Chale Aao...

by thycreator on April 21, 2005, 09:38:19 AM
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«Reply #45 on: April 25, 2005, 07:23:15 PM »
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Quote from: "nikki"
I dont have words ...ki tumne kitna acha likha hai........Really you always rite superbbbb........


Thanx a lot nikki ji....aap jaise dost ho toh likhne ka man hota hai..thanx a lot.....
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«Reply #46 on: April 25, 2005, 07:45:18 PM »
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U r always welcome...hope u like this one......

jab thi zindagi mein khushi hi khushi
na jante the kya bala dard hota hai
ab ..jab khayi hai khud thokar dil par
to har lamha jaise sard hota hai
aankhein gawahi deti hain haal-e-dil ki
dil jo bina awaaz kiye rota hai.

raat jo sitam dhati hai woh alag...
neend urr jaati hai pyaar mein yeh suna tha
khaylon mein aakar koi
khud hamare wajood ko hi uda le jayega
yeh to pehli bar hua hai.

na tha hume inkaar kabhi..
jo humne aaj kiya hai.
tha jo kal bhi beinteha,
aur hai aaj bhi..
woh tha pyaar, jiska izhaar na kar paye the kal bhi
aur na ho saka humse aaj bhi.
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«Reply #47 on: April 26, 2005, 01:09:25 AM »
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Sandhaya ji.........
Kitna satayegi mujhe,do raton se nahi soya hu,
Har pal uske hi yadon khayal mein khoya hu,
Aisa bhi kya satana ki wo palat ke bhi na dekhe,
Jane kitne aansoo uske judai mein mai roya hu..


ITna Tum ko Kaise satayegi...
Ek na Ek din To wapis ayegi...
Ake TUmhare Gale LAg jayegi...
Tum se door Kabhi na Jayegi...


Wah Neha ji....
Hum bhi takte hai uss pal ko, wo kabhi toh aaye,
Kabhi toh aake mujhe khushi achanak de jaye,
Hum mar bhi jaye uss pal toh koi gam nahi mujhko,
Uske aagosh mein dam nikale toh jannat mil jaye......


WOw...Beautiful...Amit!! KYa baat hai...And NIkki SIs...App ne buhat acha likha hai!!!!Really NICe!!
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«Reply #48 on: April 26, 2005, 01:14:22 AM »
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lakh koshis ki k us ko mana  laoon wapis
lekin mein us ka na la ska wapis
woh shayd kisi aur manzil ka musafir tha
jo na lout k aya hai aab wapis
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thycreator
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«Reply #49 on: April 26, 2005, 05:02:51 PM »
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you r always welcome...hope you like this one......

jab thi zindagi mein khushi hi khushi
na jante the kya bala dard hota hai
ab ..jab khayi hai khud thokar dil par
to har lamha jaise sard hota hai
aankhein gawahi deti hain haal-e-dil ki
dil jo bina awaaz kiya rota hai.

raat jo sitam dhati hai woh alag...
neend urr jaati hai pyaar mein yeh suna tha
khaylon mein aakar koi
khud hamare wajood ko hi uda le jayega
yeh to pehli bar hua hai.

na tha hume inkaar kabhi..
jo humne aaj kiya hai.
tha jo kal bhi beinteha,
aur hai aaj bhi..
woh tha pyaar, jiska izhaar na kar paye the kal bhi
aur na ho saka humse aaj bhi.


Really nice Nikki ji.............
Dard tere bhi dil mein hai,dard mere bhi dil mein hai,
Kya kare ki ab jeene ka dono ka ek sabab hai ,
Tu bhi dunia se khafa hai, hum bhi dunia se khafa hai,
Phir bhi jee rahe dunia mein,tamasha ye ajab hai.
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«Reply #50 on: April 26, 2005, 05:06:03 PM »
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WOw...Beautiful...Amit!! KYa baat hai...And NIkki SIs...App ne buhat acha likha hai!!!!Really NICe!!


Thanx a lot neha ji.....i am glad u liked it.......... tongue3
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nikki
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«Reply #51 on: April 26, 2005, 06:28:03 PM »
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thanx a lot Princy sis..n ..thy..
bahut acha likha hai...Thy.....

kyun hamare hi hisse ayi yeh tahayi?
kyun hamara hi dil toota?
kya bura kiya tha hamne ..jo saath khushiyon se hamara choota
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«Reply #52 on: May 07, 2005, 05:04:08 AM »
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Nikki ji,
Tum hi nahi ho tanha, hum bhi toh tanha hai,
Khud hi dekh lo, judai ki aag mein jal rahe hai,
Yahi hasil e muhabbat hai, kabhi socha na tha,
Ab yahi soch soch ke har pal hum mar rahe hai.
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thycreator
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«Reply #53 on: May 10, 2005, 03:08:12 PM »
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Jane kaha chala gaya wo humsafar wo humsaaya mera,
Kabhi wade kiye the jisne taaumar sath nibhane ka,
Aankhen thak gayi hai ab toh rah takte takte uski,
Kabhi toh hosh aaye usko bhi apne iss deewane ka.
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«Reply #54 on: May 21, 2005, 09:58:11 AM »
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Kahan kho gaye ho tum mere mehboob ab aa jao,
Ek bar aakar phir se mere dil ko dhadka jao,
Kab tak yuhi tadpaoge mere iss dil ko mere humdum,
Ek bar to aakam mere mujhe seene se laga jao...
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«Reply #55 on: May 21, 2005, 01:53:41 PM »
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Jane kaha chala gaya wo humsafar wo humsaaya mera,
Kabhi wade kiye the jisne taaumar sath nibhane ka,
Aankhen thak gayi hai ab toh rah takte takte uski,
Kabhi toh hosh aaye usko bhi apne iss deewane ka.

well written thycreator..............salaam
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«Reply #56 on: June 03, 2005, 02:47:50 PM »
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Thanx a lot Salaam ji...............

Dil ki choton ko hum sine mein liye jate hai,
Tumhara naam le le kar hi jiye jate hai,
Badi tamanna thi tumse pyar karne ki jalim,
Ab teri tasveer se hi pyaar kiye jate hai....
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«Reply #57 on: June 03, 2005, 03:44:32 PM »
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waah AMIT bahut khoob.....................

2 line tumhaari 2 line meri...

Badi tamanna thi tumse pyar karne ki jalim,
Ab teri tasveer se hi pyaar kiye jate hai....
kash ke tujhey bhi pata chalti intaha-e-mohabbat
mere ishq ki intaha dekh teri tasweer bhi roti hai

BOND
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«Reply #58 on: June 03, 2005, 04:30:40 PM »
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Dil hai betab milne ke liye
Nazrein hain betab dekhne ke liye
Ek bar chale aao
Bus ek bar chale aao!!! :cry:
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«Reply #59 on: June 03, 2005, 04:37:06 PM »
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Ho gaye HUM TUM juda... :
Kabi ye to socha na tha
Yeh sitam tu bata kyun hua?
Jiya na jaye tere bin SATHIYA
Yadon mein tu hai raat din saathiya!
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