<>*Bolo na*<>

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<>*Bolo na*<>

Jaane tum kab laut k mere paas aaoge
Jab aaoge shayad hume nahin paaoge
Hum kho jayenge iss duniya ki bheed me
Bolo na tum hume kaise dhundh paaoge

Na naam hi hai pata na hume jaante ho
Ek chehra hi to hai jise tum pehchante ho
Waqt k sath ye bhi to kuch  badal jayega
Bolo na fir tum hume kaise pehchan paaoge

Aaj to rehte ho mere sath sath har pal tum
Kal apni zindagi me hi ulajh k reh jaoge
Yaad bhi aai kabhi kuch ghadi ko main
Bolo na tum kaise mujhse tab baat kar paaoge

Kho jayengi ye rangeen raatein ye subah bhi
Fas jaoge apni rozz marraa ki zaruraton me
Jab kabhi sath gaya koi geet tum gungunaoge
Bolo na tum meri awaaz kaise sun paaoge..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2010, 06:00:44 AM »
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wah kya baat hai     kasak... dil ki ji...

ham saath saath hai to koi gum nahin hai
kal agar hum tumse door chale jaayenge
"bolo na" hamko kaise yaad kar din beetaoge...
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2010, 06:35:43 AM »
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i hope you like this reply...... (-_-)

Bheed mein gum honey nahi deyngey
dil sey yadein khoney nahi deyngey
Duniya kee bheed mein dhunda hai tumhey
fir iss bheed mein gum honey nahi deyngey

Naam badal jayega... chehra badal jayega
Per terey rooh pey hai naam mera.. kya koi usey badal payega.....

kal terey bin zindagi kya hogi....
rookhi hasi aur sukhi khushi hogi....
terey bin socha nahi meiney apna kal....
fir bhi kya tum merey bin je logi......Huh??


ye raatein ye subah udas reheyngi tum bin...
zarooratey bhi sath nahi tum bin....
Gungunayngey hum geet sirf terey sang....
Warna
terey awaz key moti ki mala pehney hi jee leyngey.....
Per Bheed mein fir tumhey gum honey nahi deyngey.....


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«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2010, 06:41:20 AM »
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WAHHHHHHHHHH KHUBBB LIKHA HAI AAPNE CARA JI..BHT HI ACHCHA ..SHUKRIYA PASAND KARNE K LIYE
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2010, 06:42:27 AM »
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i hope you like this reply...... (-_-)

Bheed mein gum honey nahi deyngey
dil sey yadein khoney nahi deyngey
Duniya kee bheed mein dhunda hai tumhey
fir iss bheed mein gum honey nahi deyngey

Naam badal jayega... chehra badal jayega
Per terey rooh pey hai naam mera.. kya koi usey badal payega.....

kal terey bin zindagi kya hogi....
rookhi hasi aur sukhi khushi hogi....
terey bin socha nahi meiney apna kal....
fir bhi kya tum merey bin je logi......Huh??


ye raatein ye subah udas reheyngi tum bin...
zarooratey bhi sath nahi tum bin....
Gungunayngey hum geet sirf terey sang....
Warna
terey awaz key moti ki mala pehney hi jee leyngey.....
Per Bheed mein fir tumhey gum honey nahi deyngey.....



WAAAHHHHHHH WAAHHH WAAHHHH..KYA BAAT KYA BAAT KYA BAAT......BHT HI ACHCHA REPLY ABHISHEK JI..
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2010, 06:47:04 AM »
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Thanks Kasak Ji (-_-)
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2010, 07:01:30 AM »
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<>*Bolo na*<>

Jaane tum kab laut k mere paas aaoge
Jab aaoge shayad hume nahin paaoge
Hum kho jayenge iss duniya ki bheed me
Bolo na tum hume kaise dhundh paaoge

Na naam hi hai pata na hume jaante ho
Ek chehra hi to hai jise tum pehchante ho
Waqt k sath ye bhi to kuch  badal jayega
Bolo na fir tum hume kaise pehchan paaoge

Aaj to rehte ho mere sath sath har pal tum
Kal apni zindagi me hi ulajh k reh jaoge
Yaad bhi aai kabhi kuch ghadi ko main
Bolo na tum kaise mujhse tab baat kar paaoge

Kho jayengi ye rangeen raatein ye subah bhi
Fas jaoge apni rozz marraa ki zaruraton me
Jab kabhi sath gaya koi geet tum gungunaoge
Bolo na tum meri awaaz kaise sun paaoge..!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Anuji..Dilchasp Peshkash!!!

