar jaani*<>
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2010, 07:47:10 PM »
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kuch ankahi kuch ansuni kahani
dohrati hai har saal barkha rani
mere dil me uthti hain lehrein tu faani
aaja na ab to mere dilbar jaani
 
kyun barasta hai saawan yun tham tham kar
kyun chalti hain saansein meri dar dar kar
karti hai intezar ye  raatein suhani
aaja na ab to mere dilbar jani
 
kyun tujh sang naina lage mere hain
kyun tarsun din rain milan ko main
ab puri karde meri ye adhuru kahani
aaja na ab to mere dilbar jaani
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2010, 04:47:09 AM »
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Anamika-di.....dil me dabi kai chingariyen achanak shola ban k bhadak uthti hain tab dil ko chhuti aysi  RACHNA  janm leti

hai raat jab pure youvan par hoti hai.............virah vedna ka sunder chitran....

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Jaane wale aksar laut kar kabhi nahi aate
Sakhee Aati hain tou kewal unki yaadein.....
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2010, 07:45:05 AM »
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hmmm... ab hum kya kahen sarkaar... shabd hi jaise gum ho gaye hain hamaare... kin shabdon me taarif karein hum aaj aapki is kavita ki... chaliye koshish karte hain kuch likhne ka jawaab me... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...

barsaat me intezaar ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,
bheegi hui yaadon ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,
ye tadap jo raaton ko jagati hai hume har pal,
un tadapti raaton ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,

reh reh ke uthta hai jab ye dard judaai ka,
madhosh kar deta hai bas khayal mehboob ka,
hoti nahi hai paas tu meri pyaas bujhaane ko,
barsaat bhi badhaata hai tab pyaas teri chaahat ka,

karwatein jab badalti hai tu apne bistar pe,
mehsoos karte hain hum us dard ko palbhar me,
tu hai tanha, hum hain tanha in raat ke andhero me,
sochte hain kaash us pal hoti tu hamaare ghar me,

adhuri ghazal teri hai, adhuri ghazal hamaari hai,
aao dono milke hum is ghazal ko poora kar de,
kab tak yunhi hum tadpe, kab tak yunhi hum tarse,
aajao paas hamaare, baahon me tujhko hum bhar le,

apni mohabbat se tujko hum poora aaj kar de,
adhuri is kahaani ko sakaar aaj hum kar de,
sooni teri kalai pe hari chudiyaan pehna de,
maang me sindoor ki tere ek chutki aaj hum bhar de...
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2010, 07:45:29 AM »
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hay re dil uchal ke bahar aa gaya.......

sundar shabd ......sundar design.........

sur sabse sundar ye ladki  love4...muje to ye sabse jordar lagi  angel11......

sundar nahi jordar kyu koyal ji ......

kask ji maja aa gaya ji......barish aa hi gayi wo bhi jordar
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2010, 07:53:44 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 13, 2010, 04:47:09 AM
Anamika-di.....dil me dabi kai chingariyen achanak shola ban k bhadak uthti hain tab dil ko chhuti aysi  RACHNA  janm leti

hai raat jab pure youvan par hoti hai.............virah vedna ka sunder chitran....

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Jaane wale aksar laut kar kabhi nahi aate
Sakhee Aati hain tou kewal unki yaadein.....

thnx koyal....tumne sahi pehchana..dil me jab bht dard uthta hai tabhi aisa kuch bahar aata hai...
bht kareeb hai ye post mere dil k..thnx for liking.....

aagaye hain wo paas mere aaj jab sab bhulkar
bas aaj unme hi kho jaun main ye dil chahta hai....
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2010, 07:54:22 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 12, 2010, 07:44:35 PM
<>*Aaja na ab to mere dilbar jaani*<>



Wonderful creation  Ji
Aur Rachna to kamaal ka hai
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2010, 08:00:05 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on August 13, 2010, 07:45:29 AM
hay re dil uchal ke bahar aa gaya.......

sundar shabd ......sundar design.........

sur sabse sundar ye ladki  love4...muje to ye sabse jordar lagi  angel11......

sundar nahi jordar kyu koyal ji ......

kask ji maja aa gaya ji......barish aa hi gayi wo bhi jordar

MG ji........
aap aur aapke replies.....zordaar dhamakedar aur na jane kya kya hain...
par aapkuch likhte iske sur me to aur acchhhaa lagta love4

waiting for ek kadkadati bijli inn this barasta mausam..
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2010, 08:00:53 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 13, 2010, 07:54:22 AM
Wonderful creation  Ji
Aur Rachna to kamaal ka hai

thnx rajesh ji....for aprreciating...
aapke reply ka hamesha wait rehta hai mujhe...
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2010, 08:02:14 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 13, 2010, 07:45:05 AM
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hmmm... ab hum kya kahen sarkaar... shabd hi jaise gum ho gaye hain hamaare... kin shabdon me taarif karein hum aaj aapki is kavita ki... chaliye koshish karte hain kuch likhne ka jawaab me... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...

