akele

by reofior on August 22, 2013, 11:48:01 PM
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raaho pe khushiya bikhri mili
uthane gaye to patto se kahi woh ud gaye
hum chal rahe the kal bhi akele
aur aaj bhi akele hi reh gaye.

dua kar ab to hum bhi thak chuke
na mila jo chaha kabhi,
chahat ko yuhi taraste reh gaye
asmaan me chamke lakho sitare
bas ek mere sitare ko dhundte reh gaye

koshish to karte the zindagi se gale lagne ki hum
par zindagi k samne hum tut gaye
hum chal rahe the kal bhi akele
aur aaj bhi akele hi reh gaye.
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2013, 12:01:45 AM »
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Is pursoz nazm par daad apko reofior ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2013, 12:10:02 AM »
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good lines keep writing
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bahot khoob Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2013, 12:06:35 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2013, 12:34:15 PM »
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very nice Applause
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«Reply #8 on: August 23, 2013, 08:57:16 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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