apna na paye

by priyanka.jasmine on April 08, 2010, 11:49:48 AM
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Rote huye dil ko ham mana na paye

Toote huye sapno ko ham jata na paye

Aasmaan me patang udaane ki shouk hame bhi hai

Par manja ko kabhi ham apna na paye
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2010, 12:17:00 PM »
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Wah wah Priyanka ji bahot achha likha hai. Nice creation.
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2010, 01:04:49 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Priyanka ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Bahut hi achchha likha hai aap ne Priyanka JI
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