Akeli chalti rahi!

by salma786 on May 26, 2009, 04:03:50 AM
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Din dhalta raha sanse chalti rahi,
Ek tera naam lekar mai bhi shaam si dhalti rahi,

Jis kadar tez dhup se barf paani banti rahi,
Teri yadoon me tadap kar mai bhi pighalti rahi,

Thi khwaahish tu phir mujhe hasaye,ek baar to laut aye,
Us khwaashish ko seene me ab tak dafan karti rahi,

Jis tarah mitti ki pyaas bujhaye ek boond baarish ki,
Isi aas me ab tak mai teri ahat ko sunti rahi,

Mile hazaro musafir jo sath de jate kisi mod par,
Par ek tere hi asre me mai ab tak akeli chalti rahi!
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«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2009, 05:57:58 AM »
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Very nice salma bahut hi khoob
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2009, 07:16:36 AM »
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Mile Hazaro musafir, jo saath de jaate kisi mod par
par ek tere hi Aasre par, Mai Abtak Akele chalti rahee....

Beautiful Lines..... mujhe behad pasand aaai....

bahot accha likha hai aapne salma...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2009, 07:54:02 AM »
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good work salma ji!
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2009, 12:46:08 PM »
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Bahut khubsurat hai Salma Ji
Good.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2009, 12:59:12 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Salma dear... Bohot din baad padha tumhe...
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2009, 03:49:30 AM »
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Quote from: vikas2210 on May 26, 2009, 05:57:58 AM
Very nice salma bahut hi khoob

Shukriya Vikas ji!
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«Reply #7 on: May 28, 2009, 03:50:43 AM »
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Quote from: Alam Qazi on May 26, 2009, 07:16:36 AM

Mile Hazaro musafir, jo saath de jaate kisi mod par
par ek tere hi Aasre par, Mai Abtak Akele chalti rahee....

Beautiful Lines..... mujhe behad pasand aaai....

bahot accha likha hai aapne salma...

 Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Alam Qazi ji !
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2009, 03:51:59 AM »
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Quote from: vitasta on May 26, 2009, 07:54:02 AM
good work salma ji!

Thanks Vitasta  ji!
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2009, 03:53:42 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 26, 2009, 12:46:08 PM
Bahut khubsurat hai Salma Ji
Good.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Rastogi ji!
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2009, 03:55:03 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 26, 2009, 12:59:12 PM
Bohot Khoob Salma dear... Bohot din baad padha tumhe...

Shukriya Talat si Usual Smile... Inshallah jald pehle ki tarah likhungi!
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«Reply #11 on: May 29, 2009, 04:33:09 AM »
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Salma Ji Aap To Humesha Hi Lajawab Likhti Hain.. aur Yeh Rachna Bhi aapne Behad Khubsoorati se Likhi hai.. Ek ek Lafz Apni Kahani Bayaan kar raha hai.. Applause Applause

Pyaar me Mili Judaai Ke Dard Bhare Lamhaaton Ko Lafzon ki Zubaan Di Hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooooooob..!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #12 on: May 29, 2009, 05:31:06 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Salma!!!

 Har Ek Lafz Dard Bayaan Kar Raha Tha..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2009, 07:50:28 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 28, 2009, 08:24:05 PM
Bahot acha likha hai aapne Salma ji,very nice ghazal

Shukriya Kaash ji!
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«Reply #14 on: May 29, 2009, 07:55:54 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on May 29, 2009, 04:33:09 AM
Salma Ji Aap To Humesha Hi Lajawab Likhti Hain.. aur Yeh Rachna Bhi aapne Behad Khubsoorati se Likhi hai.. Ek ek Lafz Apni Kahani Bayaan kar raha hai.. Applause Applause

Pyaar me Mili Judaai Ke Dard Bhare Lamhaaton Ko Lafzon ki Zubaan Di Hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooooooob..!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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Apka  tahe dil se shukriya Mann ji... Koshish rahegi behtar likhne ki Usual Smile
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