Aakhiri Shaam

by harashmahajan on June 29, 2005, 06:58:04 PM
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Ninaah
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«Reply #30 on: July 01, 2005, 09:09:02 AM »
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ultimate......

wo dwesh nahi tha e-dost,
wo humara pyar tha,
humari ankhon mein dekho,
hume kiska intzaar tha....


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hey..lovely...


lekin tu muzko ye bata
muzse tha kya gila
dwesh ke sholon mein jo
dil tak jala diya.

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jab roshni he chin jaaye zindagi ki,
zindagi bhi ab zindagi na rahi,
har gum ko seene se laga liya,
ab koi khushi bhi ab khushi na rahi...

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«Reply #31 on: July 01, 2005, 09:12:12 AM »
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Quote from: "Ninaah"
ultimate......

wo dwesh nahi tha e-dost,
wo humara pyar tha,
humari ankhon mein dekho,
hume kiska intzaar tha....


Quote from: "harashmahajan"
hey..lovely...


lekin tu muzko ye bata
muzse tha kya gila
dwesh ke sholon mein jo
dil tak jala diya.

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jab roshni he chin jaaye zindagi ki,
zindagi bhi ab zindagi na rahi,
har gum ko seene se laga liya,
ab koi khushi bhi ab khushi na rahi...

ninnah ji..zehn ko piro diya aapne...


dikh rahein ansoo..sailaab banker
aa rahi khusboo unka sabaab banker.

meri adheer aankhein hain saager piye hue
beh rahi ik umra se ansoo liye hue.
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«Reply #32 on: July 01, 2005, 09:25:04 AM »
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very nice harsh ji,meena sis and ninaah,gr8 work.

"Akhiri shaam jo hogi apni zindagi ki,
 har shaam ki tarah tre naam hogi,
 maine koshish ki zindagi jeene ki,
 par zindagi aur tere naam me koi fark nahi."
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«Reply #33 on: July 01, 2005, 12:03:14 PM »
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jab se mulakat huyee bewafayee se,
wafa pe apna bhi aitbaar na raha,
ab chahen wo kitne bhi paigam bhejein,
ab hume kisi ka intzaar na raha....


Quote from: "harashmahajan"
Quote from: "Ninaah"
ultimate......

wo dwesh nahi tha e-dost,
wo humara pyar tha,
humari ankhon mein dekho,
hume kiska intzaar tha....


Quote from: "harashmahajan"
hey..lovely...


lekin tu muzko ye bata
muzse tha kya gila
dwesh ke sholon mein jo
dil tak jala diya.

Quote
jab roshni he chin jaaye zindagi ki,
zindagi bhi ab zindagi na rahi,
har gum ko seene se laga liya,
ab koi khushi bhi ab khushi na rahi...

ninnah ji..zehn ko piro diya aapne...


dikh rahein ansoo..sailaab banker
aa rahi khusboo unka sabaab banker.

meri adheer aankhein hain saager piye hue
beh rahi ik umra se ansoo liye hue.
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Ninaah
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«Reply #34 on: July 01, 2005, 12:07:30 PM »
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thanks nidhi.....

apne hatheli pe uske naam ki mehandi lagaoongi,
bhul jaaye wo hume, pur apni zindagi uski yaadon se mehkaungi...


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very nice harsh ji,meena sis and ninaah,gr8 work.

"Akhiri shaam jo hogi apni zindagi ki,
 har shaam ki tarah tre naam hogi,
 maine koshish ki zindagi jeene ki,
 par zindagi aur tere naam me koi fark nahi."
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #35 on: July 01, 2005, 05:21:09 PM »
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khuda karey woh shaam na aaye
barbaadiyon ke naam na aaye
shukriya aapki zarra nwaazi ka
tumeh bachaaye mere sawaalon ke saaye


nidhi_yadein

"Akhiri shaam jo hogi apni zindagi ki,
har shaam ki tarah tre naam hogi,
maine koshish ki zindagi jeene ki,
par zindagi aur tere naam me koi fark nahi."
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #36 on: July 01, 2005, 05:25:25 PM »
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jab zindagi our wafa mein inzaar nahin...toh jeena our bhi dushwaar hai
...dard ka saya hameshaan sir pe barkrar hai....

Saathi na koi, na koi darpan
taareeki mujh mein chhyee hai.
her khushi apni barbaad hui,
her gam mein khalish  kyuin aayee hai.

Ninnah wrote...

