Bhrose ne bhi dokha de diya...

by sweetie2210s on August 09, 2008, 11:47:57 AM
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>>>>>>>Bhrose ne bhi dokha de diya hume
to wafa se aasra kaise karein,

jab dhadkan ne hi dil ka saath chod diya
to saanson ki aarzu kaise karein,

palkon pe saja gaya wo hamaare diye judaai ke
ab aandhi se shikwa kaise karein,

kaha tha usne ki ek din laut ke aunga
ab waqt se gila kaise karein,

zindagi ki kashti beech samandar ataq gayi
jiyein bhi to kaise aur kaise hum marien.<<<<<<<<
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2008, 04:41:05 AM »
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>>>>>>>Bhrose ne bhi dokha de diya hume
to wafa se aasra kaise karein,

jab dhadkan ne hi dil ka saath chod diya
to saanson ki aarzu kaise karein,

palkon pe saja gaya wo hamaare diye judaai ke
ab aandhi se shikwa kaise karein,

kaha tha usne ki ek din laut ke aunga
ab waqt se gila kaise karein,

zindagi ki kashti beech samandar ataq gayi
jiyein bhi to kaise aur kaise hum marien.<<<<<<<<

sweetie aapne La-Raiyb sahih Likha Hai..
aap har baar kuch kum post karte ho lekin bahot badhiya hota hai..Ye Kalaam bhi short but Too nice hai.
waise bahot din baat aapka kalaam padha..shayad aap nazar na aaye the.
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2008, 11:18:13 AM »
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thank u so much for your encouragement muhammed ji,it feels really very good when someone appreciate your work.Appne hamesha encourage kiya he iske liye bahut bahut shukriya.
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