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Asar Dekha.............................................................raji

by Rajigujral on January 05, 2015, 01:35:18 PM

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Kal teri yaad ka asar dekha,
Nahi the tum, tumko magar dekha.

Haste the muskurate the tum magar,
Maine kyun ankho ko teri, tar dekha.

Jhoota nikla, pandit, maulvi ka vada,
Dil ki har dua ko maine, be-asar dekha.

Bekhud kiya tere khayalon ne iss kadar,
Dekha tamasha-e-duniya, nahi magar dekha.

Mila de us se jo tujh main hai taqat,
Dikha de jo TERA, nahi hunar dekha.

Apna hi dukh hai har kisi ko bada,
Auron ke gam se sabko, be-khabar dekha.

Sab kehte the ki maikade main milta hai sakun,
'Raji' ne be-chain har maikash, magar dekha.


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Re: Asar Dekha.............................................................raji

«Reply #1 on: January 05, 2015, 02:20:10 PM »

Quote from: Rajigujral on January 05, 2015, 01:35:18 PM

Kal teri yaad ka asar dekha,
Nahi the tum, tumko magar dekha.

Haste the muskurate the tum magar,
Maine kyun ankho ko teri, tar dekha.

Jhoota nikla, pandit, maulvi ka vada,
Dil ki har dua ko maine, be-asar dekha.

Bekhud kiya tere khayalon ne iss kadar,
Dekha tamasha-e-duniya, magar nahi dekha.

Mila de us se jo tujh main hai taqat,
Dikha de jo TERA, hunar nahi dekha.

Apna hi dukh hai har kisi ko bada,
Auron ke gam se sabko, be-khabar dekha.

Sab kehte the ki maikade main milta hai sakun,
'Raji' ne be-chain har maikash, magar dekha.

good one,sir but the marked one to be recomposed inorder to remove 'nahin' to make symetrical


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Re: Asar Dekha.............................................................raji

«Reply #2 on: January 05, 2015, 03:01:16 PM »

waah waah


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«Reply #3 on: January 05, 2015, 04:15:56 PM »

wwaah waaaah !!!!


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Re: Asar Dekha.............................................................raji

«Reply #4 on: January 05, 2015, 04:24:32 PM »

Waah waah bohat khub


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Re: Asar Dekha.............................................................raji

«Reply #5 on: January 05, 2015, 10:06:23 PM »

bahut umdah Raji Jee, dheron daad. icon_flower


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Re: Asar Dekha.............................................................raji

«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2015, 09:01:59 AM »

bahut khub rajiji........


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Re: Asar Dekha.............................................................raji

«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2015, 01:04:42 PM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on January 05, 2015, 02:20:10 PM

good one,sir but the marked one to be recomposed inorder to remove 'nahin' to make symetrical

Thank you for your comments sir. In fact nahi in these two lines comes before magar and hunar. it is my mistake in typing. i am grateful for pointing it out.
raji


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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2015, 02:06:46 PM »

Khoob kaha


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