Baat karke booljaana

by tamanna1 on August 28, 2011, 07:16:47 AM
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Roz humse baathe karthe te aap
Ek din nahin kiya tho bohut akela mesoos karthe te aap
Jab baathe hothi thi, pyaar ki baathe karthe te aap
Jab hum achaanak kahin mile, tho bohut kush hothe te aap

Aur ab hum aap se pyaar jo karne lage dil aur jaan se
aap ke bina ek pal bi bichadkar rehena muskil he
Aap se jab meine is baath ki zikar kiya

Bolne lage humse
" ek acchi dost ke sevai, kuch nahin the aap"
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2011, 07:20:12 AM »
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PLEASE CIRRECT YOUR TITTLE
BAATH NAHI BAAT HONA CHAHIYA
Quote from: tamanna1 on August 28, 2011, 07:16:47 AM
Roz humse baathe karthe te aap
Ek din nahin kiya tho bohut akela mesoos karthe te aap
Jab baathe hothi thi, pyaar ki baathe karthe te aap
Jab hum achaanak kahin mile, tho bohut kush hothe te aap

Aur ab hum aap se pyaar jo karne lage dil aur jaan se
aap ke bina ek pal bi bichadkar rehena muskil he
Aap se jab meine is baath ki zikar kiya

Bolne lage humse
" ek acchi dost ke sevai, kuch nahin the aap"
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«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2011, 07:23:06 AM »
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thanks for the correction manoj ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 28, 2011, 07:26:52 AM »
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Quote from: tamanna1 on August 28, 2011, 07:23:06 AM
thanks for the correction manoj ji
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Roz humse baathe karthe te aap
Ek din nahin kiya tho bohut akela mesoos karthe te aap
Jab baathe hothi thi, pyaar ki baathe karthe te aap
Jab hum achaanak kahin mile, tho bohut kush hothe te aap

Aur ab hum aap se pyaar jo karne lage dil aur jaan se
aap ke bina ek pal bi bichadkar rehena muskil he
Aap se jab meine is baath ki zikar kiya

Bolne lage humse
" ek acchi dost ke sevai, kuch nahin the aap"
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2011, 12:54:01 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2011, 01:00:40 PM »
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bht khoob..

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thank you all
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2011, 05:32:52 PM »
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tamanna1 ji,

Nice thoughts..keep it up
all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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shukriyaa Satish ji....thanks for the encouragement icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: August 28, 2011, 05:59:32 PM »
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boht acha likha hai
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Quote from: tamanna1 on August 28, 2011, 07:16:47 AM
Roz humse baathe karthe te aap
Ek din nahin kiya tho bohut akela mesoos karthe te aap
Jab baathe hothi thi, pyaar ki baathe karthe te aap
Jab hum achaanak kahin mile, tho bohut kush hothe te aap

Aur ab hum aap se pyaar jo karne lage dil aur jaan se
aap ke bina ek pal bi bichadkar rehena muskil he
Aap se jab meine is baath ki zikar kiya

Bolne lage humse
" ek acchi dost ke sevai, kuch nahin the aap"

very nice
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