"bekhabar"

by aaina on May 16, 2009, 11:30:35 AM
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Mujhse roothay hai.n bin khata ke wo
Aur maane  bhi na mana ke wo

Mein andhero.n mai gharq ho jaaun
De dain aisi koi saza ke wo

Tu hi soch ke ab kahan jaaye.n
dil teri dastars mai aa ke wo

Mujhko maloom hai,ye bhi sochoge
Ho nahi sakta bewaafa ke wo

Ho gay mutmain shaayad aslam
Aag apnaaiyat ki laga ke wo
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2009, 11:40:30 AM »
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janab aslam sahab adaab !!

bahoth hi bahetreen aur mautabar kalam pesh ki hai apne dil se dad qubool karen !! Allah apke kalamath ko miyari izzath bakshe Ameen !!

Duvaun ka muntazir !!
Qadeer
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2009, 02:13:19 PM »
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Wah wah meri jaan kya kehne Bohat bohat khooooooob Aslam Maza aa gaya...Qadeer ki dua par dil se AAMEEN.
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2009, 02:50:49 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 16, 2009, 11:30:35 AM
Mujhse roothay hai.n bin khata ke wo
Aur maane  bhi na mana ke wo

Mein andhero.n mai gharq ho jaaun
De dain aisi koi saza ke wo

Tu hi soch ke ab kahan jaaye.n
dil teri dastars mai aa ke wo

Mujhko maloom hai,ye bhi sochoge
Ho nahi sakta bewaafa ke wo

Ho gay mutmain shaayad aslam
Aag apnaaiyat ki laga ke wo


Wah wah bahut khoob... Last four lines wonderfully created by u dear Aslam.
Good Work Keep up.
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Sammual
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2009, 04:00:11 PM »
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Nice One.
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2009, 06:05:51 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 16, 2009, 11:30:35 AM
Mujhse roothay hai.n bin khata ke wo
Aur maane  bhi na mana ke wo

Mein andhero.n mai gharq ho jaaun
De dain aisi koi saza ke wo

Tu hi soch ke ab kahan jaaye.n
dil teri dastars mai aa ke wo

Mujhko maloom hai,ye bhi sochoge
Ho nahi sakta bewaafa ke wo

Ho gay mutmain shaayad aslam
Aag apnaaiyat ki laga ke wo


Aslam Ji,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot hi khoobsurat kalaam hai, aapki har ghazal ki tarah...dil ko chhu lene waala....!! Bohot Khoob !!
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dead heart
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2009, 07:14:51 PM »
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Bahaut acha likha Aslam bhaijan... Applause
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angel4u
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2009, 07:18:59 PM »
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Bahut hi achha likha hai Aslam Ji aapne Applause
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2009, 02:14:37 AM »
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wow aslam ji,very nice,excellent work.
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2009, 05:03:01 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 16, 2009, 11:30:35 AM
Mujhse roothay hai.n bin khata ke wo
Aur maane  bhi na mana ke wo

Mein andhero.n mai gharq ho jaaun
De dain aisi koi saza ke wo

Tu hi soch ke ab kahan jaaye.n
dil teri dastars mai aa ke wo

Mujhko maloom hai,ye bhi sochoge
Ho nahi sakta bewaafa ke wo

Ho gay mutmain shaayad aslam
Aag apnaaiyat ki laga ke wo



NAAICE 1.....AAINA JI
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2009, 10:00:34 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 16, 2009, 11:40:30 AM
janab aslam sahab adaab !!

bahoth hi bahetreen aur mautabar kalam pesh ki hai apne dil se dad qubool karen !! Allah apke kalamath ko miyari izzath bakshe Ameen !!

Duvaun ka muntazir !!
Qadeer

bhut bhut shukriya qadeer bhai........is hosla afzaai ke liyn
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«Reply #11 on: May 17, 2009, 10:01:29 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 16, 2009, 02:13:19 PM
Wah wah meri jaan kya kehne Bohat bohat khooooooob Aslam Maza aa gaya...Qadeer ki dua par dil se AAMEEN.

thnxxxxxx sajid dear...........thnxx so much
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«Reply #12 on: May 17, 2009, 10:03:56 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 16, 2009, 02:50:49 PM

Wah wah bahut khoob... Last four lines wonderfully created by u dear Aslam.
Good Work Keep up.

thnxx roja..........thnxxxxxx for ur appriaction
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2009, 10:04:44 AM »
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Quote from: Sammual on May 16, 2009, 04:00:11 PM
Nice One.

thnxxxxx sammual ji.....
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2009, 10:07:16 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 16, 2009, 06:05:51 PM
Aslam Ji,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot hi khoobsurat kalaam hai, aapki har ghazal ki tarah...dil ko chhu lene waala....!! Bohot Khoob !!

bhut bhut shukriya celmira ji............aapki nigah ki khoobsurti hai jo hamri adna si ghazal bhi aapko bhut achi lagi......hosal afzaai ka bhut bhut shukriya..........mashaallah aap khud bhut acha likti hain
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