Chale Aao...

by thycreator on April 21, 2005, 09:38:19 AM
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hina_chandni
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«Reply #60 on: June 03, 2005, 04:45:57 PM »
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Her yaad us ki bhula di mein nay
is tarah khud ko saza di mein nay
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«Reply #61 on: June 04, 2005, 06:32:59 AM »
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waah AMIT bahut khoob.....................

2 line tumhaari 2 line meri...

Badi tamanna thi tumse pyar karne ki jalim,
Ab teri tasveer se hi pyaar kiye jate hai....
kash ke tujhey bhi pata chalti intaha-e-mohabbat
mere ishq ki intaha dekh teri tasweer bhi roti hai

BOND


Thanx a lot bond....

Gar samjh jate wo hamare pyar ki gehrayi toh kya gam tha,
Usne toh kabhi iss dil mein jhank kar ek bar bhi nahi dekha......
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«Reply #62 on: June 04, 2005, 06:37:45 AM »
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Dil hai betab milne ke liye
Nazrein hain betab dekhne ke liye
Ek bar chale aao
Bus ek bar chale aao!!! :cry:


Kaun hai jo teri aankhon ko yu nam kar jata hai,
Kaun hai jo iss kadar se tumko rulata hai,
Agar wo pyar hai toh khud hi wapas laut aayega,
Gar bewafa hai toh phir aake aur bhi rulayega...
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thycreator
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«Reply #63 on: June 04, 2005, 06:40:20 AM »
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Ho gaye HUM TUM juda... :
Kabi ye to socha na tha
Yeh sitam tu bata kyun hua?
Jiya na jaye tere bin SATHIYA
Yadon mein tu hai raat din saathiya!


Judai ka gam iss kadar se sansar mein faila,
Dekhta hu ki ab log milne se hi darne lage...
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«Reply #64 on: June 04, 2005, 12:47:50 PM »
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Ho gaye HUM TUM juda... :
Kabi ye to socha na tha
Yeh sitam tu bata kyun hua?
Jiya na jaye tere bin SATHIYA
Yadon mein tu hai raat din saathiya!


Judai ka gam iss kadar se sansar mein faila,
Dekhta hu ki ab log milne se hi darne lage...
wah.............gr8 lines thycreator.............keep it up
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thycreator
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«Reply #65 on: June 04, 2005, 03:25:31 PM »
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wah.............gr8 lines thycreator.............keep it up


Thanks a lot hina ji.......thanx for ur appreciation........ tongue3
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myloveosho
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«Reply #66 on: June 10, 2005, 06:35:28 AM »
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wowwwwww ALL Kya baat hai Lovely....Amit..Buhat acha likhaaaa haiiiiiiiii
Tumse Door Reh kar KAise hum JEe payenge..
TUmhare Peeche To hum Daure Daure Chalen ayenge...
TUmhen ITni Chahat hai HUm se JAan...
Bolo KAise iss pyar ko HUm Thukrayenge....

Tumhari chahat main hum gum ho jayenge...
Tumhari in baton main hum kho jayenge..
Tumhara Pyar to hai ek khoobsurat pal ki terhan...
Bolo kaise Iss pal ko hum BHulayenge...

Tum ne humain chaha ha..hum bhi tumhen chahenge...
Tumhare pyar main iss duniya ko chorjayenge...
Koi humain kabhi nahi rok Sake ga..
Hum to HUmesha ke lye tumhare ho jayenge...

Tumhari inn ankhon ka noor banjayenge...
Tumhari har ek sans main sama jayenge...
Tum kabhi hum se juda nahi ho payoge...
Iss terhan se TUmhara Saaya BUn jayenge...!
buhat khoob princess21(januu)




bahut accha princess & u too fakharnaveed.

