Badi Zalim Hijr Ki Ye Ghadiya Hain..(Shihab)

by majid on May 04, 2011, 09:26:45 AM
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                  Na  Chamakti  Maa,they  Pey  Bindiya Hai
                  Na Khanakti Haatho,n Mein , Chudiya Hai.


                  Tum Gaye Ho  Jabsey  Chhodkar , Tabsey
                  Roothi Roothi Si Jaise  Bas , Neendiya Hai.

      
                  Nahi Sajte Chehre Pe Tabassum Ke Phool
                  Behti Rehti Bas  Aankhon  Se , Nadiya Hai.


                  Is Qadar Ho Gayi Hun Qaid Khalaon Mein
                  Ki  Jaise  Hoti  Pinjre  Mein  ,  Chidiya Hai.


                  Abto  Aaja  Kisi  Bahaane  Se , Aey Sanam
                  Badi  Hi  Zalim  Hijr Ki , Yeh  Ghadiya Hai.




                               ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2011, 09:31:49 AM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat hai shihab

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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2011, 09:35:16 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob majid Bhai!!!

khoobsurat Ehsaaso Se Bharpoor!!!

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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2011, 12:02:57 PM »
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Bhai, kya baat..
Bahaut bahaut aur bahaut khoob..
Behti ankhon se nadiya hai..Bahaut sach kaha..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2011, 01:24:23 PM »
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bht bht khoob shihab ji...
sply 2nd last...
simply superb...
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2011, 03:35:49 PM »
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wah
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2011, 02:10:30 AM »
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Very Nice Shihab Ji
Ek Aurat Ke Jazbaton Ko Aapney
BaKhoobi Lafzon Mein Piroya Hai
Bohat Bohat Khoob Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2011, 05:44:20 AM »
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                  Na  Chamakti  Maa,they  Pey  Bindiya Hai
                  Na Khanakti Haatho,n Mein , Chudiya Hai.


                  Tum Gaye Ho  Jabsey  Chhodkar , Tabsey
                  Roothi Roothi Si Jaise  Bas , Neendiya Hai.

       
                  Nahi Sajte Chehre Pe Tabassum Ke Phool
                  Behti Rehti Bas  Aankhon  Se , Nadiya Hai.


                  Is Qadar Ho Gayi Hun Qaid Khalaon Mein
                  Ki  Jaise  Hoti  Pinjre  Mein  ,  Chidiya Hai.


                  Abto  Aaja  Kisi  Bahaane  Se , Aey Sanam
                  Badi  Hi  Zalim  Hijr Ki , Yeh  Ghadiya Hai.




                               ~Shihab~


bhaut bahut bahut khoob shihab sahab
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2011, 06:43:11 AM »
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                  Na  Chamakti  Maa,they  Pey  Bindiya Hai
                  Na Khanakti Haatho,n Mein , Chudiya Hai.


                  Tum Gaye Ho  Jabsey  Chhodkar , Tabsey
                  Roothi Roothi Si Jaise  Bas , Neendiya Hai.

       
                  Nahi Sajte Chehre Pe Tabassum Ke Phool
                  Behti Rehti Bas  Aankhon  Se , Nadiya Hai.


                  Is Qadar Ho Gayi Hun Qaid Khalaon Mein
                  Ki  Jaise  Hoti  Pinjre  Mein  ,  Chidiya Hai.


                  Abto  Aaja  Kisi  Bahaane  Se , Aey Sanam
                  Badi  Hi  Zalim  Hijr Ki , Yeh  Ghadiya Hai.




                               ~Shihab~


Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:Bht Khoob Likha hai aap ne Shihab Ji.. Bht khoob.  Clapping Smiley

Na Hothon me Hasi Rahi,
Na Ab Woh Mazaq Rahi..

Na Karne ka kuch mann hai,
Nah Neend Aati hai aankhon me..

Bus Har Pal Dil pe Tum Bhasa Hai.
Ab toe Hadd Hoegayi hai Judaii Ka Pal,
Rok ta Nahi Aeisa Zalim Waqt hai..


-SKY-

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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2011, 09:35:50 AM »
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wahhh bahoot khoob shihab jee.daad kabul kijiye dil se.
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2011, 09:19:50 PM »
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Wow,har baar ki tarah ehsaaso se bhari khoobsurat peshkash Shihab ji.mindblowing. Hats off to you! Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2011, 07:43:57 PM »
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Janab Shihab Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab... Badi pyaari pic lagayi hai..
par adhuri hi kyuN lagaai puri lagate to aur bhi achchi
lagti... Usual Smile

Aur janab aapki is kalaam ke kia kahne opposite gender
thinking ko badi khubsurati se pesh kiya hai aapne.. waah
bahut hi khoob... Usual Smile

Is tarhaa ke Ahsaas O khayaal ko kahna waise hi aasaan
nahi aur gehrai tak utar kar kah jana waqai behad kamaal
ki baat hai.... jis tarha se aapne kafiyaa bandi bhi ki
hai khoob hai.. daad hazir hai Usual Smile

           



                  Na  Chamakti  Maa,they  Pey  Bindiya Hai
                  Na Khanakti Haatho,n Mein , Chudiya Hai.

Kia kahne matla achcha kaha hai daad Usual Smile           

                  Tum Gaye Ho  Jabsey  Chhodkar , Tabsey
                  Roothi Roothi Si Jaise  Bas , NeeNdiya Hai.

Bahut khoob daad achcha sher hai Usual Smile         
       
                  Nahi Sajte Chehre Pe Tabassum Ke Phool
                  Behti Rehti Bas  Aankhon  Se , Nadiya Hai.

Achcha ahsaas bayaaN kiya hai aapne... daad , yeh kafiya thoda unmatch sa hai.. kyuN ki nadiyaa ke " na " ki awaaz choti hai..           

                  Is Qadar Ho Gayi Hun Qaid Khalaon Mein
                  Ki  Jaise  Hoti  Pinjre  Mein  ,  Chidiya Hai.

Kia kahne janab waah waah bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile         

                  Abto  Aaja  Kisi  Bahaane  Se , Aey Sanam
                  Badi  Hi  Zalim  Hijr Ki , Yeh  Ghadiya Hai.

bahut khoob janab achcha sher hai adaygi bhi achchi hai daad Usual Smile... is sher ka bhi kafiya unmatch hai.. Usual Smile

Par aapne behad achche se nibhaya hai aur achche kafiye ko janam diya hai... is umdaa koshish e kalaam par dil se daad hazir hai...

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile         




                               ~Shihab~

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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2011, 01:18:45 AM »
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Wah Ji Wah Kya Kehne Bohat Hi Badiya Parwaaz Sahab Ne Sahi Farmaaya Ki
Is Tarah Ke Ehsas o Khayal Ko Kehna Waise Hi Aasan Nahi Aur
Gehraai Tak Utar Kar Keh Jaana Waqai Mein Behad  Kamaal Hai
Bohat Kam Log Hote Hain Ji Jo Auron Ke Dard Ko Is Qadar Mahsus
Kar Paate Hain Aapne Un Sab Aurton Ke Jazbaaton Ko Bakhubi Lafzon
Mein Piroya Hai. Jo Kisi Na Kisi Kaaran Apnon Se Door Hain
Bohat Bohat Khoob Shihab Ji. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: November 01, 2011, 11:12:42 AM »
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Bahut khoob Shihab Sahab
Vaah..
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