Abke ruka to, iss dil ko na rok paunga..

by nashwani on July 09, 2013, 09:28:11 PM
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Judaa abke baras tujhse ho hi jaunga,,
Laut ke kabhi wapas, phir na aaunga,,
Awaaz na dena, sanam tujhe hai kasam,,
Abke ruka to, iss dil ko rok na paunga..

Kai bate.N adhoori hi chhor jaunga,,
Tujhko kabhi haal-e-dil na sunaunga,,
Rehna iss bhram me, daga de gaye ham,,
Apni safaai me kuchh na keh paunga..

Teri yado.N sang apna jeevan bitaunga,,
Thoda yaad to tujhe, main bhi aaunga,,
Bas yaad karke mujhko ansu na bahana,,
Unn motiyo.N ko abke chunn na paunga..

Mashware yaha.N bahuto.N ke paunga,,
Tu hi bata kaise tujhko bhool paunga,,
Teri tasveer sang hi ab to hai chandni,
Usee ke saath ab amavasya manaunga..

Chaha hai tujhko, tujhko hi chahunga,,
Nafrate.N teri muskura ke seh jaunga,,
Khuda par hai tujhko itna bharosa ki,,
Use bhi kaha.N main ab dosh de paunga,,

Kisto.N me apni zindagi jee hi jaunga,,
Har kisht ko teri yado.N se chukaaunga,,
Par ab main laut ke na aaunga kyunki,,
Abke ruka to, iss dil ko na rok paunga..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2013, 10:22:22 PM »
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Allah khaer kare...
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo, yonhi pahlu may baethe raho
Hai mar jayenge ham to lut jayenge, aesi baaten kiya na karo...
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2013, 11:06:49 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on July 09, 2013, 10:22:22 PM
Allah khaer kare...
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo, yonhi pahlu may baethe raho
Hai mar jayenge ham to lut jayenge, aesi baaten kiya na karo...

Shukriya bhai..happy9

Ab zindagi ka mukaam hi kuchh aisa hai
Ki rukne ki waha koi wajah nahi hai..
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2013, 11:34:43 PM »
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Upar wala har haal may apne bandon ki bhalai hi chahta hai - agar aesa mukham aaya hai to naumeed na hoiye - agli moud ke baad shayed acha mukham mil jaye - har do ko Usual Smile
Aese mukhamaat ka faeda ye to ho jaata hai ke banda Shayer banjaata hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2013, 11:42:41 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on July 09, 2013, 11:34:43 PM
Upar wala har haal may apne bandon ki bhalai hi chahta hai - agar aesa mukham aaya hai to naumeed na hoiye - agli moud ke baad shayed acha mukham mil jaye - har do ko Usual Smile
Aese mukhamaat ka faeda ye to ho jaata hai ke banda Shayer banjaata hai Usual Smile
Ummeed to kabhi ham chhorte hi nahi iqtedar bhai..

Ek uss kambakht ummeed ka hi to sahara hai..
Ehsaas likhe jo shabd me, bas yahi ab hamara hai..
Na kuchh aur ban paye to kya
Khususi Shayar ka ye title hi hame bahut pyaara hai..Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile happy9
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2013, 11:46:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:Teri yado.N sang apna jeevan bitaunga,,
Thoda yaad to tujhe, main bhi aaunga,,
Bas yaad karke mujhko ansu na bahana,,
Unn motiyo.N ko abke chunn na paunga..

Kisto.N me apni zindagi jee hi jaunga,,
Har kisht ko teri yado.N se chukaaunga,,
Par ab main laut ke na aaunga kyunki,,
Abke ruka to, iss dil ko na rok paunga..!!! Ñ
just awesome lines. Ek dam se dil ko choooooooooo gaye. bahut bahut mubarak ho is khoobsurat kalaam par.
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2013, 11:56:59 PM »
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WAAH WAAH Bahut hi Pyar se aur Dard se bhari aapki yeh ghazal, bus dil ko choo gayee.
Achha Yeh batao kaun kambaqat kehte hai tumhe jaane ko?? Agar tum gaye sirf shabdo mei b na, kasamse war ho jayega....
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2013, 12:01:48 AM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on July 09, 2013, 11:56:59 PM
WAAH WAAH Bahut hi Pyar se aur Dard se bhari aapki yeh ghazal, bus dil ko choo gayee.
Achha Yeh batao kaun kambaqat kehte hai tumhe jaane ko?? Agar tum gaye sirf shabdo mei b na, kasamse war ho jayega....

Bahut Shukriya bhupinder jee..happy9

Jee koi kehta nahi hai jaane ko
Bas khud ba khud ilm ho jata hai
Ki jaane ka waqt ho gaya hai
Karwan badhane ka waqt ho gya hai..happy9

Btw waar kaun karega..??..Aap..??..Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2013, 12:03:20 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on July 09, 2013, 11:46:05 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:Teri yado.N sang apna jeevan bitaunga,,
Thoda yaad to tujhe, main bhi aaunga,,
Bas yaad karke mujhko ansu na bahana,,
Unn motiyo.N ko abke chunn na paunga..

Kisto.N me apni zindagi jee hi jaunga,,
Har kisht ko teri yado.N se chukaaunga,,
Par ab main laut ke na aaunga kyunki,,
Abke ruka to, iss dil ko na rok paunga..!!! Ñ
just awesome lines. Ek dam se dil ko choooooooooo gaye. bahut bahut mubarak ho is khoobsurat kalaam par.

Hausla afzai ka tahe dil se shukriya aqsh jee..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: July 10, 2013, 12:15:55 AM »
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wonderful
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«Reply #10 on: July 10, 2013, 12:21:49 AM »
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Mind Blowing Creation.
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2013, 12:57:30 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 10, 2013, 12:15:55 AM
wonderful

Shukriya sirjee..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2013, 12:59:15 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 10, 2013, 12:21:49 AM
Mind Blowing Creation.

Thankyou ! ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2013, 04:35:27 AM »
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bot khub
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«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2013, 10:29:16 AM »
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bahut badhiya..
dil se likha hai aapne ise.
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