Barish ki bundein........... Soudagar

by soudagar on July 18, 2012, 09:59:35 AM
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Aaj barish ki bundein phir teri yaad dila gai
tumhare wapas lout kar aane ki aas kra gai

wo barish mein pehli bar meri najro ka tumse milna
aaj ki barish  phir wahi najro ki pyas jaga gai

tera bheega badan dekh mere dil ke arma machal uthe the
barish ki bundo ne mere dil ki wahi aag phir bhadka gai

tere balo ki laton se girti wo bunde tere galo ko aakr chhuti thi
 phulo ki pankhuriyon par sarkati bundein unhi lamhi ki yad dila gai

hathon mein lekar jo dekha maine barish ki kuch bundon ko
hamari judai ke waqt ki teri aakhon ki nami yaad aa gai

muskarane ka wada kiya tha, koshish krta hun hr pal muskrane ki
par yeh barish ki bundein phir se teri yaad dilakar mujhe rula gaii

aaj tanha khada bheeg raha hoon sawan ki is barish mein
na jane kyun phir bhi yeh barish tere sath hone ka ehsas dila gai
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«Reply #1 on: July 18, 2012, 10:02:32 AM »
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Aaj barish ki bundein phir teri yaad dila gai
tumhare wapas lout kar aane ki aas kra gai

wo barish mein pehli bar meri najro ka tumse milna
aaj ki barish  phir wahi najro ki pyas jaga gai

tera bheega badan dekh mere dil ke arma machal uthe the
barish ki bundo ne mere dil ki wahi aag phir bhadka gai

tere balo ki laton se girti wo bunde tere galo ko aakr chhuti thi
 phulo ki pankhuriyon par sarkati bundein unhi lamhi ki yad dila gai

hathon mein lekar jo dekha maine barish ki kuch bundon ko
hamari judai ke waqt ki teri aakhon ki nami yaad aa gai

muskarane ka wada kiya tha, koshish krta hun hr pal muskrane ki
par yeh barish ki bundein phir se teri yaad dilakar mujhe rula gaii

aaj tanha khada bheeg raha hoon sawan ki is barish mein
na jane kyun phir bhi yeh barish tere sath hone ka.. ehsas dila gai
baHUT BAHUT KHUB SOUDAGAR JI BARISH KE SAATH MEHBOOB KE EHSAASON KA MEL KIYA HAI APNE DHERON DAAD AUR MUBARAKBAAD QABOOL KARIYE
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«Reply #2 on: July 18, 2012, 10:14:37 AM »
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bahut hee khoob dheron daad bahut bahut mubarakbad
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«Reply #3 on: July 18, 2012, 10:24:21 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 18, 2012, 12:57:57 PM »
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bohat bohat umda saudagar ji, bohat bohat khoob kaha aapne.  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2012, 01:05:47 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya pankaj ji... Bas aise apna sath banaye rakhein
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2012, 01:08:54 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya pankaj ji... Bas aise apna sath banaye rakhein
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2012, 01:36:20 PM »
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Aaj barish ki bundein phir teri yaad dila gai
tumhare wapas lout kar aane ki aas kra gai

wo barish mein pehli bar meri najro ka tumse milna
aaj ki barish  phir wahi najro ki pyas jaga gai

tera bheega badan dekh mere dil ke arma machal uthe the
barish ki bundo ne mere dil ki wahi aag phir bhadka gai

tere balo ki laton se girti wo bunde tere galo ko aakr chhuti thi
 phulo ki pankhuriyon par sarkati bundein unhi lamhi ki yad dila gai

hathon mein lekar jo dekha maine barish ki kuch bundon ko
hamari judai ke waqt ki teri aakhon ki nami yaad aa gai

muskarane ka wada kiya tha, koshish krta hun hr pal muskrane ki
par yeh barish ki bundein phir se teri yaad dilakar mujhe rula gaii

aaj tanha khada bheeg raha hoon sawan ki is barish mein
na jane kyun phir bhi yeh barish tere sath hone ka ehsas dila gai


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Bahut bahut Khooooob Saudagarji
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2012, 02:50:49 PM »
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Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
khoob likha hai aapne. Applause
in baarish ki boondo ne mujhe bhi kuch yaad dila diya..
baarish me bheegne vaale kee.
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2012, 04:05:40 PM »
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Bhut bahut shukriya saini sir dil se aabhar prakat krta hoon
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2012, 04:10:07 PM »
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Bhut bahut shukriya saini sir dil se aabhar prakat krta hoon
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«Reply #11 on: July 19, 2012, 03:22:04 AM »
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Baht baht shukriya kamlesh ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 19, 2012, 11:09:25 AM »
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Thank u so much sourabh ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2012, 02:58:34 AM »
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Bht bht shukriya khawahish ji....
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«Reply #14 on: July 20, 2012, 10:58:46 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  feelings straight from the heart.. dil ko chhoo gayi aapki ye rachna.. bahut sundar, bahut khoob likha hai aapne Soudagar ji.. kuch pal ke liye main aapki is kavita me kho hi gaya tha... bahut bahut khoob....!!!
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