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jab se mulakat huyee bewafayee se,
wafa pe apna bhi aitbaar na raha,
ab chahen wo kitne bhi paigam bhejein,
ab hume kisi ka intzaar na raha....
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Ninaah
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«Reply #37 on: July 02, 2005, 08:53:07 AM »
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gum kya hai hum dono ko pata hai,
pur pyar ke baare mein hum tumhe batayenge,
bahot reh chuke hum sub gum mein,
hum tumhe pyar ke wadiyon mein le jaayenge....


Quote from: "harashmahajan"
jab zindagi our wafa mein inzaar nahin...toh jeena our bhi dushwaar hai
...dard ka saya hameshaan sir pe barkrar hai....

Saathi na koi, na koi darpan
taareeki mujh mein chhyee hai.
her khushi apni barbaad hui,
her gam mein khalish  kyuin aayee hai.

Ninnah wrote...

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jab se mulakat huyee bewafayee se,
wafa pe apna bhi aitbaar na raha,
ab chahen wo kitne bhi paigam bhejein,
ab hume kisi ka intzaar na raha....
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Meena
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«Reply #38 on: July 02, 2005, 10:37:58 AM »
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dekh liye hai humne bhi pyar ka woh nagar,
us viran wadiyon me hume kyu le jaoge,

phoolon se khaye hai gehre zakhm kuch aise,
baharon me aab tum hume kya bithaoge,

us nagri ki fizayen hi ti to bikar gayi reith ka mera ghar,
thik sakhe waha aisa ashiyana hume kaune sa dikhaoge,

sangdil log rehte hai waha, bewafai jinki firtat m hai,
kare jo wafa koi waha, aise shaks se hume kya milwaoge!!
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #39 on: July 02, 2005, 05:07:24 PM »
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khoob kaha....

bahoot chaha hamne
per sur koi nahi aata
in begaano ki basti main
pyaar nazer nahi aata.

thak chukay ham chun ke kaantey,
 ab in sooni rahoon kay.
bhujhey chiraag se lagtey hain
ham begaano ki basti main


Ninnah wrote...

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gum kya hai hum dono ko pata hai,
pur pyar ke baare mein hum tumhe batayenge,
bahot reh chuke hum sub gum mein,
hum tumhe pyar ke wadiyon mein le jaayenge....
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #40 on: July 02, 2005, 05:15:11 PM »
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bilkul theek kaha aapne....Mena ji....bahoot achhay..

Jhooth kay peband lagey hain
'harsh' ab poshaakh per,
deemak lag rahi hai unper...
baithe hain jis shaakh per


Meena wrote

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dekh liye hai humne bhi pyar ka woh nagar,
us viran wadiyon me hume kyu le jaoge,

phoolon se khaye hai gehre zakhm kuch aise,
baharon me aab tum hume kya bithaoge,

us nagri ki fizayen hi ti to bikar gayi reith ka mera ghar,
thik sakhe waha aisa ashiyana hume kaune sa dikhaoge,

sangdil log rehte hai waha, bewafai jinki firtat m hai,
kare jo wafa koi waha, aise shaks se hume kya milwaoge!!
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Meena
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«Reply #41 on: July 03, 2005, 10:46:49 AM »
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arre phir sesamajh hi nahin aya.................. sad5
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #42 on: July 03, 2005, 04:37:00 PM »
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Meena ji....Aajkal market main sab duplicate saamaan milta hai...jo sab dhokhey se beha kertey hain....
our pyaar main bhi..pehley waala pyaar kaan jo ab naseeb hota hai..siri farihaad ya phir laila majnu waala....aajkal tou pyaar bhi dhoka hi hai...sirf maksad haasil kerney kay liye...jab ek ladki ya ladka....pyaar main fasti ya fasta hai....woh sab jhoot se shuru hota hai....tabhi tou apna hi pyaar Group rapes main fasa dete hain....

aapne jo akhiri sher sampann kiya....usi ko leejiye.....

"sangdil log rehte hai waha, bewafai jinki firtat m hai,
kare jo wafa koi waha, aise shaks se hume kya milwaoge!!"


aap us nagri ki baat ker rahien hain jahaan ki main baat ker rahaan hoo....jhoot ki nagari...jahaan bewafa hi rehtey hain....Aap bhi shaayad nahien jaan paayee ki aapkey sheron main kitni gehrayee hai....our hum usey kitni Gehrayee se jawaab detey hain....


ab gour se is sher ka matlab nikaaliye...

Jhoot ke peband lagey hain.....yaani jhoot ki buniyaad hai aajkal kay insaan per....our woh aise pyaan ko anjaan dene jaa rahey hain jiska end hamein maloom hai...yaaani...deemak lagi shaak per baithey hain..jo tootey gi hi.....sorry Meena ji aap hamaary kriti ko samajh nahee paayee.
Umeed hai ki hum aapko samjaaney main kaamyaab honge...
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