Aankh khuli jab mainay dekha

by sushilbansal on October 10, 2012, 04:09:03 PM
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Aankh khuli jab mainey deykha
Sath gamo kay tanha thi
Aur to kuch bhi bas may na tha
aaj kay din sheel bahut roi thi


Gagar sa chalka tha mn
bin brkha kay bhiga tha tan
kho gaey thai khayel khiloney
sisekta reh geya Aangan
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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2012, 05:01:41 PM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on October 10, 2012, 04:09:03 PM
Aankh khuli jab mainey deykha
Sath gamo kay tanha thi
Aur to kuch bhi bas may na tha
aaj kay din sheel bahut roi thi


Gagar sa chalka tha mn
bin brkha kay bhiga tha tan
kho gaey thai khayel khiloney
sisekta reh geya Aangan





bahut acha hai ji
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2012, 05:25:13 PM »
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Sheel didi v nice...
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«Reply #3 on: October 11, 2012, 01:01:27 AM »
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bahut sunder didi
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«Reply #4 on: October 11, 2012, 01:13:33 AM »
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Thankyou
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2012, 01:19:28 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on October 10, 2012, 05:01:41 PM
bahut acha hai ji
Marhoom ji thank you for your reply. let me tell you about this poem the other day when I wrote this poem was my Dad death aniversary day.
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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2012, 01:30:07 AM »
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bahut sunder didi
Bhaiya bas Dad ki Death aniversary par mn bahut udas ho jata hai bachpan ki yadey ek dam taja ho jati hai un ka srhad tha bus ukhar gai thi.
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2012, 03:11:49 AM »
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bahut accha likha hai didi
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2012, 03:19:26 AM »
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WAAH SUSHIL JI BOHUT KHUB KYA BAAT KAHI HAI
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2012, 05:15:52 AM »
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kya baat hai bohut khoob,
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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2012, 10:17:15 AM »
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bahut badhiya
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«Reply #11 on: October 11, 2012, 03:52:59 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 11, 2012, 03:11:49 AM
bahut accha likha hai didi
thank you very much
sheel didi
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