barsaat me intezaar ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,
bheegi hui yaadon ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,
ye tadap jo raaton ko jagati hai hume har pal,
un tadapti raaton ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,

reh reh ke uthta hai jab ye dard judaai ka,
madhosh kar deta hai bas khayal mehboob ka,
hoti nahi hai paas tu meri pyaas bujhaane ko,
barsaat bhi badhaata hai tab pyaas teri chaahat ka,

karwatein jab badalti hai tu apne bistar pe,
mehsoos karte hain hum us dard ko palbhar me,
tu hai tanha, hum hain tanha in raat ke andhero me,
sochte hain kaash us pal hoti tu hamaare ghar me,

adhuri ghazal teri hai, adhuri ghazal hamaari hai,
aao dono milke hum is ghazal ko poora kar de,
kab tak yunhi hum tadpe, kab tak yunhi hum tarse,
aajao paas hamaare, baahon me tujhko hum bhar le,

apni mohabbat se tujko hum poora aaj kar de,
adhuri is kahaani ko sakaar aaj hum kar de,
sooni teri kalai pe hari chudiyaan pehna de,
maang me sindoor ki tere ek chutki aaj hum bhar de...

ab aapko thnx kya kahun.....aapki to tareef karni padegi...
thnx for the beutiful reply klaskar ji....
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«Reply #10 on: August 13, 2010, 08:06:01 AM »
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You are welcome Kasak ji... aur hamaare liye jawaab kab tak aa raha hai....

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 13, 2010, 08:02:14 AM
ab aapko thnx kya kahun.....aapki to tareef karni padegi...
thnx for the beutiful reply klaskar ji....
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2010, 08:11:23 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 13, 2010, 07:45:05 AM
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hmmm... ab hum kya kahen sarkaar... shabd hi jaise gum ho gaye hain hamaare... kin shabdon me taarif karein hum aaj aapki is kavita ki... chaliye koshish karte hain kuch likhne ka jawaab me... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...

barsaat me intezaar ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,
bheegi hui yaadon ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,
ye tadap jo raaton ko jagati hai hume har pal,
un tadapti raaton ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai,

reh reh ke uthta hai jab ye dard judaai ka,
madhosh kar deta hai bas khayal mehboob ka,
hoti nahi hai paas tu meri pyaas bujhaane ko,
barsaat bhi badhaata hai tab pyaas teri chaahat ka,

karwatein jab badalti hai tu apne bistar pe,
mehsoos karte hain hum us dard ko palbhar me,
tu hai tanha, hum hain tanha in raat ke andhero me,
sochte hain kaash us pal hoti tu hamaare ghar me,

adhuri ghazal teri hai, adhuri ghazal hamaari hai,
aao dono milke hum is ghazal ko poora kar de,
kab tak yunhi hum tadpe, kab tak yunhi hum tarse,
aajao paas hamaare, baahon me tujhko hum bhar le,

apni mohabbat se tujko hum poora aaj kar de,
adhuri is kahaani ko sakaar aaj hum kar de,
sooni teri kalai pe hari chudiyaan pehna de,
maang me sindoor ki tere ek chutki aaj hum bhar de...

Aap ne bhi khoob likha hai Kapil
Jawaab dene mein aap kamaal karte hain
Bas isi tarah mehfil jamaey rakhiye
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2010, 08:13:11 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji.... bas aap jaise padhne walo ka protsaahan hi hai jiske kaaran kuch kuch likh lete hain... shukriya Rajesh ji....!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on August 13, 2010, 08:11:23 AM
Aap ne bhi khoob likha hai Kapil
Jawaab dene mein aap kamaal karte hain
Bas isi tarah mehfil jamaey rakhiye
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2010, 08:24:41 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 13, 2010, 08:06:01 AM
You are welcome Kasak ji... aur hamaare liye jawaab kab tak aa raha hai....


aajkal aapke liye jawab likhna mushkil ho gaya hai klaskar ji......
bht hi umda likhte hain aap...aur sari feelings aajati hain inme...ab main kahan se shuru karun aur kahan kahtm mehi uljh jati hun.....
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«Reply #14 on: August 13, 2010, 08:32:05 PM »
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compliments ke liye shukriya... par aap agar aisa kahenge to humein aapke posts pe reply karna chhoda padega... bas   Applause Applause ya "bahut khoob" likh ke chhod denge...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 13, 2010, 08:24:41 PM
aajkal aapke liye jawab likhna mushkil ho gaya hai klaskar ji......
bht hi umda likhte hain aap...aur sari feelings aajati hain inme...ab main kahan se shuru karun aur kahan kahtm mehi uljh jati hun.....
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