AANKHE BHAR GAYI

by darde_dil on January 17, 2006, 04:31:58 PM
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2967 times)
darde_dil
Guest
Reply with quote
please please give your suggestions to me i am just an XI SCI student please help me please please

HO GAYE JABSE DOOR TUM MUJHSE,
MILTA HU KISISE TO AANKH BHAR JAATI HAI.........

TERI YAADON KI KHUSHBOO SAATH HAI MERE,
TERE GHAM ME SULAGTA HU TO AANKH BHAR JAATI HAI.......

GHAM HI GHAM RAH GAYE MERI TANHAI KE SAATHI,
KHUSHI GAR MILE KABHI TO AANKH BHAR JAATI HAI........

KABHI LIKHTA THA NASEEB KHUD APNA ABHILASH,
AAJ MAANGE DUA TO AANKH BHAR JAATI HAI.......

KABHI HOTA THA HAR KHUSHI OR GHAM ME SHAAMIL SABKI,
AAJ BAAT KISI SE KARTA HU TO AANKH BHAR JAATI HAI......

YUN TOH MASROOF REHTA HU MEIN SAARA DIN MAGAR,
KADAM CHOKHAT PE RAKHTA HU TO AANKH BHAR JAATI HAI.......

PLEASE HELP ME AND REPLY PLEASE
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
masoom aankhe by tushar_4u_im in Shayri-E-Dard
aankhe num na ho.. by tushar_4u_im in Shayri-E-Dard
surkh aankhe by sunil4lov in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
|| Aankhe........Priya || by manzil-e-ishq in Shayri-E-Dard « 1 2 3  All »
Jab Bhi Aankhe Band Ho by sinha_0005 in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2006, 09:55:43 PM »
Reply with quote
darde dil bhut nice hai likha hai... kesi help cahya hia darde dil... mey kuh ker sakti hoo to batow... umhey ek jegha apni id bhi id hai contact ker saktey hoo... keep writing darde dil Usual Smile with smile ok
Logged
darde_dil
Guest
«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2006, 04:02:03 AM »
Reply with quote
Smile is what i have lost sonuji but thanks for the offer i,ll surely ask you on ur id thanks once again
Logged
badnaam_shayar
Guest
«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2006, 04:17:58 AM »
Reply with quote
vary nice dard-e-dil.............agar koi help chayie ho toh apne badnaam bhai ko bhi yaad kar lena ok................
Logged
darde_dil
Guest
«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2006, 04:31:09 AM »
Reply with quote
sure badnaam bhai def..
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2006, 04:32:55 AM »
Reply with quote
keya huya darde dil ji mause keo hu gaye ho... what u lost... darde dil life abhi to bhut lambhi hai abhi sey har manugey to keya huga her roj ek naya sangarsh leykey uthu or roj duinya sey ladney ki takat rakhu nahi to yea duniya tumhey jeney nahi deygi... ager hans nahi saktey ho to try kro hansney ki keo ki try kerney mey kuch nahi jata hai... u r most welcome u can contact me anytime when ever u call me i will be there for u little brother

Quote from: "darde_dil"
Smile is what i have lost sonuji but thanks for the offer i,ll surely ask you on ur id thanks once again
Logged
darde_dil
Guest
«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2006, 04:36:18 AM »
Reply with quote
Thanks a lot sonuji

Jo kah na sake wo fasaana yaad aata hai...,
Guzra hua dilkash jamaana yaad aata hai...;
Jab hushn se ishq takraaya tha kabhi...,
Ghaayal hua tha ek parwaana yaad aata hai..!!!
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2006, 04:40:17 AM »
Reply with quote
u r most welcome darde dil ... keya bat hai bahut acha likha hai....

Kaate Nahi Katate Hain Lamhe Intezar Ke
Nazare Jamaaye Bethe Hain Raste Pe Yaar Ke
Dil Ne Kaha Dekhe Jo Jalwe Husn Yaar Ke
Laaya Hain Kaun Inko Phalak Se Utaar Ke
Logged
darde_dil
Guest
«Reply #8 on: January 18, 2006, 04:45:59 AM »
Reply with quote
Bohot Badhiya SONUJI BAHUT KHOOB THA
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #9 on: January 18, 2006, 04:47:40 AM »
Reply with quote
shukrya darde dil ji...
Logged
darde_dil
Guest
«Reply #10 on: January 18, 2006, 06:19:23 AM »
Reply with quote
Tere Jane Ka Gum Mujhe Jeene Nahi Deta
Teri yaado ka matka mujhe marne nahi deta!!!
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #11 on: January 18, 2006, 06:29:02 AM »
Reply with quote
teyrey na aney key gum mey aj bhi jinda lash hoon
teyri yado ka metka mujhey jeney nahi deyta hai
teyra tasover mujhey merney nahi deyta hai
Logged
darde_dil
Guest
«Reply #12 on: January 18, 2006, 06:58:46 AM »
Reply with quote
VAH !!!! Nice One

jeena mushkil hai fir bhi mujhe jeena hai
zeher ka pyala kyun na ho amrit samajh kar pina hai
Logged
Sonu
Guest
«Reply #13 on: January 18, 2006, 03:49:20 PM »
Reply with quote
thanks abhi... good one

ger jeena hu mushkil to koi dost dhundley safer acha ket jayga...
zhar ka pyala jo amrit samjh ker peyga to vo mer jayga...
Logged
darde_dil
Guest
«Reply #14 on: January 18, 2006, 06:31:53 PM »
Reply with quote
Dosto ki judai se pal pal marta hu
pehle dushmano se darta tha ab dosto se darta hu!!!
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 12, 2024, 08:07:09 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]

[November 08, 2024, 09:59:08 AM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]

[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]

[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:55:06 AM]

by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 06:58:58 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.111 seconds with 23 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8507 Real Poets and poetry admirer