akelapan

by shyama on July 18, 2007, 09:48:26 PM

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shyama

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mere maazi ki saza ab payi hai
ye woh dard hai ke jiss ki na koi duhaai hai
kar diya hai raqeebo ne roshan jahaan uska
yahaan to bas mein aur meri tanhai hai love9


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akelapan

«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2007, 12:40:11 AM »

v.gudd !


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akelapan

«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2007, 03:26:00 AM »

Wah kaya baat hai Shyama ji, aaj kaafi dino baad dekha hai aapko kaha the ??

Sabash Shyama ji bahut achcha

Tum se achchi to meri tanhaai hai har pal mere sang rahti hai
Roti hoo tumhari yaad main jab mat ro mat ro mujh se kahti hai
Chalti hai har kadam saath humsafar ban meri tanhaai
Aur sukh dukh saare jeevan ke mere sang sahti hai


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akelapan

«Reply #3 on: July 19, 2007, 07:12:12 AM »

Shyama.. achha likha hai aapne.

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Poems.. you did a nice job.. really nice !


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Re: akelapan

«Reply #4 on: July 19, 2007, 04:15:03 PM »

Quote from: "shyama"

mere maazi ki saza ab payi hai
ye woh dard hai ke jiss ki na koi duhaai hai
kar diya hai raqeebo ne roshan jahaan uska
yahaan to bas mein aur meri tanhai hai love9

Nicely expressed shyama. Keep up.


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akelapan

«Reply #5 on: August 01, 2007, 07:38:45 AM »

bohaat khoob shyama and sameer !!!


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«Reply #6 on: August 01, 2007, 10:23:52 AM »

Manav ji ye to galat baat huyi aapne sirf tareef kiyi, apane kimti alfaaz to likhe hi nahi manav ji hum to kayal hai aap ke aur aap ho ki chup chap aaye aur chal diye chalo ab jaldi se aap bhi yaha kuch likhye achcha lagega


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akelapan

«Reply #7 on: August 03, 2007, 04:09:59 AM »

sameer ji... koshish toh ki thi likhne ki par kuch acha sa bana nahi tabh... abhi phir kuch sanjoya hai..shayad aapko pasand aaye :arrow:

abb toh har rasta mera tanhai ka hai
na chah kar bhi mausam judai ka hai
kya iteja hum apne lafzon se karein ab
jis aor hum chal diye,woh najara tabhai ka hai