Ajeeb manzar!

by salma786 on March 31, 2009, 09:58:14 AM
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Wo manzar bhi ajeeb tha,
Jab tu mere kareeb tha,
Bhul baithi thi khud ko tujh me,
Jaise tu hi mera naseeb tha!

Na thi mujhe khabar shaam ki,
Na subha ka koi thikana tha,
Ek teri hi akhon me sara jahaan tha mera,
Jaise falak ka har tara tera diwana tha!

Thi bandishe zamane ki, bich hamare,
Jinhe bas tere ek ishare pe tod ayi thi,
Tere hi rang me rang liya tha khud ko,
Apna wajood mai tere piche chod ayi thi!

Aisa manzar na dekha na suna hoga kisi ne,
Ishq me aisi tabahi mere hi naseeb ayi,
Jiske sath bitana chaha tha sari umr maine,
Mujh se pehle hi maut unke kareeb ayi!!
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«Reply #1 on: March 31, 2009, 11:15:43 AM »
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Bohot khoobsurat..bohot khoob Salma dear
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«Reply #2 on: March 31, 2009, 01:19:10 PM »
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Nice work Salma....
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2009, 01:30:44 AM »
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Nice one salma dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2009, 11:17:46 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 31, 2009, 11:15:43 AM
Bohot khoobsurat..bohot khoob Salma dear

Shkriya Talat sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2009, 11:23:29 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 31, 2009, 01:19:10 PM
Nice work Salma....
Shukriya sajid ji apne tawajju diya or gramatical error dhund kar mujhe bataya...
Post karte waqt thoda busy thi to dhyan se nahi pad payi thi... Jaha mujhe zarurat mehsus huyi maine changes kar diye hai!!
Thanks once again!
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2009, 11:25:38 AM »
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Bahut khoob Salma dear
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2009, 11:31:45 AM »
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Nice One Salma Ji,.
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«Reply #8 on: April 06, 2009, 03:38:15 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 01, 2009, 11:25:38 AM
Bahut khoob Salma dear

Shukriya Roja dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 06, 2009, 03:39:12 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on April 01, 2009, 11:31:45 AM
Nice One Salma Ji,.
Thanks Azeem ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2013, 04:21:17 AM »
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So Nice.
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