Bohat Udaas Hoon Mai...

by Zahara on January 16, 2005, 03:39:28 PM
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Zahara
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Mujhe Gale Se Lagaa Lo Bohat Udaas Hoon Mein
Game Jahan Se Chuda Lo Bohat Udaas Hoon Mein

Yeh Intezaar Ka Dukh Ab Saha Nahin Jata
Tadap Rahi Hai Mohabbat Ab Raha Nahin Jata
Tum Apne Paas Bula Lo Bohat Udaas Hoon Mein

Har Aik  Saans Mein Milnay Ki Pyass Milti Hai
Sulag Raha Hai Badan Aur Rooh Jalti Hai
Bacha Sako To Bacha Lo Bohat Udaas Hoon Main

Bhatak Chuki Hoon Bohat Zindagi Ki Raahon Mein
Mujhe Ab Aake Chupa Lo Tum Apni Baahon Mein
Mera Sawaal Na Talo Bohat Udaas Hoon Mein :cry: (NOT MINE)

Edited by Yoindia monitor* Write not mine if not your own creation!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #1 on: January 17, 2005, 07:30:04 PM »
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wah wah!!!!!!!!!!

udasi ke diye jalaye hue hai,
laut ane ki teri aas lagaye hue hai,
hardam to teri yaad satati hai sanam,
aur aap hai ke hume bhoolaye hue hai!
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Zahara
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2005, 03:04:08 PM »
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thank you Meena...
kya baat hai aapki shayri ki...

Us shaksh ko mera halka sa ehsaas to hai,
be dard sahi woh mera humraaz to hai..
 
Woh aaye na aaye mere paas laken,
shidat se mujhe us ka intezaar to hai..

Abhi nahi to kya hua mil hi jayenge kabhi,
mere dil main us se milan ki aas to hai..
 
Pyaar ki gawahi mere aasoon se na maangh,
barasti nahi aankhen magar dil uddas to hai..
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Meena
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2005, 10:02:40 AM »
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wahhhhhhhh zahara ji such a brillient poem! dil kush hogaya!!!!!!!!
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2005, 10:06:28 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhh !!!!!!! both

kyun log phele mil kar khus dete jate hain,
thodi hi dino mein kuch khe kar hum pe udasi de jate hain,
humein udasi hi dena tha to kyun phele khusi ki jalak de jate hain sad5
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2005, 10:13:32 AM »
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thanxxxxxxxx!!

hasa kar woh hume rula na dete,
to us kushi ka mol hum kaise jan pate!!
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2005, 10:19:21 AM »
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ya rite meena sis Usual Smile

agree wit this

magar kisi ka dil aise nahin tode jate,
agar kushi itni di hota un hone humein,
 rone ke baad kabhi maana ne to aate sad5
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salaam2all
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2005, 01:23:21 PM »
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very nice zahara...........salma.....and meena...............salaam


Kehta jo ye zamana hota ye phir fasana
Khamosh hay zuba chalta hay kaarwa

Hoti hay tarap iss dil may her waqt
Khamosh hay zuba chalta hay kaarwa

Poochtey hay log kisney ye di saza
Khamosh hay zuba chalta hay kaarwa

Hay jaantey na milney wo aayengey kabhi
Khamosh hay zuba chalta hay kaarwa

Ishq may mila jo bhi kiya SALAAM
Khamosh hay zuba chalta hay kaarwa
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Aryaan
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2005, 02:26:01 AM »
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very nice all..........
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #9 on: January 24, 2005, 08:30:10 AM »
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Quote from: "Zahara"
thank you Meena...
kya baat hai aapki shayri ki...

Us shaksh ko mera halka sa ehsaas to hai,
be dard sahi woh mera humraaz to hai..
 
Woh aaye na aaye mere paas laken,
shidat se mujhe us ka intezaar to hai..

Abhi nahi to kya hua mil hi jayenge kabhi,
mere dil main us se milan ki aas to hai..
 
Pyaar ki gawahi mere aasoon se na maangh,
barasti nahi aankhen magar dil uddas to hai..


it's a good poem
but please mention not mine (nm) if it is not yours own creation.
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #10 on: January 24, 2005, 08:30:51 AM »
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Quote from: "Zahara"
thank you Meena...
kya baat hai aapki shayri ki...

Us shaksh ko mera halka sa ehsaas to hai,
be dard sahi woh mera humraaz to hai..
 
Woh aaye na aaye mere paas laken,
shidat se mujhe us ka intezaar to hai..

Abhi nahi to kya hua mil hi jayenge kabhi,
mere dil main us se milan ki aas to hai..
 
Pyaar ki gawahi mere aasoon se na maangh,
barasti nahi aankhen magar dil uddas to hai..


it's a good poem
but please mention not mine (nm) if it is not yours own creation.
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: January 24, 2005, 07:13:02 PM »
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wah!!! kaya baat hai!!!
ek se bar kar ek,
yaha shayar hai sare gr8888!!!
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Dev_ajnabee
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«Reply #12 on: February 02, 2005, 11:18:19 AM »
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Gum ke Sagar mein
Tinke Khushiyon ke doondh raha hun,
Mein Jeena chatha hoin
bhir bhi Yaaron Doob raha hun.
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2005, 05:11:50 PM »
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wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  superbbbbbbbbbb   alllllllllll   :lol:
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