<>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

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Bade dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai... shabdon ka taana bana sahi to na ban paya par ek koshish ki hai .... umeed hai zyada buri na ho....

Shabd kho gaye hain mere
Ehsason ka kahin pata nahi
Dil hai mera ab bhi seene me
Dhadkanon ka par pata nahi

Kho gaye ho tum jabse
Raatein meri sooni hain
Din me khud ko khojti hun
Shaamein meri ruthhi hain

Yaadon ki mitti se aksar
Khud ko lep lagati hun
Teri baton ki bearish me
Fir khud ko nehlati hun

Oadh tere ehsson ki chunar
Main nikhar si jaati hun
Dekhti hun jab fir aaina
Bin bindiya murjhati hun

Uthh jate hain hath dua me
Fir rub ko main manati hun
Aajao lautkar kisi tarah tum
Yehi dua main karti jati hun

Bikhre baalon ko suljhaane
Apna ruthha yaar manaane
Aajao na ek bar fir se tum
Mujhe AnAmikA banane...!!


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2013, 02:40:38 PM »

bahut khoob Applause


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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2013, 02:48:30 PM »

Bahut hi pyaari aur badi khoobsurat peshkash kasak ji.. mujhe aapki yeh rachna bahut pasand aayi aur aage bhi likhti rahiye. hazaron dili daad is khoobsurat kalam par..


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2013, 03:22:42 PM »

chaa gayi aap
beautiful, aapke mukaable me koi nahee likhta yaha
aksar dekhta hun games, etc har jagah
very attractive writing


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 03:27:35 PM »

Shabd kho gaye hain mere
Ehsason ka kahin pata nahi
Dil hai mera ab bhi seene me
Dhadkanon ka par pata nahi

Bikhre baalon ko suljhaane
Apna ruthha yaar manaane
Aajao na ek bar fir se tum
Mujhe AnAmikA banane...!

KASAK JI APKE KALAM KO MAINE PEHLI BAAR BADHA HAI ,BOHUT KHOB ANDAAZ HAI DARD BAYAN KARNE KA ...BOHUT ACHHI LAGI HAI MUJHE ,

YOUN HI LIKHTE RAHIYE.

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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 03:34:21 PM »

BAHOT ACHA LIKHA HAI KASAK


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #6 on: August 07, 2013, 03:44:52 PM »

bahut khoob


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«Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 03:56:55 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 07, 2013, 02:37:31 PM

Bade dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai... shabdon ka taana bana sahi to na ban paya par ek koshish ki hai .... umeed hai zyada buri na ho....

Shabd kho gaye hain mere
Ehsason ka kahin pata nahi
Dil hai mera ab bhi seene me
Dhadkanon ka par pata nahi

Kho gaye ho tum jabse
Raatein meri sooni hain
Din me khud ko khojti hun
Shaamein meri ruthhi hain

Yaadon ki mitti se aksar
Khud ko lep lagati hun
Teri baton ki baarish me
phir khud ko nehlati hun

Oadh tere ehsson ki chunar
Main nikhar si jaati hun
Dekhti hun jab phir aaina
Bin bindiya murjhati hun

Uthh jate hain hath dua me
phir rub ko main manati hun
Aajao lautkar kisi tarah tum
Yehi dua main karti jati hun

Bikhre baalon ko suljhaane
Apna ruthha yaar manaane
Aajao na ek bar phir se tum
Mujhe AnAmikA banane...!!

wonderful,ma'am


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 04:25:41 PM »

behad khubsurat qalaam.jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai kasak ji.....lakhon daad o mubarakbaad is umda behatreen qalaam par...

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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 06:03:33 PM »

very nice


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2013, 06:28:58 PM »

just beautiful maam icon_flower


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2013, 06:53:36 PM »

uuufff jaan hi le li aapne to aur kehte ho ki shabdon kaa tana baana sahi nahi ban paayaa. agar sahi nahi banne se yeh haal hai to sahi kyaa hogaa, kamaal ho aap Kasak ji, aur aapke likhne kaa andaaz, mann kartaa hai khul ke taarif karun, bas isiliye Sheba ji ki tarhaa khul ke comment kar rahaa hoon. aur aapko firse likhtaa huwaa dekh ke kitni khushi hui hai mujhe yeh main bataa nahi saktaa, thanks a lot for starting again....!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 07, 2013, 02:37:31 PM

Bade dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai... shabdon ka taana bana sahi to na ban paya par ek koshish ki hai .... umeed hai zyada buri na ho....

