Barsey saawan

by abdbundeli on July 07, 2009, 12:08:45 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 08, 2009, 12:36:28 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 08, 2009, 08:13:19 AM
Wow again very Nice Abd Ji...

Dekhan lagi mori ankhiyan
piya ji se milan ki raat
Dheere dheere bas gai dil mea
Piya ji ki sneh bhari baat
Nice Sophi!

Chupkey sey aaye piyaa;
Deykh rikt gharbaar!
Bouraayee: mujhsey, jhapat,
Kholaa gayaa na dwaar!!

          - 'Ramwatuya'
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«Reply #16 on: July 08, 2009, 12:56:22 PM »
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How Sweet.. Bahoot pyara likha hai...

Man ho gayaa Vichlit
Dekh Piya ko apne sang
Aakar more jeevan mea
Bhar jaaye pyaar ka rang
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«Reply #17 on: July 08, 2009, 02:11:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 08, 2009, 12:56:22 PM
How Sweet.. Bahoot pyara likha hai...

Man ho gayaa Vichlit
Dekh Piya ko apne sang
Aakar more jeevan mea
Bhar jaaye pyaar ka rang

Thanks! It's nice Sophi!

Dwaar kholey ho, tabhee to daakhilaa ho sakaa priya kaa!
Dwaar kholaa thaa, tabhee to silsilah qaayam huaa hai!
Khirhkiyaan bhee khol do man keen sabhee: mahboob paithey;
Dey diyaa jab sab, tabhee to yeh silah hamdam huaa hai!!

                                         - abd bundeli



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«Reply #18 on: July 08, 2009, 02:26:55 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob.. I am really happy to write with you its a pleasure to me... you wrote really fantastic..

Khol diya maine apne man ka dwaar piya k liye
dekht reh gai ankhiyan unne, keh na paai apna pyaar
Chup chup bas gaye piya ji more mann mea aise
Bina kahe hi ho gaya mohe unnse pehli nazar me pyaar
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«Reply #19 on: July 08, 2009, 02:52:37 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 08, 2009, 02:26:55 PM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob.. I am really happy to write with you its a pleasure to me... you wrote really fantastic..

Khol diya maine apne man ka dwaar piya k liye
dekht reh gai ankhiyan unne, keh na paai apna pyaar
Chup chup bas gaye piya ji more mann mea aise
Bina kahe hi ho gaya mohe unnse pehli nazar me pyaar

Thanks Sophi ji!

Wo nazar aap ki bhi kyaa nazar rahee hogee!
Jo zubaan ney na kahee, us ney wo kahee hogee!
Guzar rahey they dahar; aur, muntazir thaa woh:
'Dil kee baateyn tamaam, khol jigar, kah dogee'!!

                                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #20 on: July 08, 2009, 03:09:05 PM »
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Waah Waah Kya kahe .. bahoot bahoot Khoob ABD ji

Dekh meri Sharmati nazro ko piya ne
Haath mera thaam mera apne Dil pe rakh liya
kaha suno darkhan ko meri kya kehe ye
Bandh bahon mea mujhe unhine apna bana liya
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«Reply #21 on: July 08, 2009, 03:43:50 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 08, 2009, 03:09:05 PM
Waah Waah Kya kahe .. bahoot bahoot Khoob ABD ji

Dekh meri Sharmati nazro ko piya ne
Haath mera thaam mera apne Dil pe rakh liya
kaha suno darkhan ko meri kya kehe ye
Bandh bahon mea mujhe unhine apna bana liya

Thanks a lot Sophi!

Sounp unhain sarwaswa nij,
Poorna-kaam chhawimaan;
Aisaa mujhko lagaa, jyoun
Paaye hon bhagwaan!

        - 'Ramwatiya' 
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«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2009, 04:04:15 PM »
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Wow .. Once again Very Nice Abd ji.

Dheere dheere pyar ka paat padaye piya ji
Dekha mujhe swapan , Ehsaas jagaye mohe man mea
Thaam mora haath piya ji le chale apne ghar
Rang gaye Piya ji mohe , apne pyaar k rang mea
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«Reply #23 on: July 09, 2009, 06:16:07 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 08, 2009, 04:04:15 PM
Wow .. Once again Very Nice Abd ji.

Dheere dheere pyar ka paat padaye piya ji
Dekha mujhe swapan , Ehsaas jagaye mohe man mea
Thaam mora haath piya ji le chale apne ghar
Rang gaye Piya ji mohe , apne pyaar k rang mea


Thanks a lot Sophi ji! Ab, jab, Sach kah hee diyaa gayaa hai, to:

Huaa na bhaan, prakat huye;
Phir aa pakrhaa haath!
Rang miley, satrang ho,
Chalee piyaa key saath!!

               - 'Ramwatiya'
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«Reply #24 on: July 09, 2009, 06:37:08 AM »
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bahoot Khoob abd Ji

Tukur tukur Dekhan lage jag saara
Jab thama tha Sajan ne mora haath
Nazar na lag jaaye hum dono ko
darr hai Kahin choot na jaaye saath
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«Reply #25 on: July 09, 2009, 06:37:34 AM »
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Nice lines Sophi
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«Reply #26 on: July 09, 2009, 07:21:33 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 09, 2009, 06:37:08 AM
bahoot Khoob abd Ji

Tukur tukur Dekhan lage jag saara
Jab thama tha Sajan ne mora haath
Nazar na lag jaaye hum dono ko
darr hai Kahin choot na jaaye saath


Thanks!Nice lines Sophi ji!

Rag-rag mein spandit huaa,
Kyoun tooteygaa geet!
Janm-janm kaa saath hai;
Kyoun chhooteygaa meet?

          - 'Ramwatiya'   
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«Reply #27 on: July 11, 2009, 07:26:30 AM »
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waah Fir se bahoot Sunder Reply kiya hai.. bahoot Khoob!

Darr lage mohe iss Duniya se,
Kahi root na jaaye mera meet!!

Pyaar pe tho barso hai mujhko,
Par Kahi beech na aaye Duniya ki Reet!!
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«Reply #28 on: July 11, 2009, 07:40:23 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on July 11, 2009, 07:26:30 AM
waah Fir se bahoot Sunder Reply kiya hai.. bahoot Khoob!

Darr lage mohe iss Duniya se,
Kahi root na jaaye mera meet!!

Pyaar pe tho barso hai mujhko,
Par Kahi beech na aaye Duniya ki Reet!!

Thanks Sophi!

Hai roothjnaa-manaanaa jaaree yahaan azal sey!
Yeh nisbateyn hain katm-e-adam sey, nahin hain kal sey!
Duniyaa ko nahin kuchh bhi haasil, ki, jis sey kar dey,
Roohoun ko judaa aiseen: wo bal sey ho, ki, chhal sey!!

                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #29 on: July 11, 2009, 07:46:28 AM »
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Waah Bahoot Khoob Likha hai ABD ji

Nahi darti Main Bhi Duniyaa se
Par suna hai Pyaar mea yea bahoot tadpati hai

Pyaar karna shiyaati ye nazom karam s
Aur yea duniyaa Fir Hass Hass kar Sitam daati hai
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