Aapki shikayat - shikha

by Shikha sanghvi on October 01, 2015, 01:12:37 PM
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Vo andaz e sharmana bhi aapka tha,
Vo hole se muskurana bhi aapka tha.
 
Vo nigaho mai bas jana aapka tha,
Vo saanso mai bas jana bhi aapka tha.
 
Agar kuch nazar ka gunah tha,
To usme bhi saath aapka hi tha.
 
Hum chhod gaye aapka vo shaher,
To vo kasoor hum dono ka tha.
 
Aakhir karte bhi to kisse karte
Aapki shikayat E Sanam,
 
Vo shaher bhi aapka tha,
Or hume door jane dene ka
Vo nirney  bhi aapka hi tha.
 
Shikha

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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2015, 08:18:29 PM »
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Nice..
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2015, 08:55:10 PM »
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Bahut hee sunder Shikha Jee, aakhree line ek word niryan merey khayaal mein nirney honaa chahiye.
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2015, 11:51:31 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2015, 06:10:35 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 02, 2015, 06:12:54 AM »
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Quote from: vinery on October 01, 2015, 08:18:29 PM
Nice..

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«Reply #6 on: October 02, 2015, 06:15:01 AM »
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Quote from: surindarn on October 01, 2015, 08:55:10 PM
Bahut hee sunder Shikha Jee, aakhree line ek word niryan merey khayaal mein nirney honaa chahiye.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Thanks surindarji...bilkul sahi kaha aapne
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«Reply #7 on: October 02, 2015, 05:46:36 PM »
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behad khubsurat rachna dee dheroooooo,n daaaaaaddddddd
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Quote from: saahill on October 01, 2015, 11:51:31 PM
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2015, 01:00:21 PM »
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