Barbaad-E-jindgi ke afsaane nahi hoteN..

by premdeep on February 15, 2013, 12:49:36 PM
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Barbaad-E-jindgi ke afsaane nahi hoteN
ye husN na hota to itne dewaane nahi hoteN

Hum to ishq-e-daria me koode hi doobne ke liye the
jo ye shamma na jalti to khaak parwaane nahi hoteN

Peene ki Kasam to tere gum ne hi daali hai
Ye gum agar na hota to ye mehkhane nahi hoteN

Gar pyaar mein judai ki tadap Tumne jaani hoti
To naa milne ke yuN rooj bahane nahi hoteN

Har shaks hai khafa khafa sa kyu itna mujhse
jo unse na milte  to itne sayane nahi hote

Ab to tanha hi guzar gayi ye jindgi ki shaam
Gar sath jo tera hota to ye ujade shameyane na hote.
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2013, 01:19:12 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2013, 03:50:50 PM »
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wwaah bohot khoob Applause Applause

doob jaye jo kashti uss he k pass vjah hazar hoti hai ,
barbad ho zindagi jiski mohobat ki dastaa.n usi k pass hoti hai .

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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2013, 05:23:48 PM »
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bahut khoooob...
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Bahut bahut khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: February 17, 2013, 03:41:55 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2013, 07:56:09 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Premdeep ji.....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2013, 05:02:06 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: February 18, 2013, 10:32:20 AM »
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thanks to all for appreciation
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