~~~Akhiri Intzaar~~~

by Sammual on June 20, 2008, 08:13:18 PM
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Hamara Pyar Ghamo Ke Peeche Na Chup Jaye
Kahin Hamari Zindgi Yoon Chalti Na Ruk Jaye
Yaad Aye Kabhi To Mil Lena Akkar
Kahin Tumhare Intzaar Main Saanse Hamari Na Ruk Jaye.

Karte Hai Tumse Bahut Pyar Ye Kaise Tumhe Samjhaye
Aati Hai Tumhari Bahut Yaad Ye Kaise Tumhe Batayain
Jaldi Anna Mari Jaan Kahin Ye Dhadkane Hamari Na Ruk Jaye
Tumhare Intzaar Main Saanse Hamari Na Ruk Jaye.

Tum Bin Jee Nahin Sakte Hum Mar Jayenge
Tumse Juda Hokar Kaise Reh Payenge
Tumhare Deedar Ko Tarash Rahi Hai Ye Ankhain
Tumhe Ik Baar Dekhne Ki Khawaish Adhuri Na Reh Jaye
Yaad Aye Kabhi To Mil Lena Akkar
Kahin Tumhare Intzaar Main Saanse Hamari Na Ruk Jaye.

Sub Kuch Tumhare Naam Kiya Hai
Zindgi Main Bus Tumhara Hi Namm Liya Hai
Pyar Hai Sirf Tumse
Ye Baat Zubaan Par Aati Aati Na Ruk Jaye
Yaad Aye Kabhi To Mil Lena Akkar
Kahin Tumhare Intzaar Main Saanse Hamari Na Ruk Jaye.
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: June 21, 2008, 06:59:59 AM »
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VERY NICE SAMMUAL,
KEEP IT UP.... Applause Applause
BY. K.SHAEL

MUJHE INTZAAR TERE LOUT AANE KA NAHI,
MUJHE INTZAAR TERE MERE PYAR KO SAMJH JANE
KA HAI,
MUJHE INTZAAR TUJHE APNE DARD DIKHANE KA NAHI,
TUJHE INTZAAR TERE IN DARDO KO DENE PAR SHARMINDA
HO JANE KA HAI,
MUJHE INTZAAR TUJHE EK BAAR DEKHNE KA NAHI,
PAR TUJHE DEKHTE HI TERI BAAHO ME MAR JANE KA HAI....
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«Reply #2 on: June 21, 2008, 07:51:09 AM »
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Sammual Saahib very nice and truly heart breaking...

K.shael You are really a wonderful poet...
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Sonia01
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«Reply #3 on: June 21, 2008, 07:55:51 AM »
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MUJHE INTZAAR TERE LOUT AANE KA NAHI,
MUJHE INTZAAR TERE MERE PYAR KO SAMJH JANE
KA HAI,

Bahut khoob sister  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2008, 08:03:42 AM »
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THANX SO MUCH,
SYEDNAMI & SONIYA JI....
AAP BHI SAATH DETE TO AACHA LAGTA,
BY. K.SHAEL

MUJHE INTZAAR MERI KHUSHIYO KA NAHI,
MUJHE INTZAAR TERE DIYE GAMO KI HADD KA HAI,
MUJHE INTZAAR MERI HASSI KA NAHI,
MUJHE INTZAAR TERA MERE SAATH RONE KA HAI,
MUJHE INTZAAR NAYE SURAJ KA NAHI,
MUJHE INTZAAR TERE SAATH HAR DOOBI HUI RAAT KA HAI
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Sammual
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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2008, 07:18:20 PM »
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Thank you K Shael ji and syed saahib.
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syednaami
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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2008, 07:32:56 PM »
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You are welcome Dear Sammual... Thanks...
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palkhi
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2008, 05:08:20 PM »
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Wow........fabulous writing Sammual nd K.shael!!!


  Har Lamha Main Ginthi Rehthi Hoon,
  Har Lamha Main Dua Karthi Rehthi Hoon,
  Har Lamha Main Intazaar  Karthi Rehthi Hoon,
  Ginthi Hoon Main Har Lamha Dard Mein Guzara Hua,
  Dua Karthi Hoon Main Har Lamha Appni Kwabon Koh Saach Ho Janai Ka,
Intazaar Karthi Rehthi Hoon Main Har Lamha Appni Khushiyon Ka......
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syednaami
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«Reply #8 on: June 24, 2008, 06:19:38 PM »
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Excellent work Sabah... You are going up and up in the sky...
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palkhi
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«Reply #9 on: June 24, 2008, 11:42:58 PM »
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Lolz..........thanks.......
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Sammual
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2008, 04:10:33 AM »
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Shukriya Palkhi Ji
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syednaami
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2008, 09:25:58 PM »
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Quote from: palkhi on June 24, 2008, 05:08:20 PM
Wow........fabulous writing Sammual nd K.shael!!!


  Har Lamha Main Ginthi Rehthi Hoon,
  Har Lamha Main Dua Karthi Rehthi Hoon,
  Har Lamha Main Intazaar  Karthi Rehthi Hoon,
  Ginthi Hoon Main Har Lamha Dard Mein Guzara Hua,
  Dua Karthi Hoon Main Har Lamha Appni Kwabon Koh Saach Ho Janai Ka,
Intazaar Karthi Rehthi Hoon Main Har Lamha Appni Khushiyon Ka......

Intazaar tha ki aaoge, -
Zindagi men meri, -
Na jaane kyun aisa hua, -
Ho gaye sab khwab kirchi, -
Milne ka vaada karke, -
Judai degaye umr bhar ki. -

(Syed Naami)
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«Reply #12 on: June 27, 2008, 07:12:19 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on June 25, 2008, 09:25:58 PM

Intazaar tha ki aaoge, -
Zindagi men meri, -
Na jaane kyun aisa hua, -
Ho gaye sab khwab kirchi, -
Milne ka vaada karke, -
Judai degaye umr bhar ki. -

(Syed Naami)

   Awwwwww....fab reply!!

       Bewaja Kiya Tuhne Mera Intazaar,
       Main Tho Appnai Kwaab Na Poorai Kar Saki,
       Tho Appkai Kaise Poorai Kar Pathi,
       Bewaja Mujko Saza Di Jaa Rahi Hai,
       Bewaja Mujko Dard Mein Jeenai Par Raha Hai,
       Intazaar Kar Rahin Hoon Kissi Kai Annai Ka,
       Intazaar Kar Rahin Hoon Main Appni Khushion Kai Annai Ka........
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Sammual
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«Reply #13 on: June 27, 2008, 07:25:28 PM »
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Wah Wah Good Palkhi Ji.
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«Reply #14 on: June 27, 2008, 07:32:04 PM »
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wah wah wah!!! bahoot khoob sammual jee, ek ek shabd kamal ka chun kar apne is kavita mai piroya hai.. Simple words with deep meanings and pain!! Good creation!!

Shally, Sami and Palkhi app sab ne bahoot acha sath diya hai sammual jee ka!!

Good job by all!!
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