AAKHIRI SAANSE AUR ADURI BAATEIN....

by ANKIT RAO on August 27, 2008, 07:13:04 AM
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TUMARE SAWALON KA JAWAB DENA SAKA MAIN US DIN,
BATA NAHI SAKTA, US DIN KYUN CHUP RAHA MAIN,

PAL DO PAL KI KHAMOSHI SAMAJH NA PAYI TUM,
AAJ JAB AAKHIRI SAANSE GIN RAHA HOON MAIN MILANE BHI NA AAYI TUM,

TAB BICHAD KE MUJH SE AAKHIR KHUSHIYAN HI TOH PAYI TUMNE,
YEH BAAT ALAG HAIN KI JUDAI KA DARD BHI SAHA DONO NE,

TUMARI ZINDAGI MEIN KHUSHIYAN NA BHARKAR,
BHOLO KAISE DETA MAIN TUMARA SAATH
JO CHOD JATI TUMHE DORAHE PAR AAJ.

                             
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2008, 07:55:25 AM »
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BOHAT CONFUSING KALAM THA ANKIT
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2008, 11:43:34 AM »
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Explanation:

here its a situtional. the situation is that the person has less time in is life ie he knows that he is going to die in few months and he refuses to marry his beloved one and then the lady love takes a new way and she parts with him with out knowing the reason.hence at the time of his death the person asks a question how could i give you the nod knowing i am not going to live for more days. if i gave the nod what would have happened when i live you it will leave you again in distress hence i could not give the answer on the day you asked he says.

sorry sajid ji if i fail to convey the same in my writting.now after knowing the situation dont you think what i wrote was write please reply.
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2008, 12:21:11 PM »
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Nice lines Ankit....!!

Lady love did nt try to find out the reason. Though the poet did nt want to tell her the reason, still he had expectations from his love. Aur yahi wajah hai ki usne usse shikwa bhi kar daala.
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2008, 02:24:44 PM »
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BAHUT SAYI PAKADA APNE CELMIRA JI.

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GOOD ANALYSIS.

HENCE THE TITLE IS NAMED AAKHIRI SAANSE AUR ADURI BAATEIN.

DHANYAVAD CEMIRA JI.
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