Bandagee dar par kare koi............Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on September 11, 2010, 04:01:01 PM
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KahaaN tak aaNsuoN se apna daaman tar kare koi
jo baateN khatm ho gayee hoN to kya us par kare koi

jahaaN tak ho sake khud apne gham ko dil me ghum kar lo
yahaaN par koun kisaka hai yaqeeN kis par kare koi

tamnna thee ki ik din hum tumheN apnaa banayeNge
tumhe gairoN se nisbat hai to kya is par kare koi

bhala kaise jiyeNge is jahaaN me bin tere pal chhin
diye aaNkhoN me jalte haiN duaa lab par kare koi

humaaree jaan jab tak hai tumheN  na hum bhulaayeNge
tum aao ya na aao bandagee dar par kare koi
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2010, 07:16:03 PM »
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Mamtaa Jee AadaaB!

Aapni nayi koshish Dekh kar achcah laga hume...
Par yeH gazal ke sanche meiN dhali huyi nahi lagi hume... Per metter meiN lag rahi hai.....

Sabhi sher achche lage hume daad....
Yeh kuch sher behad khoob lage ....

Likhate rahiye.....
Khush rahiye.....
Khuda Hafez...... Usual Smile           


Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 11, 2010, 04:01:01 PM



jahaaN tak ho sake khud apne gham ko dil me ghum kar lo
yahaaN par koun kisaka hai yaqeeN kis par kare koi

Behad sahiN farmaya hai aapne... Bahut gehri soch ka muzahera kiya hai daad         


tamnna thee ki ik din hum tumheN apnaa banayeNge
tumhe gairoN se nisbat hai to kya is par kare koi

Kuchh apna hi haal e dil sa hai Daad Usual Smile         



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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2010, 04:22:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob Mamta Ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2010, 05:19:41 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob likha hai apne Mamta ji...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2010, 07:05:46 AM »
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Parvez jee behad shukriyaa..........bas ek baat kaa khulaasaa karne kee meharbaanee kareN ki kyoN ye kalaam gazal kee shaql me dhaltaa nazar naheeN aayaa? mujhe achchaa lagegaa keh aap is baat kaa jawaab deN taake mai apnee khaamiyoNko theek kar sakooN.

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«Reply #5 on: May 28, 2011, 04:52:59 AM »
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Dhanyawaad Hridaya jee!
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«Reply #6 on: May 28, 2011, 04:53:47 AM »
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housla afzai kaa behad shukriyaa Rajesh jee!
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«Reply #7 on: June 04, 2011, 07:31:34 PM »
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ye kalaam khubsurat hai ji…
padh kar acha laga …

jahan dhadkane rukne par aamaada hon…
saanse thammne ka naam na len…
palkon ka jahan thaharna ho…
rooh ki bhi zidd ho nikal jaane ki…
btao bhala kaise khud ko sambhale koi!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2011, 11:52:18 PM »
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S F jee ! bahut khoob!
dard ke dar se hee aise alfaaz guzarte haiN
nahee to nisbateN aahoN se koun rakhtaa hai
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«Reply #9 on: June 05, 2011, 01:03:41 PM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on September 11, 2010, 04:01:01 PM
KahaaN tak aaNsuoN se apna daaman tar kare koi
jo baateN khatm ho gayee hoN to kya us par kare koi

jahaaN tak ho sake khud apne gham ko dil me ghum kar lo
yahaaN par koun kisaka hai yaqeeN kis par kare koi

tamnna thee ki ik din hum tumheN apnaa banayeNge
tumhe gairoN se nisbat hai to kya is par kare koi

bhala kaise jiyeNge is jahaaN me bin tere pal chhin
diye aaNkhoN me jalte haiN duaa lab par kare koi

humaaree jaan jab tak hai tumheN  na hum bhulaayeNge
tum aao ya na aao bandagee dar par kare koi




naaaaice one mamta ji
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