apke lavaz mere dil ko chu gaye.
yeh to mohabbat karne wale jante hain mohabbat kye cheez hai
khuda ki banayi sabse haseen cheez hai Usual Smile
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thycreator
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«Reply #67 on: June 22, 2005, 06:25:25 PM »
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Iss shaks ne hai naam liya uss ladki ka doston,
Jisne hame yahan par majhdhar mein choda,
Na jane kaun si majburi mein hui dur wo mujhse,
Hath chod diya mera jab safar baki tha bas thoda...
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myloveosho
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«Reply #68 on: June 25, 2005, 06:29:31 AM »
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Aisa na kahe...........
Uski har saans par mai ek jindagi luta dunga,
Mera sab kuch toh ab bas uski hi amanat hai,
Kya karunga jo wo hi nahi raha mere pas,
Phir toh har pal ka jeena ek kayamat hai....




aap ke pyaar ke lie dua maang rahi hoon

TAMANNA KARO JIN BAHAROON KI ,
VO BAHAAR APKE KADMOON MEI HO,
KHUDA APKO VOH HAQEEQAT MAIN DE,
JO SOCHA AAPNE SAPNO MEIN HO,
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thycreator
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«Reply #69 on: June 26, 2005, 08:17:15 AM »
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Wah myloveosho ji...........thanx a lot...

Khuda kare dost ki dua ye teri kubul ho jaye,
Ab tak jo yadon mein hai jiwan mein chali aaye,
Kab tak rahunga mai iss soone gulistan mein,
Kabhi toh aake wo mere dil ke phool khila jaye
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«Reply #70 on: June 26, 2005, 08:57:18 AM »
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Tumse bichad ke kaise hum jee payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Mana khata hui ki maine pyar kiya tumse,
Khud se bhi jyada maine aaitbar kiya tumpe,
Aaj tum nahi ho toh kaise hum reh payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Teri saanso ki tapish dilko mere jalati hai,
Tujse bichad kar milan ki pyas badhti hati hai,
Tujse ye judai toh ek pal nhi na seh payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Tere badan ki khusbu se ye aalam mehka hai,
Yad aayi hansi teri toh tan man mera behka hai,
Tere aagosh ki wo garmi kaise bhool payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Cahle aao har dhadkan bas tumko hi bulati hai,
Lahoo ke har katre mein teri hi khusboo aati hai,
Chale aao ki ab na hum kabhi tumko satayenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.

Tumse bichad ke kaise hum jee payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge.



hey u changed ur avatar, its cool buddy  :wink:  
this is a great creative work , wonderfully written........lovely keep writing and i will keep enjoying myself by reading it  tongue3  tongue3
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pandit
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«Reply #71 on: June 26, 2005, 08:59:46 AM »
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nice work by all.............................................. ............
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thycreator
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«Reply #72 on: June 26, 2005, 09:28:59 AM »
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Thanx a lot Unicorn aur Pandit ji........

Kab talak chalegi aise hi mere ishq ki dastan,
Kab talak tadpunga mai le le kar tera naam,
Kab talak chalegi yuhi judai ki hawayein yahan,
Ab aa bhi jao janam rah takta mai subah o sham....
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #73 on: June 27, 2005, 08:01:02 AM »
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bahoo sunder likha hai aapne thycreator ji...

"Teri saanso ki tapish dilko mere jalati hai,
Tujse bichad kar milan ki pyas badhti hati hai,
Tujse ye judai toh ek pal nhi na seh payenge,
Tumko kho diya toh jan hum mar jayenge"


bahoot gehraayee hai...aapkey lafzoon mein..


always Harash
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myloveosho
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«Reply #74 on: June 27, 2005, 10:33:27 AM »
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Wah myloveosho ji...........thanx a lot...

Khuda kare dost ki dua ye teri kubul ho jaye,
Ab tak jo yadon mein hai jiwan mein chali aaye,
Kab tak rahunga mai iss soone gulistan mein,
Kabhi toh aake wo mere dil ke phool khila jaye


shukriya

ZINDAGI WAQT KI MOHTAJ NAHI HOTI,
MOHABBAT SIRF EK ZAZBAT NAHI HOTI,
KUCH TO SOCCHA HOGA UPERWALENE,
VARNA AAPSE SE YU UNKI MULAQAT NA HOTI...
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