akela akela safar (nam)

by poonamA on May 15, 2013, 03:11:21 PM
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akela akela safar hai zindagi ka
hua beasar hai asr zindagi ka
fir ubhre kar rahmat ke badal barso
aaj pukarta hai wiraan thar zindagi ka

na amrit ki dhaara na ulfat ka zaam
pee rahi hu har dam  zahar zindagi ka
na raah na rasta na koyee manzil
na koi thikana, na ghar zindagi ka
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2013, 04:06:10 PM »
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Poonam Jee Aadaab..!


Bahut khoob je bahut khoob bade hi gehre aur khoob khayaaloN ko achche lafzoN meiN piroya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Aik se badhkar aik khayaal rahe... Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2013, 05:49:50 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai ma'am..happy9
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2013, 06:47:42 PM »
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v good
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«Reply #4 on: May 15, 2013, 08:02:06 PM »
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Awesome. bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2013, 12:53:43 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2013, 03:05:44 PM »
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Aadaab Parwaazjee aur shukriya aapko
Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 15, 2013, 04:06:10 PM
Poonam Jee Aadaab..!


Bahut khoob je bahut khoob bade hi gehre aur khoob khayaaloN ko achche lafzoN meiN piroya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Aik se badhkar aik khayaal rahe... Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2013, 03:06:30 PM »
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shukriya Ashwani
Quote from: nashwani on May 15, 2013, 05:49:50 PM
bahut khoob likha hai ma'am..happy9
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2013, 03:07:08 PM »
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thx sainijee
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2013, 03:08:36 PM »
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thx sudhir
Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 16, 2013, 12:53:43 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2013, 03:09:14 PM »
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shukriya aqsh
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Awesome. bahut khoob. dheron daad.
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