Beh hi gaya woh makaan bhi ashkon ke sailaab mein.........................Aqsh..

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«Reply #15 on: September 03, 2013, 04:09:05 PM »
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Ye Ishq May Aksar Hota Hai
Jo Pyar Kare So Rota Hai
Ab Kis Se Shikayat Kya Karna
Ye Sadiyon Se Hi Hota Hai
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«Reply #16 on: September 03, 2013, 04:34:26 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 03, 2013, 02:56:26 PM
Sahal iska jawab toh iqtedar hi denge..... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!
hahahahaa be bold like Rekha  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #17 on: September 03, 2013, 07:14:33 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: September 03, 2013, 08:04:07 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

pehli baar aapkaa yeh andaaz dekhaa, aur aapke har andaaz ki tarhaa yeh bhi bahut khoob rahaa, ehsaason ko aapne bahut khoobsoorti se shabdon mein piroyaaa hai, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hogi, jitne khoobsoorat ehsaas, utni hi khoobsoorat bayaani, dil se bas waah waah waah waah nikal rahi hai, aur bas flow mein humne bhi kuch likh diyaa iske jawaab mein, ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...!!!


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«Reply #19 on: September 03, 2013, 08:27:34 PM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #20 on: September 03, 2013, 09:05:27 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #21 on: September 04, 2013, 12:03:14 AM »
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waah waah waah aqsh jee gazab dhaa gaye aap to, dhamakedaar peshkash rahi har baar ki tarah..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #22 on: September 04, 2013, 03:55:14 AM »
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waah aqsh ji ,...bohat khoob ,...bohat c daad,...
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«Reply #23 on: September 04, 2013, 09:19:29 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: September 04, 2013, 03:11:13 PM »
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वाह.....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....क्या बात है....

Beh hi gaya woh makaan bhi, aakhir ashkoN ke sailaab meiN
Jiski har deewaar ko wafa ki, ek ek eenth se the humne sajaaye…..

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«Reply #25 on: September 04, 2013, 03:41:11 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat jazbaat aqsh ji.. bahut achhi poetry.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #26 on: September 04, 2013, 05:16:21 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on September 03, 2013, 04:09:05 PM
Ye Ishq May Aksar Hota Hai
Jo Pyar Kare So Rota Hai
Ab Kis Se Shikayat Kya Karna
Ye Sadiyon Se Hi Hota Hai
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/m8L2hVJ6Rnw&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/m8L2hVJ6Rnw&rel=1</a>
ya allah iqtedar aapko kya hua hai itne rote gaane sunaaoge toh mera haal toh aur behaal ho jaayega.. kuch achcha sa sunane ko kaha hai DOH DOH
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«Reply #27 on: September 04, 2013, 05:17:28 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on September 03, 2013, 04:34:26 PM
hahahahaa be bold like Rekha  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/cJwdlU8H8pg&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/cJwdlU8H8pg&rel=1</a>
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Hahahahahahahah yeh wala masttttttttt hai.... abhi toh sach mein maza aa gaya... Winking Winking
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«Reply #28 on: September 04, 2013, 05:18:09 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on September 03, 2013, 07:14:33 PM
waah waah bahut khoob......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnxxxx a lot miraj ji...
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«Reply #29 on: September 04, 2013, 05:19:32 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on September 03, 2013, 08:04:07 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

pehli baar aapkaa yeh andaaz dekhaa, aur aapke har andaaz ki tarhaa yeh bhi bahut khoob rahaa, ehsaason ko aapne bahut khoobsoorti se shabdon mein piroyaaa hai, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hogi, jitne khoobsoorat ehsaas, utni hi khoobsoorat bayaani, dil se bas waah waah waah waah nikal rahi hai, aur bas flow mein humne bhi kuch likh diyaa iske jawaab mein, ummeed hai aapko pasand aayegi...!!!


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Hriday ji bas aise hi kuch likhne ka mood hua aur likh baithi.. aapka bahut bahut shukriya padhne aur pasand karne ke liye...Aur aapka reply bhi khoob hi hoga abhi dekhti hoon ..... thnx for the reply tooooooo..
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