Aap rahtey naheen pahloo mein: neend aatee naheen!

by abdbundeli on July 27, 2008, 02:25:37 PM
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Aap kahtey hain jo: ham maantey naheen hain kab?
 Kyaa jigar mein hai yahaan? Dost, jaantaa hai Rab!
 Aap rahtey naheen pahloo mein: neend aatee naheen:
 Mujh ko lagtaa hai har lamhey, ki, bas, aaougey ab!!

                                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2008, 05:24:01 AM »
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abd Babu...Ye To Intezaar Wali Baat Ho Gayee..?
Aashiq Aur Intezaar....?
Muje ab Taq Samaj Me Na aaya ki..Jo Dil Me Ho,,Taswwur Me Ho,,Yaado Me ho,,Wo aaye Na Aaye...Kya Farq Padata Hai Yaar..

Ek Sher Yaad aa Gayaa.."Daag" Dahelvi Ka

Gazab Kiya JO Tere Waado'n Pe E'atbaar Kiya.,
Saari Raat Humne Qaya'mat Ka Intezaar Kiya.....!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2008, 06:17:08 AM »
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Muhammed Sa'b,
Aap thahrey deen-o-yeemaan waaley aadmee, so Quraan Pak ki aayteyn to aap ko bkhoobee yaad rahteen hain; pai Daag Sahib kaa sheir aapko yaad to aayaa hai, pai zaraa-see chook ho gayee hai, to mein yaad dilaaye deytaa hoon.Yeh sheir is tarah hai: 
"Gazab Kiya, Tere Waado'n Pe E'atbaar Kiya:
 Tamaam Raat Qaya'mat Ka Intezaar Kiya!'
Ab intizaar karney key alaawaa meyrey paas raastaa bhi kyaa hai? Isee silsiley mein, mujhey apnaa eik sheir yaad aa rahaa hai, jis sey intizaar waalee meyree baat saaf ho jaayegee! Woh yeh hai:
"Azal sey intizaar hai mujhey qayaamat kaa:
 Sunaa hai, paishtar WOH MEHRABAAN naheen aataa!"
                                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2008, 08:57:56 AM »
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abd babu...Shukriya " Jo " & " Saari " Ke Badle " Tamaam " Karva Diya aapne...
waise Main To aapse Chhota Hun..
Itne saare Lafz To Jaanta Nahi Hoonga Na...!!! Chaliye Khoob Hai.
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2008, 10:59:35 AM »
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Muhammed sa'b!

Aapkee dariyaa dilee hai, ki 'kuchh' to hoon mein ab;
 Warnah tinkoun key sath, mein bhi urhaa kartaa thaa!
 Lagtaa hai katm-e-adam sey hai 'kuchh' apnaa rishtah:
 Warnah zarroun key saath, yoon hi firaa kartaa thaa!!

                                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: March 28, 2009, 08:49:45 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 28, 2009, 08:13:15 AM
Wah Wah Wah Abd Sahab Bohat Hi Umda Hai
Aise Lagta Hai Humare Dil Se Juda Hua Hai
Bohat Khoob Ji Keep It Up...

Har Tamanna Bikhri Hai Jaise Bikharta Hai Koi Moti
Tere Bagair Ye Aankhein Na Jagti Hai ,Naa Hai Soti.

Dhadkan Dhadkan De Rahi Hai Tujhe Aawaz Aey Sanam
Ki Abto Aa Jaao Kahin Se ,Ye Zindagi Bohat Hai Chhoti

Narm haathoun mein shafaq sey bharaa pyaalaa hogaa;
Nosh har, sharbat-e-firdous sey dhaalaa hogaa;
Saaqiyah roo-b-roo aankhoun key muskuraayegee;
Woh jo aayegaa, shab-o-roz ujaalaa hogaa!!

               - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: March 29, 2009, 12:45:56 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 29, 2009, 11:06:55 AM
Wah Abd Babu Bohat Khoob Ji..

Aankheon Mein Hogi Chamak Aur Kya Nazaara Hoga
Jab Mere Saamne Woh Chand Sa Chehra Tumhara Hoga.

Phoolon Si Mehak Uthengi Meri Har Saans Shihab Jab
Baahon Mein Humari Woh Gulbadan Sa Sanam Humara Hoga


Shukriyah Shihab ji!

Woh yahaan hi naheen hai har jagah zamaaney mein!
Sanam, sanam hai to aayegaa aashiyaaney mein!
Sabra karney key siwaa, aur raastaa kyaa hai?
Aakhiree lamhah wo, aayegaa har fasaaney mein!!

                                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: March 29, 2009, 12:51:21 PM »
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 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji..

Bohat khoob Shihab ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 29, 2009, 01:04:44 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on March 29, 2009, 12:51:21 PM
Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Abd ji..

Bohat khoob Shihab ji...

Thanks honeyrose ji!
         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: March 30, 2009, 09:32:42 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 30, 2009, 08:50:52 AM
Wah Wah Abd Babau Kya Baat Hai
Bohat Khoob Ji....

  Nam Aankhon Mein Koi Pyaas Rehti Hai
   Zindagi Tum Bin Badi Udaas Rehti Hai.

   Har Pal Chalti Hai Yaadon Ki Banduken
 Aur Hasraten Pehne Sabar Ka Libas Rehti Hai

Shukriyah Shihab ji!

Nam hon aankheyn, adhar par
Akulaaye ho pyaas:
To nishchit hai shikhar par,
Piyaa-milan kee aash!

          - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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