aawaaZ Dilki

by ek_tamanna on March 21, 2011, 01:08:41 PM
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JunooN-e-ishq kee sab khastah-paaiyaaN
tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..

failaa huwaa hai abb to char soo jaise...
udaasiyaaN, khamoshiyaaN,  viraaniyaaN

raah-e-wafa meiN chal ke hasil hua hume
jafaayeiN, bechainiyaaN, makkaariyaaN

saltanat luti, meri mohabbat ki, to mili
bebasiyaaN, mehroomiyaaN, tanhaaiyaaN

hal e tang guzre ki ab guzar hi jaye zindagi
majbooriyaN, mazloomiyaaN, muflisiyaaN

dafnaa diyaa seene meiN har Qissaa terii
bhalaaiyaan, buraaiyaaN, bewafaaiyaaN



***tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..
yeh line ek mashahoor ghazal ki hai ............

main apni soch ko is line ke saath jurne ki koshish ki hun
umeed hai pasand aayegi
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«Reply #1 on: March 21, 2011, 01:10:33 PM »
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bahoot khoob Applause Applause Applause
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manzil-e-ishq
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2011, 01:11:53 PM »
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bht bht bht khoob tammanna ji.....
i lyk last one alot....
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2011, 01:12:43 PM »
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sukriya salma ji
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ek_tamanna
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2011, 01:13:27 PM »
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thanx a lot manzil ji.................
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2011, 01:29:48 PM »
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Ek mast koshish Tamanna-di.....very well conceived.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower

"char soo" ye samajh nahi aaya...bataana kya matlab hai....

 Ess kavita ko padhkar milti hain tumhe....
 Taaliyein, Taaliyein, taaliyein..... Clapping Smiley

Quote from: ek_tamanna on March 21, 2011, 01:08:41 PM
JunooN-e-ishq kee sab khastah-paaiyaaN
tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..

failaa huwaa hai abb to char soo jaise...
udaasiyaaN, khamoshiyaaN,  viraaniyaaN

raah-e-wafa meiN chal ke hasil hua hume
jafaayeiN, bechainiyaaN, makkaariyaaN

saltanat luti, meri mohabbat ki, to mili
bebasiyaaN, mehroomiyaaN, tanhaaiyaaN

hal e tang guzre ki ab guzar hi jaye zindagi
majbooriyaN, mazloomiyaaN, muflisiyaaN

dafnaa diyaa seene meiN har Qissaa terii
bhalaaiyaan, buraaiyaaN, bewafaaiyaaN



***tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..
yeh line ek mashahoor ghazal ki hai ............

main apni soch ko is line ke saath jurne ki koshish ki hun
umeed hai pasand aayegi
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«Reply #6 on: March 22, 2011, 03:20:38 AM »
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Quote from: ek_tamanna on March 21, 2011, 01:08:41 PM
JunooN-e-ishq kee sab khastah-paaiyaaN
tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..

failaa huwaa hai abb to char soo jaise...
udaasiyaaN, khamoshiyaaN,  viraaniyaaN

raah-e-wafa meiN chal ke hasil hua hume
jafaayeiN, bechainiyaaN, makkaariyaaN

saltanat luti, meri mohabbat ki, to mili
bebasiyaaN, mehroomiyaaN, tanhaaiyaaN

hal e tang guzre ki ab guzar hi jaye zindagi
majbooriyaN, mazloomiyaaN, muflisiyaaN

dafnaa diyaa seene meiN har Qissaa terii
bhalaaiyaan, buraaiyaaN, bewafaaiyaaN



***tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..
yeh line ek mashahoor ghazal ki hai ............

main apni soch ko is line ke saath jurne ki koshish ki hun
umeed hai pasand aayegi

Good One ... Tamanna Ji !

Good Expression ... dil se daad !!
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2011, 07:15:10 PM »
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Tamanna Jee Aadaab!

Aapko is mehfil meiN dekhkar behad masarrat huyi... Usual Smile
Yakeen janiye aapko padhkar betahasha hairat hoti hai
ke aap itna khoob kaise likha leti hai... Usual Smile

Bahut umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne... behad achche khayal
aur adaygi rahi... Usual Smile bus kuch khamiyaaN hai jo ki aapki
zubaaN ke wajaah se humesha aati rahi hai unhe durust kar
rahe hai Usual Smile
Ummid hai aap bura nahi maneNgi Usual Smile

Aapki is kalaam par deri se aane ke liye muafi chahte
hai.... dar asal waqt ki tangi ke chalte yahaaN aana
behad kam ho gaya hai... Usual Smile

,,,,,,,,,.............,,,,           



Quote from: ek_tamanna on March 21, 2011, 01:08:41 PM
JunooN-e-ishq kee sab khastah-paaiyaaN
tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..

Kia kahne bahut khoob behad achcha matla kaha hai.. Usual Smile     

failee huyi hai abb to char soo jaise...
udaasiyaaN, khamoshiyaaN,  viraaniyaaN

Kia baat hai waah bahut khoob ...
     

raah-e-wafa meiN chal ke hasil huyi hume
jafaayeiN, bechainiyaaN, makkaariyaaN

Kia khoob such ko anjaam diya hai aapne
daad daad daad Usual Smile     

saltanat luti, meri mohabbat ki, to mili
bebasiyaaN, mehroomiyaaN, tanhaaiyaaN

Waah waah jee bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile     

hal e tang guzre ki ab guzar hi jaye zindagi
majbooriyaN, mazloomiyaaN, muflisiyaaN

Achcha sher hai daad Usual Smile     

dafnaa diyaa seene meiN har Qissaa teraa
bhalaaiyaan, buraaiyaaN, bewafaaiyaaN

Behad khoob daad ... aik surat humare zaheN meiN bani hai dekhiye..     

Dafnaa di seene meiN har nishani terii
BhalaiyaaN, BuraaiyaaN, bewafaaiyaaN... Usual Smile         



***tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..
yeh line ek mashahoor ghazal ki hai ............

main apni soch ko is line ke saath jurne ki koshish ki hun
umeed hai pasand aayegi

Bahut umdaa aur behad khoob kalaam se bazm ko nawaza hai aapne.... Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye

Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2011, 09:26:39 PM »
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Wah wah,bahut dard bhari,peshkask Ek tamanna ji.great work Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2011, 12:22:28 PM »
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Quote from: ek_tamanna on March 21, 2011, 01:08:41 PM
JunooN-e-ishq kee sab khastah-paaiyaaN
tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..

failaa huwaa hai abb to char soo jaise...
udaasiyaaN, khamoshiyaaN,  viraaniyaaN

raah-e-wafa meiN chal ke hasil hua hume
jafaayeiN, bechainiyaaN, makkaariyaaN

saltanat luti, meri mohabbat ki, to mili
bebasiyaaN, mehroomiyaaN, tanhaaiyaaN

hal e tang guzre ki ab guzar hi jaye zindagi
majbooriyaN, mazloomiyaaN, muflisiyaaN

dafnaa diyaa seene meiN har Qissaa terii
bhalaaiyaan, buraaiyaaN, bewafaaiyaaN



***tohmateiN, badnaamiyaaN ,rusvaaiyaaN..
yeh line ek mashahoor ghazal ki hai ............

main apni soch ko is line ke saath jurne ki koshish ki hun
umeed hai pasand aayegi

KYA KAHNE HAIN TAMANNA JI BAHUT KHOOB
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