Aansoo dafan kar aaya hoon main

by Ajnabi1 on March 21, 2006, 01:00:40 AM
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Apnay aansoon ko dafan kar aaya hoon main
Usay kisi aur ki dulhan bana deykh aaya hoon main
Soocha tha lagay gi mehndi jin haathon main naam ki
Us main kisi aur ka naam dekh aaya hoon main
Jis ghar main tha mera roz ka aana jaana
Aaj us ghar say nata tor aaya hoon main


Hey guyz i am a new member on this website.looking forward to ur comments.
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2006, 05:47:08 AM »
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nice one Ajnabi1... apka yoindia mai sawagat hai!!
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2006, 06:25:23 AM »
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Nice 1 Ajnabee1...........

Pyar kya hota hai ye humne duniya ko dikhaya hai,
intezaar kaisa hota hai ye humne sabko sikhaya hai,
humne unhe chaha hai kisi phul ki tarah se,
jin hatho ne hume kuchla unhe bhi humne mehkaya hai!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2006, 08:08:36 PM »
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thanks guyz.i will try to put more stuff soon.
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2006, 08:55:58 PM »
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Ajnabi1 and darde_dil

Good ones !

Rajbir
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«Reply #5 on: March 22, 2006, 04:34:42 PM »
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ajanbi ji...bohot hi acha likha apne....welcome to yoindia i wud like to read more of ur poerties!! keep it up!

dard e dil ji...very nice reply!!!

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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2006, 03:00:27 AM »
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sukria meena ji.

Judaee to bass aik bahana hay
Tayri zindagi ka koee our fasana hay
Nadan dil ko bass yay samjhana hay
Bewfaoon say ab dil na lagana hay



Maannay ko dil nahee hay tayaar
Najanay kioon rota hay zaar zaar
Jaana cahata hay tujh say aik baar
Kioon kia tu nay aysa ghatya waar
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2006, 06:16:59 PM »
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Shukriya Rajbirji aur Meenaji.

Bhul gaye hum sare phul khilte nahi,
bhul gaye hum taqdeer hatho se bunte nahi,
yaad hai to bas unka chehra aur unki baatein,
bhul gaye hum do kinare kabhi milte nahi!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 30, 2006, 02:02:30 AM »
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gud one darde_dil. awesome
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2006, 07:19:13 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB AJNABI JI...AUR DARDE-DIL....


Main teri yaad ko, is dil se bhulaun kaise,
tu ret par likhi hui tahareer nahi......
takdeer apne haaton se badloon kaise,
waqt ke sath mit jaye, yeh wo tasveer nahi....
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«Reply #10 on: March 30, 2006, 08:47:37 PM »
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Shukriya Vickyji , Ajnabiji!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maut k muh se zindagi chura kar laya hoon,
tera hi naam lekar duniya se me ladh paya hoon,
kyu nahi tum mujhe pehchaan sake mere yaar,
me koi aur nahi me toh sirf tera saya hoon!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 31, 2006, 12:03:01 AM »
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good one dard-e-dil

khud ke saye ko, koi aor naam dety ho
dard-e-judai ko, kaya khoob anjaam dety ho
deewangi ko kuch to sambhal kar rakhon
kayun her aane jaane wale ko, mera naam dety ho!!!
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«Reply #12 on: March 31, 2006, 07:32:22 PM »
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Shukriya Poojaji and Nice 1!!!!

Har aane jane wale me hume tumhara chehra dikhta hai,
ankhe band karu to tumhara hi naam ye dil chikhta hai,
kis baat ki hume saza mili hai akhir kya hai meri galti,
haste haste apne naseeb me barbadi ye deewana likhta hai!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #13 on: April 07, 2006, 01:09:15 PM »
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Bahot khoob Ajnabi,..

Kar Baitha Bharosa Main Bhi Ajnabi Par,..
Maloom Na Tha Ke Wo Paraya Hai,..
Jab Rakha Dil Tohfe Mein Usne Hi Thukraya Hai,..
Aaj Jab Jaan Gaye Dastoor Ajnabion Ka,.
Darrte Hain Aaj Bhi Dil Ko Nahi Lagaya Hai,..
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«Reply #14 on: April 13, 2006, 08:15:06 PM »
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really good work all of u!!!
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