Beh hi gaya woh makaan bhi ashkon ke sailaab mein.........................Aqsh..

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Chaha tha jinhe unke paas hamare liye, do pal ka waqt na tha
Bahut tootne ke baad aaj humne, kar liya yeh faislaa tha

Phir kabhi na unse milne ki, qasmeiN khaakar
Apne armaanon ko, apne seene meiN dabakar
Hum unke dar se nikle,
Dil hi dil meiN yeh sochkar,
Hame door jaate hue dekh ke,
Unko hoga kuch toh ehsaas,
Tadap jaayenge aur phir,
Bula hi lenge mujhe apne paas,
Qadam aahista aahista yun,
Aage badh rahe the,
Har qadam par faasle,
Door se aur door ho rahe the,

Nazar kahti thi jee bhar ke dekh looN, bas ek baar palat jaa
Dil kehta nahiN woh bula lenge tujhko, bas ek pal thehar jaa

Magar woh kahaaN bulaate,
Jo ban chuke the paththar
Pyaar unhe tha hi nahiN jinhe,
samjha tha humne apna muqaddar,
Na hi unki aankheiN nam thi,
Na hi bichadne ka koi gam tha,
Badhte hue apne qadmoN ko,
Hum bhi rok hi na paaye,
Bujhte hi gaye sabhi diye,
Ummeed ke jo the jalaaye,

Beh hi gaya woh makaan bhi, aakhir ashkoN ke sailaab meiN
Jiski har deewaar ko wafa ki, ek ek eenth se the humne sajaaye…..
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2013, 01:04:48 PM »
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acha likha hai aqsh ji waaah
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bahot sunder likha hai aqsh
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«Reply #3 on: September 03, 2013, 01:21:46 PM »
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WAAAH WAAAH AQSH JI BOHUT KHOOB NAZM LIKHI HAIN AAPNE,
SHAAADAAR ,,,DARD ME DOOBI HUI.
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2013, 01:49:26 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Aqsh ji,
Bahut khoobsurat Nazm kahi hai aapne.Dili mubarakbaad qabool farmaayin.
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2013, 02:22:59 PM »
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 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower bahut khoob
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Quote from: saahill on September 03, 2013, 01:04:48 PM
acha likha hai aqsh ji waaah
thnxxxxxxx a lot sahill ji..
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Quote from: poonamA on September 03, 2013, 01:17:18 PM
bahot sunder likha hai aqsh
thnxxxxxxxx poonama ji....
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Quote from: sahal on September 03, 2013, 01:21:46 PM
WAAAH WAAAH AQSH JI BOHUT KHOOB NAZM LIKHI HAIN AAPNE,
SHAAADAAR ,,,DARD ME DOOBI HUI.
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thnxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt sahal...
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on September 03, 2013, 01:49:26 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Aqsh ji,
Bahut khoobsurat Nazm kahi hai aapne.Dili mubarakbaad qabool farmaayin.
thnxxxxxxx a lotttttttt sudhir ji...
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Waaaaaaaaaah iqtedar bahut hi khoobsurat gaana share kiye aapne. mai kai baar suni ise par bhoolne ki jagah woh aur yaad aaye  Winking Winking.. ab koi aise gaana share karo ke dil ko sukoon mile ise sunkar toh aur tadap gayi mai..  tongue3..
Aur bhoolna kisi ko itna aasaan nahin hota.. aap try karke dekh lijiye aur mujhe jawab zaroor dena  Usual Smile Usual Smile
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 03, 2013, 02:22:59 PM
icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower bahut khoob
thnx a lotttttttt saini sir.....
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Waaaaaaaaaah iqtedar bahut hi khoobsurat gaana share kiye aapne. mai kai baar suni ise par bhoolne ki jagah woh aur yaad aaye  Winking Winking.. ab koi aise gaana share karo ke dil ko sukoon mile ise sunkar toh aur tadap gayi mai..  tongue3..
Aur bhoolna kisi ko itna aasaan nahin hota.. aap try karke dekh lijiye aur mujhe jawab zaroor dena  Usual Smile Usual Smile

ARRRAY AQSH JI KISI KO BHOOLNE KE LIYE GAANE KI KYA ZAROORAT HAI,,,,
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Quote from: sahal on September 03, 2013, 02:54:10 PM
ARRRAY AQSH JI KISI KO BHOOLNE KE LIYE GAANE KI KYA ZAROORAT HAI,,,,
Sahal iska jawab toh iqtedar hi denge..... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
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