Aakhri shanso men

by jempawan on May 19, 2009, 06:49:18 PM
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Akhri shanso men bhi jine ki umid rakhta hun
husn aur ishq pe aaj bhi aitbaar karta hun
do ghadiyan wo intzar na kar sake mere aane tak
aaj bhi band palkon me unki tasweer rakhta hun
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2009, 06:50:46 PM »
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wah wah wah pawan, bahut hi khoob, wah wah


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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2009, 10:46:21 PM »
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NIce One Jempawan Ji,.
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beautiful work jpawan ji,very nice.
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Quote from: jempawan on May 19, 2009, 06:49:18 PM
Akhri shanso men bhi jine ki umid rakhta hun
husn aur ishq pe aaj bhi aitbaar karta hun
do ghadiyan wo intzar na kar sake mere aane tak
aaj bhi band palkon me unki tasweer rakhta hun





accha likha hai pawan jee..
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«Reply #5 on: May 20, 2009, 03:49:57 AM »
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Bohat khoob Pawan...
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«Reply #6 on: May 20, 2009, 04:50:44 AM »
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Quote from: jempawan on May 19, 2009, 06:49:18 PM
Akhri shanso men bhi jine ki umid rakhta hun
husn aur ishq pe aaj bhi aitbaar karta hun
do ghadiyan wo intzar na kar sake mere aane tak
aaj bhi band palkon me unki tasweer rakhta hun



VERII NAAICE...JEMP..
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«Reply #7 on: May 20, 2009, 05:05:41 AM »
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khoob likha hai jempawan ji Usual Smile
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