Aapki Kami:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

Noorafza

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Zindagi mein aapki kami reh gai...
Aankhon mein aaj nami reh gai...

Aapki kami ko bhar denge socha tha…
Kya pata tha ki soch mein dokha tha…
Kami bhar na paye, bas ashk reh gaye,
Gham-e-dil ki daastaan yeh keh gaye;

Chodna tha ghamon ko waqt par,
Lekin saath yeh chal rahe hain ab tak;

Aap samajh na paye humko
Ya na samjhi ki bhool humaari thi,
Kaise pata karein kami kya thi?
Humaari khata kya hai bata to dete,
Maafi mangne ka mauka toh dete!
Bas chal diye, mudkar dekha tak nahin,
Aur palatne ka intezaar hum karte rahe…

Nazar aapki laut ke kabhi aayi nahin,
Phir dil mein bahaar kabhi chaayi nahin…


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Re: Aapki Kami

«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2010, 02:43:11 AM »

Achchi koshish hai aapki.... dard me doobi hui aapki ye rachna achchi lagi humein... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!


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Re: Aapki Kami

«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2010, 04:31:40 PM »

har lamha lag rahi aapki kami
na sur saj rahe na shabdon me nami

har sunn hai sannata nahin koi hasi
kya karun k aa jao tum abhi yanhin......


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Aapki Kami

«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2010, 04:37:20 PM »

Quote from: Noorafza on August 24, 2010, 09:13:26 PM

Good one Noor Ji


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Aapki Kami

«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2010, 04:38:19 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 25, 2010, 04:31:40 PM

har lamha lag rahi aapki kami
na sur saj rahe na shabdon me nami

har sunn hai sannata nahin koi hasi
kya karun k aa jao tum abhi yanhin......

Nice response Ji


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brokenbyluv

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Re: Aapki Kami

«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2010, 10:29:46 PM »

bahut khoob noorafza ji....


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Noorafza

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Re: Aapki Kami

«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2010, 02:47:29 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 25, 2010, 04:31:40 PM

har lamha lag rahi aapki kami
na sur saj rahe na shabdon me nami

har sunn hai sannata nahin koi hasi
kya karun k aa jao tum abhi yanhin......

WAH! Kya baat hai! Kasak ji mujhe khushi hui ki mere kalam ne aapko prerit kiya! Share karne ke liye shukriya!


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Noorafza

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Re: Aapki Kami

«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2010, 02:49:50 PM »

Klaskar ji, Mujhe khushi ki aapko mera kalam pasand aya!

Thankyou Rahesh ji aur borkenbyluv!


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