Bebasi

by archana_gudia2k2 on November 01, 2004, 01:48:43 PM
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Zindgi main dost aajmaaye bahut,
Apno ke hathon dokhe khaye bahut,
phir bhi hame apne dil ki saadgi hi achhi lagi,
khoob hamdardi jatane ka moka mil gaya unko,
Shayad unko hamari bebasi achhi lagi!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #1 on: November 01, 2004, 02:14:32 PM »
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wow......excellent...........archana.........
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: November 02, 2004, 10:30:42 PM »
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Nice one Gudia!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2004, 10:43:13 PM »
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Woh Dekhein To Unki Inaayat
Na Dekhein To Rona Kya
Jo Dil Gair Ka Ho Uska
Hona Kya Aur Na Hona Kya
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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2004, 05:15:08 PM »
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wah!!!!!!!!   Pooja................

iss arzooy e mohabbat k hum mushrik thehray
shirk yeh tha k ik hi shakhs ko mehboob jaana!!!!!!!!!!!!111

shirk = gunaah
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«Reply #5 on: November 07, 2004, 08:46:23 PM »
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Aap sabhi logon ne Bahut Achchha Likha hai ji!!! Waaah!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2004, 08:51:47 PM »
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Quote from: "Pooja"
Woh Dekhein To Unki Inaayat
Na Dekhein To Rona Kya
Jo Dil Gair Ka Ho Uska
Hona Kya Aur Na Hona Kya


Waah! Very Nice!!! Pooja ji! Great Thoughts!!!

Humein Apne Gham se kab Fursat,
Tum Gairon se kab Khaali!
Chalo Ho chuka Milnaa,
Na Hum Khaali Na Tum Khaali!


(NM)
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: November 08, 2004, 05:14:47 AM »
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KHUD MAI HI RAHA WO, KABHI NAJAR JHUKA KAR NAHI DEKHA
MERE GUM KA SABAB BANANE WALE,
MAINE SIR UTHANA NAHI SIKHA
TUMNE SIR JHUKANA NAHI SIKHA!!!!
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #8 on: November 08, 2004, 05:37:40 AM »
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Waaah! Bahut Khoob likha hai ji aapne ! Pooja ji!

Yoon hasraton ke daagh mohabbat mein do liye,
Khud Dil se dil ki Baat kari aur Ro Liye............!


(NM)
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«Reply #9 on: November 14, 2004, 06:39:56 AM »
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KHUD MAI HI RAHA WO, KABHI NAJAR JHUKA KAR NAHI DEKHA
MERE GUM KA SABAB BANANE WALE,
MAINE SIR UTHANA NAHI SIKHA
TUMNE SIR JHUKANA NAHI SIKHA!!!!


wow pooja...........excellent write .....bahot khoob ....

Isi Dukh Main Rahay Hum Bhee Keh Tum Mil Nah Sakay Humko
Agar Mil Bhee Hamain Jaatay To Kaisay Hum Bichard Paatay.....
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«Reply #10 on: November 14, 2004, 07:15:50 AM »
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KHUD MAI HI RAHA WO, KABHI NAJAR JHUKA KAR NAHI DEKHA
MERE GUM KA SABAB BANANE WALE,
MAINE SIR UTHANA NAHI SIKHA
TUMNE SIR JHUKANA NAHI SIKHA!!!!



achha likha pooja!
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