Ankhon Mein Nami Aaj Bhi Hai

by ali_nadan on February 17, 2010, 02:15:59 PM
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Aadab,
Meri pehli koshish hai, plz comment zaroor kijiye ga.. Usual Smile

Jane kitni ratein beeteen
beet gaye jane kitne din
par ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai

socha na tha itna dard hoga
na hame pata tha ki ye haal hoga
chhor to diya tumhe zamaane se dar kar
par bhool na payenge tumko chahe mar kar

ab bas pachhtane ke siwa or kya reh gaya
jaise samandar ki lehar me mera sab kuchh beh gaya
chhoote nahi chhutati tumhari yadein
kisko sunaun mein apne fariyadein

maloom hai hame wapas tum na aogi
khayalon me mere lekin har roz aogi
chahe jo karun, jitna bhulana chahun tumhe
ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai
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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2010, 02:39:08 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI   ALI_NADAN JI.....

AANKHEN MERI TARASTI TERE LIYE AAJ BHI HAI
IN AANKHON MEIN TERI KAMI AAJ BHI HAI
JAANTA HUN TU KABHI NAHIN AAYENGI
PAR TERE CHEHRE PAR MERI AANKHEN ZAMI AAJ BHI HAI.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2010, 02:46:31 PM »
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Usual Smile bohat bohat shukriya... or bohat khoob likha aapne.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2010, 03:08:17 PM »
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bahut pyara likha hai aapne nadan ji.....keep writing.... Applause Thumbs UP Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2010, 03:11:58 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2010, 03:31:22 PM »
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Quote from: cara on February 17, 2010, 02:39:08 PM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI   ALI_NADAN JI.....

AANKHEN MERI TARASTI TERE LIYE AAJ BHI HAI
IN AANKHON MEIN TERI KAMI AAJ BHI HAI
JAANTA HUN TU KABHI NAHIN AAYENGI
PAR TERE CHEHRE PAR MERI AANKHEN ZAMI AAJ BHI HAI.....
nice cara ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2010, 06:54:14 PM »
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  waah bahut khoob ali ji..n nice lines cara ji...
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2010, 02:55:39 PM »
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aap sabhi shayaron or shayaraon ki himmat afzai ka bohat shukriya...

Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2010, 02:04:50 PM »
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Quote from: ali_nadan on February 17, 2010, 02:15:59 PM
Aadab,
Meri pehli koshish hai, plz comment zaroor kijiye ga.. Usual Smile

Jane kitni ratein beeteen
beet gaye jane kitne din
par ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai

socha na tha itna dard hoga
na hame pata tha ki ye haal hoga
chhor to diya tumhe zamaane se dar kar
par bhool na payenge tumko chahe mar kar

ab bas pachhtane ke siwa or kya reh gaya
jaise samandar ki lehar me mera sab kuchh beh gaya
chhoote nahi chhutati tumhari yadein
kisko sunaun mein apne fariyadein

maloom hai hame wapas tum na aogi
khayalon me mere lekin har roz aogi
chahe jo karun, jitna bhulana chahun tumhe
ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai


Bohot Khoob Ali ji..bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2010, 03:39:18 PM »
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Haww.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob  Ali ji !
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2010, 04:07:23 PM »
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Tareef ka bohat bohat shukriya Celmira ji or Sophie ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 22, 2010, 04:47:55 PM »
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bahut zyada bhi achcha nahin hai!! theek sa hai bas!!
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2010, 02:28:09 PM »
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Usual Smile Usual Smile comment ka shukriya gulzar sahab.. behtar likhne ki koshish karunga...
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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2010, 11:50:18 AM »
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Quote from: ali_nadan on February 17, 2010, 02:15:59 PM
Aadab,
Meri pehli koshish hai, plz comment zaroor kijiye ga.. Usual Smile

Jane kitni ratein beeteen
beet gaye jane kitne din
par ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai

socha na tha itna dard hoga
na hame pata tha ki ye haal hoga
chhor to diya tumhe zamaane se dar kar
par bhool na payenge tumko chahe mar kar

ab bas pachhtane ke siwa or kya reh gaya
jaise samandar ki lehar me mera sab kuchh beh gaya
chhoote nahi chhutati tumhari yadein
kisko sunaun mein apne fariyadein

maloom hai hame wapas tum na aogi
khayalon me mere lekin har roz aogi
chahe jo karun, jitna bhulana chahun tumhe
ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai


Bohat KhuB Ali Ji... Ehsaas ko bohat khubsurti se sajaya hai ... Keep it up

Aaj bhi dil teri raah hai dekha karta
Aaj bhi tujh se nahi koi shikwa karta
Bas teri shabeeh ko aankho me chhupa kar
Aaj bhi tujhko hi jaane kyu pooja karta


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«Reply #14 on: March 15, 2010, 03:22:03 AM »
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Quote from: ali_nadan on February 17, 2010, 02:15:59 PM
Aadab,
Meri pehli koshish hai, plz comment zaroor kijiye ga.. Usual Smile

Jane kitni ratein beeteen
beet gaye jane kitne din
par ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai

socha na tha itna dard hoga
na hame pata tha ki ye haal hoga
chhor to diya tumhe zamaane se dar kar
par bhool na payenge tumko chahe mar kar

ab bas pachhtane ke siwa or kya reh gaya
jaise samandar ki lehar me mera sab kuchh beh gaya
chhoote nahi chhutati tumhari yadein
kisko sunaun mein apne fariyadein

maloom hai hame wapas tum na aogi
khayalon me mere lekin har roz aogi
chahe jo karun, jitna bhulana chahun tumhe
ankhon mein nami aaj bhi hai
tumhari kami aaj bhi hai


Bahut Khoob Ali Ji
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