Aaye wo na widesh sey

by abdbundeli on July 05, 2009, 07:06:58 AM

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abdbundeli

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Aaye wo na widesh sey;
Baadar pahuncho aaya!
Ritu hariyaalee aayi; pai,
Mohey kachhu na suhaaya!

- 'Ramwatiya'


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madhuwesh

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2009, 07:09:25 AM »

Wah Abd ji beautiful creation. Applause


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #2 on: July 05, 2009, 07:31:48 AM »

Good one Abd Ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #3 on: July 05, 2009, 07:38:38 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 05, 2009, 07:09:25 AM

Wah Abd ji beautiful creation. Applause

Dhanyawaad Madhu!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #4 on: July 05, 2009, 07:41:41 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on July 05, 2009, 07:31:48 AM

Good one Abd Ji

Dhanyawaad Rajesh Harish ji!
- abd bundeli


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Deepati

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #5 on: July 05, 2009, 07:52:48 AM »

Beautiful lines, Abd Ji! Applause


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superspawn10

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #6 on: July 05, 2009, 08:09:11 AM »

nice abd ji...


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cara

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #7 on: July 05, 2009, 08:24:50 AM »

kya baat hai ....abdji....

mora sajan hai widesh mein,bin sajan suna laage apne desh mein.
hariyaali aayi par sajan na aaye,bin sajan bewaa lagun apne desh mein.


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deepika_divya

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #8 on: July 05, 2009, 08:29:23 AM »

Good Work ABD ji.. bahoot Khoob!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 11:49:28 AM »

Quote from: Deepati on July 05, 2009, 07:52:48 AM

Beautiful lines, Abd Ji! Applause

Thanks Deepati!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #10 on: July 05, 2009, 12:08:40 PM »

Quote from: superspawn10 on July 05, 2009, 08:09:11 AM

nice abd ji...

Thanks superspawn10 ji!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Aaye wo na widesh sey

«Reply #11 on: July 05, 2009, 12:18:06 PM »

Quote from: cara on July 05, 2009, 08:24:50 AM

kya baat hai ....abdji....

mora sajan hai widesh mein,bin sajan suna laage apne desh mein.
hariyaali aayi par sajan na aaye,bin sajan bewaa lagun apne desh mein.

Thanks cara ji! Uttar sundar hai!

Sajanee saaje niyam sey,
Maathey mein sindoor!
'Priya, tum ur key mukut ho:
Raho na aisey door!!'

- abd bundeli