<>Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 07, 2013, 06:58:20 PM

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<>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

mere shabdon ka khazana lauta de
aa mere dil me ehsaas tu fir jaga de
tujh bin sooni ho gai hai meri duniya
aa jaana ab to ye jalti raat bujha de...!!

gahan andhkar me dooba jag saara
ankhiyon ko dikhe na ab koi nazara
mere ghar prem ka ek deep jala de
aa jaana ab to ye jalti raat bujha de...!!

barsaaton me jalta hai tan man aise
registaan me jalti suraj se ret jaise
inn barsaaton ko sheetal jal bana de
aa jana ab to ye jalti raat bujha de...!!


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2013, 07:00:31 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #2 on: October 07, 2013, 07:09:46 PM »

Kasak Jee Aadaab...!

WaaH jee kia baat hai... bade achche ahsaas O khayaal ko khoob piroya hai aapne...

Badi achchi kalaam huyi hai... Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #3 on: October 07, 2013, 07:11:42 PM »

mindblowing........behad khubsurat dil se nikle lafz....bahut hee khubsurat bahut hee jyda khubsurat poem.....hazaron dilii daad o mubarabaad

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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #4 on: October 07, 2013, 07:19:49 PM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #5 on: October 07, 2013, 07:41:08 PM »

barsaaton me jalta hai tan man aise
registaan me jalti suraj se ret jaise
inn barsaaton ko sheetal jal bana de
aa jana ab to ye jalti raat bujha de...!!

waah waah kasak ji bohut hi umda alfaaz
aur zabardast bayani ki hai apne
Applause


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2013, 08:41:58 PM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 07, 2013, 06:58:20 PM

<>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

Nice One.!!Ma"am.


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #7 on: October 07, 2013, 10:11:20 PM »

bahot khoooob, dheron daaaaaad Applause


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2013, 02:09:00 PM »

Waah waah waah kasak ji... behad khoob.. bahut achchi peshkash.. regular raha kijiye.. achcha lagta hai aapki poetries padhna... dili daad qubool kijiyega..


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2013, 02:22:53 PM »

massssstttt, behatareen, laajawab likha hai kasak jee..dhero daad.. happy9


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2013, 05:42:01 PM »

Quote from: nandbahu on October 07, 2013, 07:00:31 PM

bahut khoob

sukriya nandbahu jii


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #12 on: October 11, 2013, 01:08:16 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 07, 2013, 07:09:46 PM

thnku thnku parwaaz ji... aapki tareef ka hamesha intezar rehta hai... duaon me yaad rakhiye


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Re: <>*Ab to ye jalti raat bujha de*<>

«Reply #13 on: October 11, 2013, 01:09:11 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on October 07, 2013, 07:11:42 PM

mindblowing........behad khubsurat dil se nikle lafz....bahut hee khubsurat bahut hee jyda khubsurat poem.....hazaron dilii daad o mubarabaad

Clapping Smiley