akele

by reofior on August 22, 2013, 11:48:01 PM

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raaho pe khushiya bikhri mili
uthane gaye to patto se kahi woh ud gaye
hum chal rahe the kal bhi akele
aur aaj bhi akele hi reh gaye.

dua kar ab to hum bhi thak chuke
na mila jo chaha kabhi,
chahat ko yuhi taraste reh gaye
asmaan me chamke lakho sitare
bas ek mere sitare ko dhundte reh gaye

koshish to karte the zindagi se gale lagne ki hum
par zindagi k samne hum tut gaye
hum chal rahe the kal bhi akele
aur aaj bhi akele hi reh gaye.


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Re: akele

«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2013, 12:01:45 AM »

Is pursoz nazm par daad apko reofior ji


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Re: akele

«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2013, 12:10:02 AM »

good lines keep writing


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Re: akele

«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2013, 01:17:34 AM »

bahot khoob Applause


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Re: akele

«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2013, 12:06:35 PM »

bahut khoob


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Re: akele

«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2013, 12:34:15 PM »

very nice


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Re: akele

«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2013, 12:56:24 PM »

very nice


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Re: akele

«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2013, 01:38:52 PM »

bahut khoob...


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Re: akele

«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2013, 08:57:16 PM »


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