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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2010, 07:34:46 AM »
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sabse pehle to main hath jod ke aapse dhera saara maafi maangunga ki kal aapki request poori nahi kar paaya main is theme pe poem likhne ki.. darasal aajkal system access ki kaafi dikkat hai aur office e to is baare me soch bhi nahi sakta itna load hai... par aapne mujhse ki hui request khud hi poori kad di.. hat off to you... thank you so so so so much... aur is tarha ki hai ki kya kahen.. bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. dil ke ek ek part ko chhoo gayi aapki ye rachna.. ufffff... too much ho ji aap to.. too good... khair dusri baar aapko naraaz nahi karenge to reply sataak se likh daalaa... hope u'll like it....


tumse rishta mera aankhon ka nahi dil ka hai,
aankhen band kar tumhe hum mehsoos kar lenge,
kya hua agar kabhi tumhaara chehra badal gaya,
tumhe hum tumhaari baaton se pehchaan lenge,

na kabhi poochha na tumhaara naam jaante hain,
hum to tumhe tumhaari aahat se pehchaan lenge,
khone nahi denge tumhe is bheed me duniya ke,
hum tumhe apne dil ki dhadkano me chhupa lenge,

kya hua agar hum ulajh gaye apni zindagi me,
tumhaare liye sapno me hum waqt nikaal lenge,
yaad agar aa gayi kabhi tumhaari tanhaayi me,
to hum aankhen band kar tumse baat kar lenge,

chaahte hain tumhe tab se jab tumhe dekha na tha,
apni chaahat ko hum chaahat se pehchaan lenge,
'Kasak' tumhaari hamaare 'Hriday' me is qadar hai ki,
khaamoshi me bhi tumhaari awaaz ko hum sun lenge...
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2010, 09:21:38 AM »
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bht hi acha likha hai aapne annu di
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2010, 08:51:11 PM »
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bahut achha hai kasak ji jo aapne likha hai... par aapke in sawaalon ka jawab diye bagair raha nahin gaya... !

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<>*Bolo na*<>

Jaane tum kab laut k mere paas aaoge
Jab aaoge shayad hume nahin paaoge
Hum kho jayenge iss duniya ki bheed me
Bolo na tum hume kaise dhundh paaoge

Tumse bichhadne ka hausla to hai nahin mujhme
Aur phir tum bhi kahan khud ko door rakh paaoge,
Bheed hi sahi meri ek awaaz pe to ladkhadaaoge,
gar ek awaaj di maine tum khud hi daude chale aaoge,



Na naam hi hai pata na hume jaante ho
Ek chehra hi to hai jise tum pehchante ho
Waqt k sath ye bhi to kuch  badal jayega
Bolo na fir tum hume kaise pehchan paaoge

Teri khushbu mujhe tujh tak kheench laayegi zaroor
Chehra jo dil mein bas gaya use kaise badal paaoge,
Jab hoga saamna  mujhse mushkil hoga yakeen karna
par meri baahon me aakar tum khud hi sambhal jaaoge,



Aaj to rehte ho mere sath sath har pal tum
Kal apni zindagi me hi ulajh k reh jaoge
Yaad bhi aai kabhi kuch ghadi ko main
Bolo na tum kaise mujhse tab baat kar paaoge

Jo tujhme uljha main to ab kahan fursat sulajhne ki,
Jaanta hun kahin aur uljha to tum kaise reh paaoge,
Bin tere baat karna mushkil nahin hoga tujhse kabhi
Tum to har pal meri khaamoshi me khud hi gungunaaoge,



Kho jayengi ye rangeen raatein ye subah bhi
Fas jaoge apni rozz marraa ki zaruraton me
Jab kabhi sath gaya koi geet tum gungunaoge
Bolo na tum meri awaaz kaise sun paaoge..!!!