Shabd kho gaye hain mere
Ehsason ka kahin pata nahi
Dil hai mera ab bhi seene me
Dhadkanon ka par pata nahi

uuuuffff yeh haal mujhse judaa ho ke? kabhi bataayaa nahi aapne ki itni mohabbat thi aapko. pehle bataanaa thaa naa main chhod ke jaataa hi nahi aapko kabhi. har ghadi, har lamhaa, aapke saath hi rehtaa...

Kho gaye ho tum jabse
Raatein meri sooni hain
Din me khud ko khojti hun
Shaamein meri ruthhi hain

achchaa humein bhi bataao zaraa yeh shaam kaise roothti hai? ab yeh to obvious si baat hai ki raat ko sone kaa time hai, us waqt koi nahi milegaa aapko. to raaton kaa soonaa honaa jaayaz hai.

Yaadon ki mitti se aksar
Khud ko lep lagati hun
Teri baton ki bearish me
Fir khud ko nehlati hun

khatarnaak ! ab yeh bekaar mein double double kaam kyun karte ho, direct nahaa liyaa karo. pehle lep lagaane ki kyaa zarurat hai? itne velle ho kyaa? hehehehe

Oadh tere ehsson ki chunar
Main nikhar si jaati hun
Dekhti hun jab fir aaina
Bin bindiya murjhati hun

haan yeh to baat sahi hai, aapke maathe ki woh safed bindi, uski baat hi kuch aur hai, kitne ghaayal huye ab tak iskaa koi hisaab nahi, kuch pistol wagera fit kar rakha hai kyaa aapne bindi ke pichhe?

Uthh jate hain hath dua me
Fir rub ko main manati hun
Aajao lautkar kisi tarah tum
Yehi dua main karti jati hun

haan manaa kiyaa thaa us upar waale ko gusaa nahi dilaane ke liye, ab karo sau somwaar kaa vrat, uparwaale bhaai saahab tabhi maanenge. ho sake to prasaad unke taste ke hisaab se hi chadhaanaa.

Bikhre baalon ko suljhaane
Apna ruthha yaar manaane
Aajao na ek bar fir se tu
Mujhe AnAmikA banane...!!

ek nayaa kangi kharidlo aur khud hi suljhaa lo, mujhe ladkiyon kaa baal banaanaa nahi aataa. isme main koi madat nahi kar saktaa. aur itnaa pyaaraa naam hai to sahi 'Kasak' ab fir Anamika kyun bannaa chaahte ho..

Aur ab yeh lijiye aapke poem kaa jawaab, yeh to bantaa hi hai, ummeed kartaa hoon aapko achchi lage... !!!

jin raahon se tum duur gaye the
un raahon ko dekhtaa jaataa hoon
kabhi to laut ke aaoge tum, main
khud hi khud ko samjhaataa hoon

tasveer tumhaari dekh dekh kar
akele hi main muskuraataa hoon
kamre ki deewaaron se ghir kar
tumhaare geet gungunaataa hoon

koi dekh naa le kahin aansoo mere
baarish mein bheegtaa jaataa hoon
chhipaa ke baarish ke paani mein
apne hi aansooo main bahaataa hoon

ret pe tumhaaraa naam likh kar
khud hi use main mitaataa hoon
lehren unhe bahaanaa chaahe to
mitti se lipat main jaataa hoon

koi nahi jo sambhaale mujhe ab
har kadam pe main ladkhadaataa hoon
bas tumhaare ek deedaar ki khaatir
deewaano saa bhataktaa jaataa hoon

zindagi hi mere saath nahi ab, main
zindagi kaa saath nibhaataa hoon
kabhi to phir se milogi tum mujhse
bas is ummeed se jeetaa jaataa hoon...

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2013, 07:17:14 PM »

beautiful creation... Clapping Smiley


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2013, 08:24:05 PM »

waah waah bahut sunder


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Re: <>*aajao na ek bar fir*<>

«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2013, 09:15:20 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 07, 2013, 02:37:31 PM

Bade dino baad kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai... shabdon ka taana bana sahi to na ban paya par ek koshish ki hai .... umeed hai zyada buri na ho....

waaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahot khoobsoorat nazm likhi hai aapne Applause


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