Chale Aao...

by thycreator on April 21, 2005, 09:38:19 AM
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pandit
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«Reply #30 on: April 23, 2005, 07:10:07 AM »
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gud........................work.................. .....by......all................................. ...............................
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«Reply #31 on: April 23, 2005, 07:15:07 AM »
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Sandhaya ji........
Koshish ki hai manane ki wo sunta hi nahi hai,
Meri har bat ko bas ansuni kiye jata hai wo,
Iss dil ki tadap dekh kar bhi anjaan baitha hai,
Apne dil ki tadap ko bhi dabaye jata hai wo...


Creator ji..........

koshishe jari rakho tum apni
ki vo tuh bas tumhi ko chahte hai
vo baithe hai anjaan tujhse hokar
ki vo tuh tujhe satana chahte hai
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sandhaya
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«Reply #32 on: April 23, 2005, 07:17:42 AM »
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sukhriya   pundit   ji..................thanks alot........
 and good job by all
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thycreator
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«Reply #33 on: April 23, 2005, 07:19:03 AM »
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Sandhaya ji.........
Kitna satayegi mujhe,do raton se nahi soya hu,
Har pal uske hi yadon khayal mein khoya hu,
Aisa bhi kya satana ki wo palat ke bhi na dekhe,
Jane kitne aansoo uske judai mein mai roya hu..
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pandit
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«Reply #34 on: April 23, 2005, 07:19:05 AM »
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ur welcome sandhya ji............................................... ...........
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thycreator
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«Reply #35 on: April 23, 2005, 07:23:34 AM »
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pandit ji...kuch likhenge ya nice all aur welcome hi karenge..............
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sandhaya
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«Reply #36 on: April 23, 2005, 07:25:34 AM »
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Creator JI

mahobat ke tuh dard main bhi aaram milta hai
judai main mehbub ki dil unke liye tarasta hai
durion se tuh milne ki pyaas aur badti hai
dekhna tujhe bechaan karke vo bhi machalta hai
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«Reply #37 on: April 23, 2005, 07:29:36 AM »
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Wah Sandhaya ji.....bahut khoob....
Jante hai hum ye bat phir bhi ye dil darta hai,
Wo samne nahi hai,jane wo kaisi hogi,
Ek masoom si ladki hai wo,najuk phool hai,
Kaise bhala wo apna dhayan rakhti hogi...:-(
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Talat
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«Reply #38 on: April 23, 2005, 12:13:16 PM »
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Good work ....Amit.... sandhaya .............................
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thycreator
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«Reply #39 on: April 24, 2005, 10:03:26 AM »
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Good work ....Amit.... sandhaya .............................


Thanx a lot Talat ji................. Usual Smile
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pandit
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«Reply #40 on: April 24, 2005, 10:18:24 AM »
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pandit ji...kuch likhenge ya nice all aur welcome hi karenge..............



thy ji..............
kya kahe aap ko.......................
dil dard se kab khaali,
hum jakhm se kab khaali,
ye isshq hai cheez hi aisa hai,
ki ab hum hai har anzaam se khaali.
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«Reply #41 on: April 25, 2005, 04:08:00 AM »
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Sandhaya ji.........
Kitna satayegi mujhe,do raton se nahi soya hu,
Har pal uske hi yadon khayal mein khoya hu,
Aisa bhi kya satana ki wo palat ke bhi na dekhe,
Jane kitne aansoo uske judai mein mai roya hu..


ITna Tum ko Kaise satayegi...
Ek na Ek din To wapis ayegi...
Ake TUmhare Gale LAg jayegi...
Tum se door Kabhi na Jayegi...
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«Reply #42 on: April 25, 2005, 04:12:59 AM »
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BUHAT KHOOB PRINCESS...........TUM........HO................. ........HI..........SUPERB....................... ...



MERI DOST  JO HO



TUM JAISA KOI NAHIN...............................
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«Reply #43 on: April 25, 2005, 07:11:11 PM »
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Tumse bichad ke kaise hum jee payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Mana khata hui ki maine pyar kiya tumse,
Khud se bhi jyada maine aaitbar kiya tumpe,
Aaj tum nahi ho toh kaise hum reh payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Teri saanso ki tapish dilko mere jalati hai,
Tujse bichad kar milan ki pyas badhti hati hai,
Tujse ye judai toh ek pal nhi na seh payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Tere badan ki khusbu se ye aalam mehka hai,
Yad aayi hansi teri toh tan man mera behka hai,
Tere aagosh ki wo garmi kaise bhool payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Cahle aao har dhadkan bas tumko hi bulati hai,
Lahoo ke har katre mein teri hi khusboo aati hai,
Chale aao ki ab na hum kabhi tumko satayenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Tumse bichad ke kaise hum jee payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.



I dont have words ...ki tumne kitna acha likha hai........Really u always rite superbbbb........
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«Reply #44 on: April 25, 2005, 07:22:10 PM »
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Sandhaya ji.........
Kitna satayegi mujhe,do raton se nahi soya hu,
Har pal uske hi yadon khayal mein khoya hu,
Aisa bhi kya satana ki wo palat ke bhi na dekhe,
Jane kitne aansoo uske judai mein mai roya hu..


ITna Tum ko Kaise satayegi...
Ek na Ek din To wapis ayegi...
Ake TUmhare Gale LAg jayegi...
Tum se door Kabhi na Jayegi...


Wah Neha ji....
Hum bhi takte hai uss pal ko, wo kabhi toh aaye,
Kabhi toh aake mujhe khushi achanak de jaye,
Hum mar bhi jaye uss pal toh koi gam nahi mujhko,
Uske aagosh mein dam nikale toh jannat mil jaye......
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