Kho jaane de in raaton ko aur is seher ko kahin aaj
Mujhe to tum aane wale har pal har lamhe me paaoge
Tumne jo geet gaya hai saath mere mujhe yaad hai “kasak”
Jab bhi chahunga inhe sunna tum khud hi inhe  dohraaoge !


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«Reply #10 on: October 14, 2010, 04:02:09 AM »
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ankhein bhar aai aaapka ye reply padh k intezar ji.....
bht dil se diya gaya reply hai ye...bht hi dil ko chhuta hua.....

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tu hi hai jo har pal kehta hai ye mujhse
dur tum mujhse chaaho to bhi na jaa paoge
aaj padhi jo teri baatein dil pukaar utha
haan ab tumse durr hum kabhi nahin jaayenge

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«Reply #11 on: October 14, 2010, 04:19:29 AM »
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aahhaaaaaaaa kya baat hai kapil ji.....kya mast likha hai aapne..maza aagaya padhke....
lijiye kuch aur meri shikayatein hain suniye aur jawab dijiye....
ab sir mat pakadiye...kya katun aapse sawal jawab me maza aata hai mujhe...
bas likhte jaiye mere sawalon k jawab....

Sunne me bht pyaari hai ye tumhari baatein
Hakikat me na jane kyun inpe yakeen aata nahin
Mana k chahte ho tum hume behisaab magar
Dil se ye kal ki judaai ka dar mere jata nahin.......
to b continued...

plz chk....
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-dard-e-judai/yakeen-aata-nahin-t59071.0.html;new#new




sabse pehle to main hath jod ke aapse dhera saara maafi maangunga ki kal aapki request poori nahi kar paaya main is theme pe poem likhne ki.. darasal aajkal system access ki kaafi dikkat hai aur office e to is baare me soch bhi nahi sakta itna load hai... par aapne mujhse ki hui request khud hi poori kad di.. hat off to you... thank you so so so so much... aur is tarha ki hai ki kya kahen.. bahut bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. dil ke ek ek part ko chhoo gayi aapki ye rachna.. ufffff... too much ho ji aap to.. too good... khair dusri baar aapko naraaz nahi karenge to reply sataak se likh daalaa... hope u'll like it....


tumse rishta mera aankhon ka nahi dil ka hai,
aankhen band kar tumhe hum mehsoos kar lenge,
kya hua agar kabhi tumhaara chehra badal gaya,
tumhe hum tumhaari baaton se pehchaan lenge,

na kabhi poochha na tumhaara naam jaante hain,
hum to tumhe tumhaari aahat se pehchaan lenge,
khone nahi denge tumhe is bheed me duniya ke,
hum tumhe apne dil ki dhadkano me chhupa lenge,

kya hua agar hum ulajh gaye apni zindagi me,
tumhaare liye sapno me hum waqt nikaal lenge,
yaad agar aa gayi kabhi tumhaari tanhaayi me,
to hum aankhen band kar tumse baat kar lenge,

chaahte hain tumhe tab se jab tumhe dekha na tha,
apni chaahat ko hum chaahat se pehchaan lenge,
'Kasak' tumhaari hamaare 'Hriday' me is qadar hai ki,
khaamoshi me bhi tumhaari awaaz ko hum sun lenge...

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«Reply #12 on: October 14, 2010, 08:48:45 AM »
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ji bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji... main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon jo aapne meri kavita ko pasand kiya aur itna pyaara sa jawaab diya... aur jo jawaab diya hai aapne uske baare me kya kahun.. bahut khoob diya hai... ye sawaal jawaa ke silsile ka hum bhi khoob anand lete hain tabhi likhte jaate hain aapke saath aur likhte rahenge jab tak likh saken.. thanks for being there for me always...


ye na socho ki main bhool jaunga tumhe tumhaari baaton ko,
dil me chhupaaake rakhunga ta_umra main tumhaari yaadon ko,
kya hua agar tumhaari aawaaz badal gayi, chehra badal gaya,
tumhe pehchaan lunga duur se mehsoos karke tumhaare saanson ko...

to b continued...


pls chk.....

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