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aakhiri baat
wasta khud se tuta
dil ab to mujse hi rutha
chain aaye na karar
aanshu aankh se eisa chutta
sabak dene ka maza wo lute
ek choti si baat se riste nate hi tute
pal me ho gaye paraye
thak gaye kahte kahte ki hai hamare
hans hans jisne khud ko saraha
hansi me taal humne khud ko shambhala
per kismat ke aage chale na jor kisika
hota wahi jo chahta hai upperwala
khuda se khudai tuti
zindagi ne sanse luti
mout se aank ab mili
aur jaan se jaan chutti
kararname kai bante bigdate
farman roz naye like jate
hum to bas yehi kah ke jate
priy hamare rahna khush sada
badduaatye sari hum le jate
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«Reply #1 on: July 26, 2010, 01:18:49 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: July 26, 2010, 09:07:49 PM » |
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Nice.
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2010, 02:13:23 AM » |
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sabse pahle aapka dhanywaad vida leni hi hai to rona kya apno ke gum me khona kya sapne hote nahi sabke pure jo rahte hai yadoo mai unse bhi juda hona kya |
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2010, 02:16:31 AM » |
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Nice.
thanks sunder karke choti si tarif cha gayi muskaan tabiyat ho gayi khush jaise khushi mil gayi sare jaha ki nyari |
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«Reply #5 on: July 28, 2010, 10:21:26 AM » |
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U R Welcome Veena-di....  Chhoti chhoti baaton ko naa hone dena bada
Bhul kar apne aham ko dil rakhna hoga bada
Kismat ke bharose sab kuchh tou nahi chhoda karte
Chahejo kuchh bhi ho karm karna nahi chhoda karte
sabse pahle aapka dhanywaad
vida leni hi hai to rona kya
apno ke gum me khona kya
sapne hote nahi sabke pure
jo rahte hai yadoo mai
unse bhi juda hona kya
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2010, 10:27:42 AM » |
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wah bahut khoob veena ji ... badey dard meh aap ney apney dil ka haal bayaan kia hai.... jasbir singh hira_company@yahoo.com |
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2010, 04:26:10 AM » |
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U R Welcome Veena-di.... Chhoti chhoti baaton ko naa hone dena bada
Bhul kar apne aham ko dil rakhna hoga bada
Kismat ke bharose sab kuchh tou nahi chhoda karte
Chahejo kuchh bhi ho karm karna nahi chhoda karte
bahut sahi farmaya koyal ji koyal ki tarah hi mita raag gaya kismat hai hi kya jo dete hai wahi to lete hai jo karte hai wahi to bharte hai kami kuch na kuch hoti hamari dosh kismat ko de yehi fitrat hamari |
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2010, 04:32:48 AM » |
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wah bahut khoob veena ji ... badey dard meh aap ney apney dil ka haal bayaan kia hai.... jasbir singh hira_company@yahoo.comdhanywaad jasbir singhji dard ke sur dardile hi honge khushi me dard smetnewale virle milenge |
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 05:20:30 AM » |
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bht pyari rachna veena ji....
dard ko kaha bhi aansu bahe bhi
fir bhi labon ki muskaan fiki na hui...
yehi hai zindagi ...jeete rahiye
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2011, 07:46:18 PM » |
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bht pyari rachna veena ji....
dard ko kaha bhi aansu bahe bhi
fir bhi labon ki muskaan fiki na hui...
yehi hai zindagi ...jeete rahiye
aansu se dard bahar bahaya muskura kar muskaan ne usiko chipaya zindagi ke jod tod ne me muskurana hi kaam aaya sukriya kasak ji |
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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2011, 08:41:36 AM » |
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August se ab tak kahaan gayab rahi tum.....
K hush hu k muskuraakar tumne jeevan me sab jod liya...
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«Reply #12 on: March 21, 2011, 02:26:03 PM » |
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meri khushi se khush hone wale chah puri wo khuda karne wale Neelkamal umda logo ki umada bate auro ki khushi me apni khushi jane August se ab tak kahaan gayab rahi tum.....
K hush hu k muskuraakar tumne jeevan me sab jod liya...
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«Reply #13 on: March 22, 2011, 11:14:10 AM » |
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Hum tou sakhee auron ki khushi me he khush hone waale
Khuda he hain Neel-kamal ki chah ko poori karne waale meri khushi se khush hone wale
chah puri wo khuda karne wale
Neelkamal umda logo ki umada bate
auro ki khushi me apni khushi jane
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2011, 11:05:14 AM » |
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Hum tou sakhee auron ki khushi me he khush hone waale
Khuda he hain Neel-kamal ki chah ko poori karne waale jeevan me kai aate hai jate hai kuch khush kar jate hai kuch khush ho jate hai baki sab sikayat ke namune ban jate hai aapki baat bahut kuch nirali hai aapne hamari khushi me apni jani hai dhanywaad ki lambhai itni nahi jitno aapne khushi banti hai fir bhi sukriya |
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