Baat dil kee.......Mamta Bajpai

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Baat dil kee kahee nahee jaatee
bebasee bhee sahee nahee jaatee

daastaaN ban gayee hai jind meree
wo bhee tumse sunee nahee jaatee

teer ban ke jo dil me chubh jaaye
baat aisee kahee nahee jaatee

door rah ke tu tod le naate
dil se dil kee lagee nahee jaatee

dene waale ne sab diyaa mujhko
bas teree hee kamee nahee jaatee

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2011, 10:15:51 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 01, 2011, 08:35:13 AM
Baat dil kee kahee nahee jaatee
bebasee bhee sahee nahee jaatee

daastaaN ban gayee hai jind meree
wo bhee tumse sunee nahee jaatee

teer ban ke jo dil me chubh jaaye
baat aisee kahee nahee jaatee

door rah ke tu tod le naate
dil se dil kee lagee nahee jaatee

dene waale ne sab diyaa mujhko
bas teree hee kamee nahee jaatee

Mamta Bajpai


naaaaaaaaaaaice one mamta ji


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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2011, 10:21:31 AM »
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Shukriyaa K A jee!
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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2011, 11:02:21 AM »
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Mamtaa Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab waah bahut khoob behad achchi kalaam kahi
hai aapne...... Aapka rawaaN andaaz sadaa se ashaaroN
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 01, 2011, 08:35:13 AM
Baat dil kee kahee nahee jaatee
bebasee bhee sahee nahee jaatee


door rah ke tu tod le naate
dil se dil kee lagee nahee jaatee

Kia kahne bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile          

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2011, 11:12:32 AM »
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bahooot khoob mamta ji ..
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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2011, 11:53:56 AM »
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excellent creation mamta di...
sply last one...
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2011, 12:31:58 PM »
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Mamta Ji,

Ek aur achchhee ghazal
dil se dil ki lagee naheen jaatee..very nice..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2011, 12:49:21 PM »
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Parwaaz jee ek lambe arse ke baad aap kee nazar humaare qalaam par hui....waqt dene or pasand farmaane kaa behad shukriyaa........
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2011, 12:55:20 PM »
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Shukriyaa Sanjeev!
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2011, 01:35:47 PM »
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maate namaskaar…
wah wah kya khubsurat dard e judai hai…
har wo bat hai jo iss post ke section me honee chahiye…
lajawaab nagma…

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«Reply #10 on: June 03, 2011, 05:49:40 PM »
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Very Nice Bohat Bohat Khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #11 on: September 20, 2011, 03:25:01 PM »
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shukriyaa Yaash jee!
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Sab se pahale job milne kee dheron badhai or phir humeshaa kee tarah dheron aasheerwaad! der se aasheerwaad dene ke liye saath hee maafee bhee maanganaa chaahoongee........
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«Reply #13 on: September 20, 2011, 03:28:24 PM »
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shukriyaa Priyaa!
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Houslaa afzai kaa behad shukriyaa Satish jee!
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