Ab dil ko jalaana hoga

by sweetie2210s on July 22, 2008, 09:17:13 AM
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Diye bhuj gaye
ab dil ko jalaana hoga,
tujse dur rehkar
ye zindagi ka adhoora safar bitaana hoga,
mat soch ki tujhse bichar kar khush hai hum
koi pooch na bethe haal-e-dil isliliye
hume logon ke khatir muskuraana hoga.
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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2008, 09:24:38 AM »
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good work


koi kiya janay ga meri zindgi ka afsana
apni tu adat hay her bat par muskarana
zaroori tu nahi jo muskaraye ussay gahem na ho
atta kahan hay sab ko gahem chupana
kissy ko kissy ki parwa nahi yahan
bus yaad rehta hay sab ko haq jeetana
her baat ki kahal otarty hay duniya
ata bohat hay lgon ko bat say bat banaana
kissy ko ho jo attraz prindoo kay chaychahanay par
chortay kahan hay prinday chaychahana
hum to wo hain jan lo payar
day dain gay jan kabhi azmana
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2008, 09:50:20 AM »
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nice creation sweetie and
nice reply by u pyaar

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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2008, 09:56:01 AM »
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good work


koi kiya janay ga meri zindgi ka afsana
apni tu adat hay her bat par muskarana
zaroori tu nahi jo muskaraye ussay gahem na ho
atta kahan hay sab ko gahem chupana
kissy ko kissy ki parwa nahi yahan
bus yaad rehta hay sab ko haq jeetana
her baat ki kahal otarty hay duniya
ata bohat hay lgon ko bat say bat banaana
kissy ko ho jo attraz prindoo kay chaychahanay par
chortay kahan hay prinday chaychahana
hum to wo hain jan lo payar
day dain gay jan kabhi azmana



very nice payar jee.
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