achha lagta he ya bura lagta he~

by AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 06:45:25 AM

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ye jo adhurapan he ab achha lagta he'
tum bin jeene ka har sapna ab sachcha lagta he'
tum thi to lagta tha zinda hu me'
ab murdo ki tarah zinda hona bhi achha lagta he'
ye bat lag he ki dekhne wale sochte he kuchh or'
ye aao puchho zara ki door hokar bhi unse bhala'
' Abhi ' jeena bhi kya jeena sa lagta he'
fir kya fark padta he me kahun "achha lagta he ya "~


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Re: achha lagta he ya bura lagta he~

«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 07:16:55 AM »

hume to aapka har kaha shabd achcha lagta hai......

apne zazbaaton ko yun bayaan kar jate hain aap
aapki har ek nazm sunna achcha lagta hai

padhte padhte unme kho jane ki apni adaa
hume unhe padhkar gungunana achcha lagta hai

kya hua k wo kehte hain humse k jan hai unhe
hume unko har baar rok lena achcha lagta hai

hamari baat wo jis tarah rakh lete hain har baar
*Abhi* hume aapko har baat pe satana achcha lagta hai

chale jana hai unhe yahan se durr bht durr kahin
kya fark padta hai agar hum kahen
aapke bina yahan hume sab "achcha lagta hai ya.....~~


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Re: achha lagta he ya bura lagta he~

«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 07:25:04 AM »

wow wot a mind blowing composition Abhi..

kya likha hai yaar...

aur anamika ji aapne bhi kya khoob reply diya hai...


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Re: achha lagta he ya bura lagta he~

«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2010, 07:32:39 AM »

are wah rancho aap bhi yahan he..bhai sukriya apko pasand aya~


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Re: achha lagta he ya bura lagta he~

«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 07:36:41 AM »

ha abhi ji ham bhi to hai yaha... aapki hausalafjayi karne ke liye... well sukriya aapko bhi...


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Re: achha lagta he ya bura lagta he~

«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 09:05:18 AM »

Bahut khoob Abhi ji... bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki... bahut khoob...!!!

aur Kasak ji aapke jawaab ka bhi jawaab nahi... bhaut pyaara jawaab likha hai aapne...!!!