Beh hi gaya woh makaan bhi ashkon ke sailaab mein.........................Aqsh..

by aqsh on September 03, 2013, 01:03:10 PM
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«Reply #30 on: September 04, 2013, 05:21:13 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on September 03, 2013, 08:27:34 PM
wha wha bhut khub
thnxxx rajan ji a lot....
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«Reply #31 on: September 04, 2013, 05:21:59 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 03, 2013, 09:05:27 PM
Bahut Khoob.
thnx a lot ravindera ji...
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«Reply #32 on: September 04, 2013, 05:22:40 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on September 04, 2013, 12:03:14 AM
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waah waah waah aqsh jee gazab dhaa gaye aap to, dhamakedaar peshkash rahi har baar ki tarah..dhero daad..happy9
thnx a lot Ashwani...
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«Reply #33 on: September 04, 2013, 05:23:16 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on September 04, 2013, 03:55:14 AM
waah aqsh ji ,...bohat khoob ,...bohat c daad,...
thnx laaiba ji a lot....
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«Reply #34 on: September 04, 2013, 05:23:53 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 04, 2013, 09:19:29 AM
wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnxxxxxxxxx nand ji....
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«Reply #35 on: September 04, 2013, 05:25:03 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on September 04, 2013, 03:11:13 PM
वाह.....वाह....बहुत ही खूब....क्या बात है....

Beh hi gaya woh makaan bhi, aakhir ashkoN ke sailaab meiN
Jiski har deewaar ko wafa ki, ek ek eenth se the humne sajaaye…..

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thnxxxxxxx a lotttttttt amit ji....
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«Reply #36 on: September 04, 2013, 05:25:51 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 04, 2013, 03:41:11 PM
bahut khoobsurat jazbaat aqsh ji.. bahut achhi poetry.. Usual Smile

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thnxxxxxx a lottttttt touhid ji...
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«Reply #37 on: September 04, 2013, 07:30:26 PM »
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Very beautifulll... ++1 for this
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«Reply #38 on: September 05, 2013, 04:38:12 PM »
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 Aqsh Jee Aadaab... !


Kia baat hai jee lagta hai kuch ajeeb tarhaa ki feelings ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne... waise nazm numa kalaam khoob huyi hai...

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #39 on: September 05, 2013, 09:16:26 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on September 04, 2013, 07:30:26 PM
Very beautifulll... ++1 for this
Thnxxxxxxxxx a lottttttt Masoooooom...
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«Reply #40 on: September 05, 2013, 09:17:26 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 05, 2013, 04:38:12 PM

 Aqsh Jee Aadaab... !


Kia baat hai jee lagta hai kuch ajeeb tarhaa ki feelings ko bayaaN kiya hai aapne... waise nazm numa kalaam khoob huyi hai...

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez...

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji.. bas aise hi likh diya tha.. ise padhne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #41 on: October 26, 2013, 02:31:25 PM »
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Bahut Khub Dard Me Dubi Aapki Ye Nazm Achhi Hai Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #42 on: March 22, 2014, 08:52:55 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 26, 2013, 02:31:25 PM
Bahut Khub Dard Me Dubi Aapki Ye Nazm Achhi Hai Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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thnxxxxxxx a lottttt shihab ji..
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