Aansoon ka kaafila .

by Ricky on November 20, 2004, 02:42:47 PM
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Aa'nsuon ka kafila chala,
Siskiyon ke darr se guzar kar,Ghumo ke rahon se hota hua woh nikla !!

Pooch raha kya hai uska maksad,
Jo woh unn Ghumgeen ankhon se nikal hai pada !!

Ab kya samjhayen aa'nsuon ko,
Sahara hain iss laachar dil ka isliye tumhe aana pada !!

Ai aa'nsuon Humey maaf karna ,
Aisi hai dil ki lagi ke tumhe bulana pada !!
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«Reply #1 on: November 20, 2004, 05:07:59 PM »
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wow ricky very nice..
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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2004, 09:43:33 AM »
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wow....wow ricky bhai...........excellent.............bahot khoob.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2004, 10:20:43 PM »
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bahoot hi khoob ricky ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2004, 12:54:23 PM »
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Dhanyawaad you all !
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2004, 01:42:07 PM »
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Wow!! very Nice Ricky!!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2004, 02:37:29 PM »
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good ricky...
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2004, 02:39:45 PM »
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Bahot Khoob Ricky !!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2005, 08:05:07 AM »
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aasuon se dariya humne bhi banaye hai
kafile main jaane humne bhi gawaye hai

marmite armaan wo sabhi khuwab haseen
judai main tanhaiyo ke sitam bardasth kiye hai
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2005, 09:38:11 AM »
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hmm.

Diggin Ricky Usual Smile

Tosha.. NM but seems to be poetry of zabardasti ! ! ! !
(don't read it as zabardast)
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2005, 10:02:38 AM »
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wow nice ricky n tosha...                                                                                               ..
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2005, 10:08:43 AM »
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zindagi se apni duur nikala
saath rehne ka armaan tha

khuda se jab ki humne shikayat
toh woh bhi unke saath tha..
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«Reply #12 on: June 18, 2005, 10:16:55 AM »
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bohot achhe amrita...
jo thi baat adhoori wo hum keh denge
tere bina bhi ab hum reh lenge
jaise saha hai har gham apka diya hua
teri judai ka gham bhi seh lenge
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2005, 10:29:25 AM »
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Quote from: "sanya310"
bohot achhe amrita...
jo thi baat adhoori wo hum keh denge
tere bina bhi ab hum reh lenge
jaise saha hai har gham apka diya hua
teri judai ka gham bhi seh lenge


thanks a lot sanya..!!

Aapke har sitam ko,akhri sitam samjh kar sehte gaye
khud ki wafaai ko,dil hi dil mein tanha kartey gaye

na tumhare sitam purey hue na iss dil ki tanhai miti
hum toh bas aapki yad mein jate rahe...
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«Reply #14 on: June 19, 2005, 05:35:39 AM »
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thanx a lot....sanya!!!


Quote from: "Ricky"
hmm.

Diggin Ricky Usual Smile

Tosha.. NM but seems to be poetry of zabardasti ! ! ! !
(don't read it as zabardast)


which one your's ore mine..!!! well...what i wrote is just Situational, i was in dt mood...!!! may be it came out to be as bad as my mood.... Shocked  ha ha ha!!!
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